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Little Tails 6 - Page 04
Little Tails 6 - Page 06
^_^ it beggins...

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male 1,115,093, female 1,004,860, cub 251,004, cat 199,523, little tails 820, annie 721, finn 197, elie 24
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Type: Picture/Pinup
Published: 9 years, 11 months ago
Rating: General

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GurahkWeavile
9 years, 11 months ago
That's harsh....
alfredofroylan
9 years, 11 months ago
Annie's mom looks hot.
bbmbbf
9 years, 11 months ago
Annie's or Elie's? ^^
alfredofroylan
9 years, 11 months ago
I failed at reading :(
AJDurai
9 years, 11 months ago
Aww, poor kids, they were starting to fall in love, until Elie had to move away.
rajak
9 years, 11 months ago
its cute, but  for me looks the tear like  sweat. ^^
bustermaru
9 years, 11 months ago
It's making sense now.
Boony
9 years, 11 months ago
Awe. That's sad.
PraeTheUnicorn
9 years, 11 months ago
second box should read  "She was such a pretty child, he didn't understand it yet but there was something.....
bbmbbf
9 years, 11 months ago
Fixed it now ^^ thanks for let me know
PraeTheUnicorn
9 years, 11 months ago
no probs I missed that second one
GeminiJC
9 years, 11 months ago
An adult figure! :3
Tycloud
9 years, 11 months ago
will they yiff at this age?  :O
CoffeeFox
9 years, 11 months ago
bottom left panel..pretty much needs re-writing. I've corrected it for you, sorry to be a Grammar Nazi.

"Ellie and Finn were really good friends, she lived in the house next to Finn's, and was used to coming over and playing together with him, as their parents were good family friends."
bbmbbf
9 years, 11 months ago
gonna fix it ^^  english is not my native lenguage.. so these kinds can be little frustrating for me
KNIFE
9 years, 11 months ago
Don't feel too bad.
English is frustrating for us natives as well. :)
ScottySkunk
9 years, 11 months ago
totally.
bbmbbf
9 years, 11 months ago
and fixed.. thanks for your help
CoffeeFox
9 years, 11 months ago
no problem :3
Keeran
9 years, 11 months ago
Also, another correction for the bottom panel.

For narrative Box #1
" Elie's mom fell in love with a wealthy businessman who had many firms worldwide. One day, Elie and her mom had to move as the man's work became more demanding.


Chain to narrative box #2:
" ...Though he was too young to understand, Finn couldn't shake the bitterness burning within his chest.


Easier to make text space and place more if a dramatic flair without making run-on sentences.
bbmbbf
9 years, 11 months ago
heheh.. thanks.. and i agree.. it sounds better..
Keeran
9 years, 11 months ago
Anytime man. English be one fickle motherfucker, nah mean?
Zehntacles
9 years, 11 months ago
Poor babies.  Good detail in giving them different clothes in each panel to show the passage of time though.  Lot of people would have ran with one single outfit the whole way through.
ScottySkunk
9 years, 11 months ago
Blue eyed kitty Rivals Annie's cuteness.
Lost love, poor guy.
bbmbbf
9 years, 11 months ago
:D :D :D i actually like Elie's look a little more than Annie's.. but Annie have more charisma ^_^
ScottySkunk
9 years, 11 months ago
Ellie has the cutest hair. Both are adorable. *Sneeks Aria into the background somewhere in tbe future pages* lol
LeydenTheWolf
9 years, 11 months ago
Aww. This was cute.. but I feel sorry for those 2 at the last panel. ;n;
CeilYurei
9 years, 11 months ago
Wait: How old are they all? I think her mom is the first adult body I have seen....
bbmbbf
9 years, 11 months ago
i prefer leave the age off all the character to the mind of the reader :)
CeilYurei
9 years, 11 months ago
Well..they seem to either be 12-14 or small older teens...
roninhunt0987
9 years, 11 months ago
a flashback, right??
thetriforceofdinner
9 years, 11 months ago
Ellies mom is hot
NeksusCat
9 years, 11 months ago
AutumnCore
9 years, 11 months ago
Tal parece que ambos se amaban.

4o panel: Leí "hombre rico". Se refiere a Benedict, YO LO SÉ.

Podría equivocarme.
bbmbbf
9 years, 10 months ago
heheh..
Makogrey
9 years, 11 months ago
this is very similar to what I'm dealing with right now. The girl I've been in love with for years that every time I get a chance to tell her how I really feel is dating someone
Taoaliah
9 years, 11 months ago
oh gawd...the cuteness! >:3
AnibarutheCat
9 years, 11 months ago
WAAAAAA! Annie cub!! es tan hermosa X3c
bbmbbf
9 years, 11 months ago
No es annie ;-) heheh
NinoM4ster
9 years, 11 months ago
Poor Finn  ;-;
bladenate
9 years, 10 months ago
En verdad un trabajo excepcional amigo mío jamás me dejas de sorprender :3
cesar23
9 years, 10 months ago
"A bitter feeling burning from chest" how can you health it how can you feel better about it?
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