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Drafter/Colors:
kitsuneyoukai
kitsuneyoukai

Inker:[iconname]TrioMaxwell[/iconname]
Writer:
twilightstormshi
twilightstormshi

we're asking $40/page (up from $30/page last comic). that extra $10/page goes to XPFOddball, who is now inking for us!
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male 615,653, female 496,786, cub 121,898, bird 14,312, birthday 4,205, present 1,363, chick 557, blowing 309, priest 196, kazooie 160, gopher 110, breegull 93, banjo kazooie 87, kazoo 9
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Type: Comic
Published: 4 years, 10 months ago
Rating: General

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AJtheDogWolf
4 years, 10 months ago
Aw~ He's so kind to her.
You know, seeing the still picture with small pictures in the dialogue showing emotions, I think of an RPG game.
twilightstormshi
4 years, 10 months ago
that's the aim! i'm glad it's working ^-^
AJtheDogWolf
4 years, 10 months ago
That's good then :)
Escapegoat
4 years, 10 months ago
It's a mean world out there. How people are so cold for such low reasons simply dumbfounded me. As a Christian myself, I also agree that this kind of thing tends to happen in highly religious communities.
Think Salem Witch Trials.
This story is amazing, I don't care if there is ever sex, I want to read this simply because it's superbly written and drawn.
Absolutely amazing work!
twilightstormshi
4 years, 10 months ago
wow! thank you ^-^ i'm really gratified that my story is touching almost everyone this time around :3 and kit's always improving his art... with oddball's help too and his thick inking lines on the characters contrasting nicely with kit's backgrounds. i think we've taken a big step forward with this comic. = )
Escapegoat
4 years, 10 months ago
Well when you forge a team consisting of a seriously talented artist, a boundless and great writer, and a top-knotch inker, you tend to have a masterpiece ^^
twilightstormshi
4 years, 10 months ago
=*)
KittyGuardian
4 years, 10 months ago
In panel 6, is he cleaning it with spit? It was kinda my first tought as I don't think pure water has the viscosity to form a stable/any connection between the towel and the kazoo ... even for a millisecond. Thus in my mind it kinda felt like he is using something like spit or another weird cleaning product. True I am probably just nit picking, but I kinda felt I should point it out or at least just ask.
That said, I think the art and art style are amazing! :) Maybe even TOO good! As in ... kazooe looks so cute, that I can't imagine her in sexual situations at this point. But I'm sure you will find a way to do it. xD
Also does the father realize she is going to be a porn star? @_@ Having sex with a huge bear for thousands to see and touch themselves to? :P

Twi said she is trying to make the town's people more morally ambiguous then evil, and she is doing great in that aspect. However that doesn't mean I don't find them evil(or at least stupid!) for not helping the father to raise her, with donations or whatever. Ok, let's go with stupid!

PS. What species is the father exactly? He looks mostly like a bear, but his behind does not seem to support that theory. If it was said before, I must have missed it.:(  Plus I haven't played the game myself so I don't know what he was in there ... or if he even was in it.
twilightstormshi
4 years, 10 months ago
kit says the water thing is kind of a mistake but that it could just be a moment when he's pulling the rag away and there's some water falling in that space.

oh, he'll find a way to make her sexy looking ^~ cute sex is his thing, after all

the father, if he were to see her become a porn star, would probably blush and look away but leave it up to her. he seems to be more devoted to her than he is to god......

thanks for saying i'm doing well : ) the townspeople are a mix between stupid and blindly faithful, i guess. through it, you can see my very low opinion of sheeple irl :P

father dernan is a gopher : ) he's purely an oc and wasn't in the games
KittyGuardian
4 years, 10 months ago
Ya I did realize that fluid string has formed when he is pulling the rag away. But even so, the water would never form such a thick string horizontally. So I would chose to believe it is due to some sort of cleaning product he could be using. But like old folks do .. he could always be using spit. I like the cleaning product version better then spit tho. xD Tell kit not to worry about it though. Just trying to give some constructive criticism. :)
I tought/felt that he was still more devoted to god and is taking care of her because for him it's god who gave her to him to take care of, and he probably feels like he is serving god in doing so. Or I'm just confused because he is a priest and think all he does is in order to please god and/or do his bidding. xD
...and for the towns people... I would go with blindly stupid! If it was blindly faithful, they wouldn't go against the words/teachings of the priest in what is probably the only church in the area. xD Or maybe he is not as good of a priest as he is of an actual father. xD

PS. One thing I have been wondering for a while and I keep forgetting to ask. What page format is kit using? It looks different in size then his other comics.
twilightstormshi
4 years, 10 months ago
it's actually the same size page just rotated 90 degrees :P
brinsop
4 years, 10 months ago
This is a beautiful comic. Not just the artwork or the story, which are amazing, but the meaning that is behind it as well. There is too much intolerance in our world for people who are different. It is sad to say but true nonetheless. I agree with katauni. If there wasn't any sex in this at all I wouldn't care. Keep up the great work and I'm looking forward to what is to come.          
twilightstormshi
4 years, 10 months ago
thank you so much ^-^ in the coming pages, i want to keep generating the feeling that life is really unfair for kazooie compared to the average child in this world. that way, when she meets banjo, we'll know why she reacts the way she does. being purposefully vague since i don't wanna give it away.

