Dragon You Over - CMC - Page 1 by kitsuneyoukai < Submission

12 years, 7 months ago

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lol, kit sends me the link over yim as soon as he's posted the page, yet i'm always the 14th or 15th person to view it according to the stats!

kitsuneyoukai

12 years, 7 months ago

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@ elderflowerpudding

when i first see it, it already has 2-3 views, like 1 second of up time =T lol.

DanteRageWolfington

12 years, 7 months ago

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@ kitsuneyoukai

neh, oh well....

Waylord

12 years, 7 months ago

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Hmmmm those this happen after spike and appleblooms incounter in the normal comic? or is it before that?

kitsuneyoukai

12 years, 7 months ago

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@ Waylord

this event takes place passed the end of the main storyline.

Waylord

12 years, 7 months ago

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@ kitsuneyoukai

sooo Spikes not just going to cheat on Twi again, But with 3 fillies one which he did already? Lucky bastard....

elderflowerpudding

12 years, 7 months ago

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@ Waylord

you'll see what happens with twi next page :P

Kuto

12 years, 7 months ago

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@ elderflowerpudding

watch i bet you twi is gonna approve of this. I Wonder are you gonna do the endings with celestia and rarity?

elderflowerpudding

12 years, 7 months ago

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@ Kuto

as soon as we hit $500 on kitchan, yeah

DarkTailskp

12 years, 7 months ago

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Edited 12 years, 7 months ago by Owner

@ kitsuneyoukai

Ah and here I thought this was taking place before she and Spike mated and it's how she got that imagine. XD Btw didn't you just make a plothole of sorts? In the mainstory diring AJ and AB's talk AJ talks about how Scootaloo got a hold of a camera pony and it's maybe why AB is so nervous, didn't that impy Featherweight and Scootaloo were "already" together? If so her being like she is here is out of context, or they were together but haven't been on a date yet but the lines makes it seems like what AJ said wasn't true or she was wrong. XD

Still a OK page, may skip the sex parts tho.

elderflowerpudding

12 years, 7 months ago

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@ DarkTailskp

it sorta is a plot hole yeah... but i never meant aj to say that they were a couple exactly just that they were interested in each other. apparently, everypony in ponyville knows about them :P

DarkTailskp

12 years, 7 months ago

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@ elderflowerpudding

Ah, well that happens to every writer at times.

elderflowerpudding

12 years, 7 months ago

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@ DarkTailskp

it certainly does :P people just make mistakes.

maybe, for the sake of consistency, we can say aj misunderstood :P

DarkTailskp

12 years, 7 months ago

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@ elderflowerpudding

Well she is honest but isn't her fault if she got facts wrong. XD

DeactivatedCharcoal

12 years, 7 months ago

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@ kitsuneyoukai

I LOVE THIS!
But I cannot understand...
This happens 2 Months after Dragon You Over? (I want to see how Amathist Sparkle grows)
And this will have more Clop (If it´s how is named)?
I really do NOT look this amazing comics, for "it", just for the story (You all can name me Freack, but is the truth...)
Now waiting for how this goes!

elderflowerpudding

12 years, 7 months ago

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@ DeactivatedCharcoal

we'll show amethyst growing in the princesses' ending. and yeah, this happens two months after dyo ends. things will become clearer on the next page. and yep, around 4 pages of clop. : )

KonaNosune

12 years, 7 months ago

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@ Waylord

I've Seen That Picture On Pokehiddens Tumblr...

milestails16

12 years, 7 months ago

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Well what'd you expect,Kitsune?You're artwork here is famous!You're famous!

FrostbiteTiger

12 years, 7 months ago

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aww shoot, there goes my chances with Scoots -^.^- lol

foxmcloud23

12 years, 7 months ago

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oh god XD this is perfect

TaylinSora

12 years, 7 months ago

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heck! i like where this is going! keep it up you guys! ^~^

Dachende

12 years, 7 months ago

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i liked the restof DYO, so i already know i will like both alt. endings

HazelandJohana

12 years, 7 months ago

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Personally I prefer RumbleXScootaloo, but whatever.

kitsuneyoukai

12 years, 7 months ago

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@ HazelandJohana

i had no idea who Rumble even was till i saw a screenshot that had him, i thought he was some OC =P

fastspeed

12 years, 7 months ago

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alrgiht the endings to this comic

ArcCahlon

12 years, 7 months ago

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can only do it when a girls presant huh? so she's going to show spike acting like a love struck fool and trying to show off? o.o

NeksusCat

12 years, 7 months ago

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My-my, that's looks interesting! :3c

puppydemon20

12 years, 7 months ago

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Do you guys still do live streams? Inkbunny doesn't tell me anything.

kitsuneyoukai

12 years, 7 months ago

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@ puppydemon20

i should of yesturday, but i didnt feel like it, and today aswell =x sorry. i'll try and stream when coloring the next page.

puppydemon20

12 years, 7 months ago

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@ kitsuneyoukai

What time do you normally live stream? Current time noon.

kitsuneyoukai

12 years, 7 months ago

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@ puppydemon20

50 minutes ago of your reply, about 2 hours from then. 5pm my time (EST) =T
edit: i dont bother streaming me drafting or inking the pages though, since thats really boring. so i should be streaming on the 6th and or 7th.

