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Little Tails 6 - Page 04
Little Tails 6 - Page 06
^_^ it beggins...

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male 1,215,962, female 1,105,742, cub 286,235, cat 217,571, little tails 837, annie 775, finn 242, elie 28
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Type: Picture/Pinup
Published: 11 years, 1 month ago
Rating: General

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GurahkWeavile
11 years, 1 month ago
That's harsh....
alfredofroylan
11 years, 1 month ago
Annie's mom looks hot.
bbmbbf
11 years, 1 month ago
Annie's or Elie's? ^^
alfredofroylan
11 years, 1 month ago
I failed at reading :(
AJDurai
11 years, 1 month ago
Aww, poor kids, they were starting to fall in love, until Elie had to move away.
rajak
11 years, 1 month ago
its cute, but  for me looks the tear like  sweat. ^^
bustermaru
11 years, 1 month ago
It's making sense now.
Boony
11 years, 1 month ago
Awe. That's sad.
PraeTheUnicorn
11 years, 1 month ago
second box should read  "She was such a pretty child, he didn't understand it yet but there was something.....
bbmbbf
11 years, 1 month ago
Fixed it now ^^ thanks for let me know
PraeTheUnicorn
11 years, 1 month ago
no probs I missed that second one
GeminiJC
11 years, 1 month ago
An adult figure! :3
Tycloud
11 years, 1 month ago
will they yiff at this age?  :O
CoffeeFox
11 years, 1 month ago
bottom left panel..pretty much needs re-writing. I've corrected it for you, sorry to be a Grammar Nazi.

"Ellie and Finn were really good friends, she lived in the house next to Finn's, and was used to coming over and playing together with him, as their parents were good family friends."
bbmbbf
11 years, 1 month ago
gonna fix it ^^  english is not my native lenguage.. so these kinds can be little frustrating for me
KNIFE
11 years, 1 month ago
Don't feel too bad.
English is frustrating for us natives as well. :)
ScottySkunk
11 years, 1 month ago
totally.
bbmbbf
11 years, 1 month ago
and fixed.. thanks for your help
CoffeeFox
11 years, 1 month ago
no problem :3
Keeran
11 years, 1 month ago
Also, another correction for the bottom panel.

For narrative Box #1
" Elie's mom fell in love with a wealthy businessman who had many firms worldwide. One day, Elie and her mom had to move as the man's work became more demanding.


Chain to narrative box #2:
" ...Though he was too young to understand, Finn couldn't shake the bitterness burning within his chest.


Easier to make text space and place more if a dramatic flair without making run-on sentences.
bbmbbf
11 years, 1 month ago
heheh.. thanks.. and i agree.. it sounds better..
Keeran
11 years, 1 month ago
Anytime man. English be one fickle motherfucker, nah mean?
Zehntacles
11 years, 1 month ago
Poor babies.  Good detail in giving them different clothes in each panel to show the passage of time though.  Lot of people would have ran with one single outfit the whole way through.
ScottySkunk
11 years, 1 month ago
Blue eyed kitty Rivals Annie's cuteness.
Lost love, poor guy.
bbmbbf
11 years, 1 month ago
:D :D :D i actually like Elie's look a little more than Annie's.. but Annie have more charisma ^_^
ScottySkunk
11 years, 1 month ago
Ellie has the cutest hair. Both are adorable. *Sneeks Aria into the background somewhere in tbe future pages* lol
LeydenTheWolf
11 years, 1 month ago
Aww. This was cute.. but I feel sorry for those 2 at the last panel. ;n;
CeilYurei
11 years, 1 month ago
Wait: How old are they all? I think her mom is the first adult body I have seen....
bbmbbf
11 years, 1 month ago
i prefer leave the age off all the character to the mind of the reader :)
CeilYurei
11 years, 1 month ago
Well..they seem to either be 12-14 or small older teens...
roninhunt0987
11 years, 1 month ago
a flashback, right??
thetriforceofdinner
11 years, 1 month ago
Ellies mom is hot
NeksusCat
11 years, 1 month ago
AutumnCore
11 years, 1 month ago
Tal parece que ambos se amaban.

4o panel: Leí "hombre rico". Se refiere a Benedict, YO LO SÉ.

Podría equivocarme.
bbmbbf
11 years, 1 month ago
heheh..
Makogrey
11 years, 1 month ago
this is very similar to what I'm dealing with right now. The girl I've been in love with for years that every time I get a chance to tell her how I really feel is dating someone
Taoaliah
11 years, 1 month ago
oh gawd...the cuteness! >:3
AnibarutheCat
11 years, 1 month ago
WAAAAAA! Annie cub!! es tan hermosa X3c
bbmbbf
11 years, 1 month ago
No es annie ;-) heheh
NinoFoxx
11 years, 1 month ago
Poor Finn  ;-;
bladenate
11 years, 1 month ago
En verdad un trabajo excepcional amigo mío jamás me dejas de sorprender :3
cesar23
11 years, 1 month ago
"A bitter feeling burning from chest" how can you health it how can you feel better about it?
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