bottom left panel..pretty much needs re-writing. I've corrected it for you, sorry to be a Grammar Nazi.
"Ellie and Finn were really good friends, she lived in the house next to Finn's, and was used to coming over and playing together with him, as their parents were good family friends."
bottom left panel..pretty much needs re-writing. I've corrected it for you, sorry to be a Grammar Na
Elie's mom fell in love with a wealthy businessman who had many firms worldwide. One day, Elie and her mom had to move as the man's work became more demanding.
Chain to narrative box #2:
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...Though he was too young to understand, Finn couldn't shake the bitterness burning within his chest.
Easier to make text space and place more if a dramatic flair without making run-on sentences.
Also, another correction for the bottom panel. For narrative Box #1 ~~~ Quote: Elie's mom fell
Poor babies. Good detail in giving them different clothes in each panel to show the passage of time though. Lot of people would have ran with one single outfit the whole way through.
Poor babies. Good detail in giving them different clothes in each panel to show the passage of time
this is very similar to what I'm dealing with right now. The girl I've been in love with for years that every time I get a chance to tell her how I really feel is dating someone
this is very similar to what I'm dealing with right now. The girl I've been in love with for years t