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Little Tails 6 - Page 04
Little Tails 6 - Page 06
^_^ it beggins...

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male 1,194,836, female 1,085,118, cub 277,214, cat 213,988, little tails 835, annie 767, finn 229, elie 28
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Type: Picture/Pinup
Published: 10 years, 9 months ago
Rating: General

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GurahkWeavile
10 years, 9 months ago
That's harsh....
alfredofroylan
10 years, 9 months ago
Annie's mom looks hot.
bbmbbf
10 years, 9 months ago
Annie's or Elie's? ^^
alfredofroylan
10 years, 9 months ago
I failed at reading :(
AJDurai
10 years, 9 months ago
Aww, poor kids, they were starting to fall in love, until Elie had to move away.
rajak
10 years, 9 months ago
its cute, but  for me looks the tear like  sweat. ^^
bustermaru
10 years, 9 months ago
It's making sense now.
Boony
10 years, 9 months ago
Awe. That's sad.
PraeTheUnicorn
10 years, 9 months ago
second box should read  "She was such a pretty child, he didn't understand it yet but there was something.....
bbmbbf
10 years, 9 months ago
Fixed it now ^^ thanks for let me know
PraeTheUnicorn
10 years, 9 months ago
no probs I missed that second one
GeminiJC
10 years, 9 months ago
An adult figure! :3
Tycloud
10 years, 9 months ago
will they yiff at this age?  :O
CoffeeFox
10 years, 9 months ago
bottom left panel..pretty much needs re-writing. I've corrected it for you, sorry to be a Grammar Nazi.

"Ellie and Finn were really good friends, she lived in the house next to Finn's, and was used to coming over and playing together with him, as their parents were good family friends."
bbmbbf
10 years, 9 months ago
gonna fix it ^^  english is not my native lenguage.. so these kinds can be little frustrating for me
KNIFE
10 years, 9 months ago
Don't feel too bad.
English is frustrating for us natives as well. :)
ScottySkunk
10 years, 9 months ago
totally.
bbmbbf
10 years, 9 months ago
and fixed.. thanks for your help
CoffeeFox
10 years, 9 months ago
no problem :3
Keeran
10 years, 9 months ago
Also, another correction for the bottom panel.

For narrative Box #1
" Elie's mom fell in love with a wealthy businessman who had many firms worldwide. One day, Elie and her mom had to move as the man's work became more demanding.


Chain to narrative box #2:
" ...Though he was too young to understand, Finn couldn't shake the bitterness burning within his chest.


Easier to make text space and place more if a dramatic flair without making run-on sentences.
bbmbbf
10 years, 9 months ago
heheh.. thanks.. and i agree.. it sounds better..
Keeran
10 years, 9 months ago
Anytime man. English be one fickle motherfucker, nah mean?
Zehntacles
10 years, 9 months ago
Poor babies.  Good detail in giving them different clothes in each panel to show the passage of time though.  Lot of people would have ran with one single outfit the whole way through.
ScottySkunk
10 years, 9 months ago
Blue eyed kitty Rivals Annie's cuteness.
Lost love, poor guy.
bbmbbf
10 years, 9 months ago
:D :D :D i actually like Elie's look a little more than Annie's.. but Annie have more charisma ^_^
ScottySkunk
10 years, 9 months ago
Ellie has the cutest hair. Both are adorable. *Sneeks Aria into the background somewhere in tbe future pages* lol
LeydenTheWolf
10 years, 9 months ago
Aww. This was cute.. but I feel sorry for those 2 at the last panel. ;n;
CeilYurei
10 years, 9 months ago
Wait: How old are they all? I think her mom is the first adult body I have seen....
bbmbbf
10 years, 9 months ago
i prefer leave the age off all the character to the mind of the reader :)
CeilYurei
10 years, 9 months ago
Well..they seem to either be 12-14 or small older teens...
roninhunt0987
10 years, 9 months ago
a flashback, right??
thetriforceofdinner
10 years, 9 months ago
Ellies mom is hot
NeksusCat
10 years, 9 months ago
AutumnCore
10 years, 9 months ago
Tal parece que ambos se amaban.

4o panel: Leí "hombre rico". Se refiere a Benedict, YO LO SÉ.

Podría equivocarme.
bbmbbf
10 years, 9 months ago
heheh..
Makogrey
10 years, 9 months ago
this is very similar to what I'm dealing with right now. The girl I've been in love with for years that every time I get a chance to tell her how I really feel is dating someone
Taoaliah
10 years, 9 months ago
oh gawd...the cuteness! >:3
AnibarutheCat
10 years, 9 months ago
WAAAAAA! Annie cub!! es tan hermosa X3c
bbmbbf
10 years, 9 months ago
No es annie ;-) heheh
NinoFoxx
10 years, 9 months ago
Poor Finn  ;-;
bladenate
10 years, 9 months ago
En verdad un trabajo excepcional amigo mío jamás me dejas de sorprender :3
cesar23
10 years, 9 months ago
"A bitter feeling burning from chest" how can you health it how can you feel better about it?
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