A Spike in Confidence - Page 03 of 20 by kitsuneyoukai < Submission

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TheDragonEmperor

10 years, 2 months ago

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Damn it! So close to that confession! Hopefully Spike will succeed soon.

Dachende

10 years, 2 months ago

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That look on Sweetie's face in th last panel!

I don't remember where I was going with that.....Anyway! sweet job so far, guys. As always, looks awesome.

VoodooKitty

10 years, 2 months ago

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http://s2.quickmeme.com/img/0b/0bea25e4fb3fab569ddc4f4...

KevinSnowpaw

10 years, 2 months ago

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awww do i sense a HINT of affection from sweetiebelle ;3

elderflowerpudding

10 years, 2 months ago

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@ KevinSnowpaw

i wanted to make the comic be about spike giving up on rarity and finding something mutual with sweetie belle. and i woulda if our sole donator to this comic, Code, hadn't stipulated that it be spikeXrarity :P

kitsuneyoukai

10 years, 2 months ago

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@ elderflowerpudding

eh, this comic will make up for us not letting spike bang rarity for real in the DYO comic atleast :v

KevinSnowpaw

10 years, 2 months ago

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@ elderflowerpudding

i must admit....I personaly prefer the idea of spike x sweetie belle or even apple bloo XD Rarity kinda completly ignores him DX

elderflowerpudding

10 years, 2 months ago

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@ KevinSnowpaw

yeah, i don't think they work that well together. but spike seems to just adore her for some reason. so i'm glad he's getting what he wants :3

KittyGuardian

10 years, 2 months ago

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@ elderflowerpudding

You are saying that as if there is actually someone that would work well with rarity...

TheAmazingPeanuts

10 years, 2 months ago

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@ KevinSnowpaw

I disagree on that.

Eeveeinheat

10 years, 2 months ago

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@ elderflowerpudding

SpikeXSweetie is best pairing in my opinion, wish it was so! I do have to wonder, why don't you draw genitals or anus on every panel? There are points on this that you could draw the anus on spike or Sweetie Belle. I feel that it would give the comic a more realistic feel, or as realistic as magical talking animals can get, and feel less fake. But that is just me, I understand why you don't draw it every panel, might detract from the story.

elderflowerpudding

10 years, 2 months ago

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@ Eeveeinheat

kit and i had a long discussion about this. it detracting from the story was indeed a minor reason we decided against full realism; but the primary reasons were:
(1) we didn't feel comfortable going against the show's style of presenting story segments;
(2) to emphasize the division this society makes between public and private. sex is an entirely private activity, partially explaining why spike got embarrassed of his boner on page 1 even though the norm is nudity. if sex were an activity acceptable in the public sphere, there'd be fucking in the streets, mares wouldn't try to keep their tails down, and spike woulda probably known all about sex a long time ago and been a little horndog by now. probably woulda thrust his meat at rarity through the doorway or something, thinking that would attract her to him. their genitals don't appear during story segments because they're not even on the characters' minds. when they are in private and sex is on their minds, genitals will dutifully appear.

shinazuka

10 years, 2 months ago

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@ elderflowerpudding

Awww, curses. There's not enough SweetieXSpike stuff out there in comparison to all the Sparity. Regardless, I may end up following this comic as it goes anyway.

ruink

10 years, 2 months ago

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interesting... you added the fire ruby from his birthday

elderflowerpudding

10 years, 2 months ago

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@ ruink

to suggest she remembers and values what he's talking about in that panel :3 ...or to suggest she's shelved the memory, however you wanna interpret it!

ruink

10 years, 2 months ago

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@ elderflowerpudding

I mean just seeing it. you remember this episode after all, so you probably catch my drift

charyoshi

10 years, 2 months ago

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@ ruink

It is obvious that Spike is talking about that specific episode right?

Daneasaur

10 years, 2 months ago

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Her grabbing his hands with magic, and the ruby sitting in the corner, are excellent touches. I do wonder if he's going to overcome his lack of speaking to her or if this is suddenly gonna jump in another direction...

Also, bogus points go to the writers (of the show) for dropping the ball on a sweet relationship between Spike and Rarity. Doesn't even have to be 'mushy', but the idea of him spending whatever free times he's not working with Twilight or at a get together with the others he'd be hanging out with Rarity. Simple stuff really.

elderflowerpudding

10 years, 2 months ago

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@ Daneasaur

yeah, it's sad that they didn't follow through on the "spike crushing on rarity" premise. it's shameful for any writer not to follow through on any premise. but with this one, it felt like they dropped a major element of the show. it just kinda petered out instead. thing is, you know there's like 1 guy on the team there that remembers it and wants it to be a thing, though, cuz of inserts like spike dancing to filli vanilli and watching rarity as he does.