and thank you for saying that be great even if we didn't put in porn too = ) we appreciate it; but, though it may be true, if we get the porn part right too and integrate the two, making the porn feel good because you know the characters so well, well... we'll have taken a big step towards accomplishing our mission. pretty much since kit and i met, we wanted to find some middle ground between porn for the sake of porn and artsy porn. we think it's sad that that dichotomy exists in reality (as well as in people's heads) because the plot of PORN porn makes no sense while artsy porn isn't hot because you're too concentrated on feeling things in the plot to fap or shlick yourself.

let's openly admit we all love sexual pleasure and give each other some actually good, well thought out material to give it to us... that is, instead of said dichotomy that is nothing but a symptom of a needlessly restrictive taboo on discussing and sharing sexual pleasure, a taboo based on puritan ideals that were silly from their conception.
zeba12
4 years, 10 months ago
This is a very good comic but don't get a bad idea of me by saying this but will there be any sex I'll still read it but I just would like to know :)
twilightstormshi
4 years, 10 months ago
yep! there's a very long sex scene (12 pages) starting on page 22.
there will also be erotic things happening on pages 16, 18, and 19.
19 will be completely composed of erotic cameos from other characters in the banjo-kazooie N64 games, but i won't be giving away which ones at this time :P
and i don't get a bad idea of you. kit and i can't wait for the sex either :3
KittyGuardian
4 years, 10 months ago
I did see your estimation of the sex scene length in previous posts and I wondered then as I do now... What the hell are they gonna do for 12 pages? @_@ ... a week of heavy BDSM combined with feral bestiality/zoophilia and group sex with the whole village? @_@
It's just ... I haven't seen you two do such a long sex scene before so it must be something BIG and long!!! xD
Also .. yep ... that's what she said. xD In this case it will probably be Kazooe who would say it too... *giggles*
ZincChloride
4 years, 10 months ago
This is asbsolutely heartbreaking. That said it's an awesome story so far. I'm glad to read a story that has good build up and story line/dialogue. Keep up the great work!
twilightstormshi
4 years, 10 months ago
thank you very much ^-^ we will keep it up; believe me, we're glad to be producing it. so much of art and writing out there is just shit on a page. (and i'm not talking about people who are really trying but are just underexperienced. i'm talking about people who think they're awesome and may even have a lot of technical skill but never improve and never produce anything with imagination.)
KittyGuardian
4 years, 10 months ago
They could just be into ... scat...
So producing shit on a page would be what they like and strive towards anyways. :P
ruink
4 years, 10 months ago
I like this part
twilightstormshi
4 years, 10 months ago
thanks :3
Daneasaur
4 years, 10 months ago
I am not religious, but I can appreciate the idea of a kind heart. <3
twilightstormshi
4 years, 10 months ago
i'm not at all religious either :P but i find that religions produce great stories
Daneasaur
4 years, 10 months ago
True, after all, some of the most told stories are in religions :3
grandphoenix
4 years, 10 months ago
This is my first coment on this site.
One of of the things I love is the well conveyed emotions. I also like the tone you set that despite the deep friendship or love we see between Banjo and Kazooie in the games, the bears and breegulls do not in any way like each other. It makes their friendship seem all the stronger.
twilightstormshi
4 years, 10 months ago
:o thank you for letting us break your comment cherry ^~ lol

what you said about the contrast: yeah, i think that's coming along nicely too ^-^ took me a while to learn that, if you want to make people feel anything in art, you have to show them the opposite and then destroy those expectations as hard as you can and as suddenly as you can like lighting a candle in a pitch black room. that's how you kindle the imagination.

banjo and kazooie are an amazing couple in the games because they have a real reason to be on the same team no matter what and just naturally fit together the way they stand up for one another. in the end, that strength that radiates naturally from their partnership (and, well, strength against all adversity) is what this comic is about; you'll see more as the pages go on. : )

i'm really quite proud of myself here. wasn't so much with dyo, but i am with this comic :3
Patralex
4 years, 10 months ago
I'm really enjoying the strong theistic theme here.
twilightstormshi
4 years, 10 months ago
arin was right. theming is super important.
LatinoOso1965
4 years, 10 months ago
Wow just wow this comic stirs up alot of deep emotions in me of my past. I read it and you hit this story square on the head on everything from the strong theistic theme to the pure innocence of Kazooie also don't forget this towns people with their quick judgement and cruelty making this comic so strong in the emotions and the simple expressions you three are a force to reckon with in the art/comic world i applaud you three on a spectacular job bravo.
twilightstormshi
4 years, 10 months ago
hey, thank you =3
LatinoOso1965
4 years, 10 months ago
" twilightstormshi wrote:
hey, thank you =3


Anytime this is the kind of talent that you should be so proud off. I can't say enough its in your comic right now that shows a greatness by your talents of you and your friends.
CodieCub
4 years, 10 months ago
This is turning into a touching and beautiful comic, thank you for sharing miss twilie and mister kit for turning it into a comic to share easier
twilightstormshi
4 years, 10 months ago
you're welcome, sweetie :3
matt954
4 years, 10 months ago
Will There Be A New Page Today.
kitsuneyoukai
4 years, 10 months ago
waiting on donations sadly. also i dont have the ink yet anyway, since oddball is busy.
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