Dragonlord354

10 years, 2 months ago

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@ elderflowerpudding

I'd say its because its made by Hasbro, to sell TOYS to little GIRLS who at their age think "boys are icky". Besides the fact that any tiny little hint at a relationship or romance, or heaven forbid SEX would drive the hair trigger, extremely sensitive, fire nukes at anything that could "corrupt our children" american parents to doing just that. Nuke the show with bad press and feedback until its either completely removed from the air or worse the freedom of writing is cut back until its on the level of generation 2.

elderflowerpudding

10 years, 2 months ago

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@ Dragonlord354

yuuuuuuup.

Daneasaur

10 years, 2 months ago

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@ elderflowerpudding

How about him knowing that she had a mindless crush on Mr. "I'm in one episode never to be seen again" and rolling his eyes at her efforts to 'woo' him by being someone she's not?

I thought for sure it was going to be something like Spike going to stupid lengths to sabotage their meetup, but instead he showed a level of maturity that was absurd and just was like "Pffft, it's just a crush. It'll burn out." meaning that he knows the difference between a crush and real love.

But yeah, Hasbro has stomped on other things.

Transformers Prime showed Jack and Arcee growing really close and damn near being lovers and the higher ups LITERALLY stepped in and said "Hey, I know it's a guy and a lady who spend all their time together and really got to know eachother, but you totally can't have them fall in love."

The writers were pissed and still managed to sneak in hints now and then in a similar manner.

Really though, the fanbase of both franchises already know that Spike is gaga for Rarity and that Spike will go to great lengths to make Rarity happy, be it anything from simple tasks to harming himself.

Even that abomination of an episode Dragon's Quest showed she'd fight other dragons to protect Spike despite him 'shrugging off' her affections early on.

elderflowerpudding

10 years, 2 months ago

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@ Daneasaur

yuuuuuuuuuuuuuuup.

KittyGuardian

10 years, 2 months ago

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When I read through this page all I could think of was ... sigh ...women. That's so typical of them in my opinion ... most of them at least. There are exceptions, but more often then not they are like this. @_@

NeksusCat

10 years, 2 months ago

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Poor guy.. The love is so abusing sometimes.. :C
Specially when it's onesided..

Labyrias

10 years, 2 months ago

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Ze plot thickensss!

Blackymoon

10 years, 2 months ago

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Really love how you draw Spikes cuddly bubble-butt <3

charyoshi

10 years, 2 months ago

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@ Blackymoon

I like dat sweetie-booty personally.

Blackymoon

10 years, 2 months ago

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@ charyoshi

Hehe, then you can have hers and I'll be taking that Spikey-butt <3

TheGamerGuy4000

10 years, 2 months ago

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I do hope this results in a threesome with Sweetie.

TheAmazingPeanuts

10 years, 2 months ago

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@ TheGamerGuy4000

I called it Sparibelle XD

LilJames

10 years, 2 months ago

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I like how chubby you make him look, like a little kid properly :3

Kuto

10 years, 2 months ago

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jee i wonder what kind of weird things are on that list

VioletEchoes

10 years, 2 months ago

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i have little idea where this is heading but i hope something romantic and sweet.

CyberneticCephalopod

10 years, 2 months ago

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always thought of spike and rarity's relationship a little like
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Pz26fcmq3S8

LatinoOso1965

10 years, 2 months ago

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@ CyberneticCephalopod

"	CyberneticCephalopod wrote:
	always thought of spike and rarity's relationship a little like https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Pz26fcmq3S8

Watched the video im 49 and that made me feels so old damn.......

OssuaryPariah

10 years, 2 months ago

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More. I need more of this.

ordaa

10 years, 2 months ago

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It will be interesting to see where this goes, other than the obvious of course.

SpiketheDragon

10 years, 2 months ago

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Dragon you over sequel or not, I still really like Spike. *cough*

LatinoOso1965

10 years, 2 months ago

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I never liked the Rarity and Spike relationship the story im writing my human will tell Rarity and Spike to go on several dates with each paid by the human of course a get to know each other. The reason why the human feels that Rarity wants the human and he feels that Spike deserve a chance to get to know Rarity in these dates and they both realized that they were not meant to be together thus say human suggesting another pony of Coco Pommel and they both hit it off and really like each other. But they are those out there still thinks that the Rarity and Spike relationship is possible, I rather have them go out on dates get to know each other more better to have that depth with both characters. If this where its leading to in the comic you are writing and etc as we speak, we shall see in future chapters in this comic.