Juria316

12 years, 7 months ago

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Oh boy, I can't see this ending well. lol

KittyGuardian

12 years, 7 months ago

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@ Juria316

I know for a fact that you would be surprised. :)

Radiaction

12 years, 7 months ago

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i must see the rest of this.

PrysmTKitsune

12 years, 7 months ago

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i rather liked how it ended to begin with...though seeing spike get it on with all 3 cmc's is not something id say no to...just so long as he doesnt tick twilight off again in the process....i think poor spike has suffered quite enough already!

ExplosiveGigaDragoon

12 years, 7 months ago

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Those two in the first panel background, by the bushes... are they bucking? On school grounds, how naughty and perfect!

Ouros

12 years, 7 months ago

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Hahaha! Oh, jesus! XP

Vinylshadow

12 years, 7 months ago

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"Boys can only do it when there's girls present"

huehuehue...

firepanda

12 years, 7 months ago

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@ Vinylshadow

BOYS DO IT WITH BOYS TOOOO! AND TOASTER OVENS!

Vinylshadow

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@ firepanda

true, true

elderflowerpudding

12 years, 7 months ago

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@ firepanda

i guess ab doesn't think so

KonaNosune

12 years, 7 months ago

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@ firepanda

AND APPLES!!!

BunnyArtist47

12 years, 7 months ago

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So feather weigh not gonna get any "action" out of any of the fillies?

elderflowerpudding

12 years, 7 months ago

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@ BunnyArtist47

sorry :/ no. as much as i would like that, this comic is about spike.

LatinoOso1965

12 years, 7 months ago

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Looks like *puts on sunglasses* the story is dragon on *YEAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!*

KonaNosune

12 years, 7 months ago

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@ LatinoOso1965

YYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

LatinoOso1965

12 years, 7 months ago

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@ KonaNosune

"	duncan816 wrote:
	YYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEAAAAA AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH HHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

ROFL!!!!!!!!!!

DanteRageWolfington

12 years, 7 months ago

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@ LatinoOso1965

^^This^^

LatinoOso1965

12 years, 7 months ago

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@ DanteRageWolfington

"	DanteRageWolfington wrote:
	^^This^^

What? *gives you a idk look*

DanteRageWolfington

12 years, 7 months ago

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@ LatinoOso1965

your comment was AWESOME, and quite funny.

LatinoOso1965

12 years, 7 months ago

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@ DanteRageWolfington

Thanks I try and I'm here all week and in Vegas at the end of June

SiriusFace

12 years, 7 months ago

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This looks very promising.

elderflowerpudding

12 years, 7 months ago

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@ SiriusFace

yay ^-^

ruink

12 years, 7 months ago

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gotta love the shape tool!

nice shot of Featherweight and he looks good when the camera isn't around his neck

kitsuneyoukai

12 years, 7 months ago

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@ ruink

what about the shape tool? =T im gonna guess the lightbulb? i lucked out, since i needed to use up that space or have to redo the whole panel, because i had way more space then needed.

ruink

12 years, 7 months ago

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@ kitsuneyoukai

lightbulb is a shape in the shape tool. it's much better than a "ding" word. I like it though. see you next update

KonaNosune

12 years, 7 months ago

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Hey Kit/Storm. Have You Ever Worked With Pokehidden?

kitsuneyoukai

12 years, 7 months ago

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@ KonaNosune

nope, i haven't =T. i know of him though.

elderflowerpudding

12 years, 7 months ago

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@ KonaNosune

i talked with him once, but then he and i had a misunderstanding and went our separate ways. :P *shrugs* nothing really against him.

KittyGuardian

12 years, 7 months ago

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I have not really watched the show myself. Only seen short clips of parts of it and fan art. In the few places where I have seen Scootaloo, she didn't look that good even looked rather dull crappy.
...But here ... oh my .. she looks damn awesome!!! I know she is trying to be a tomboy and all ... but she looks so damn cute and even a little shy here!!! I love it!

Bastardcollie

12 years, 7 months ago

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It looks nice, but don't you think you drew Featherweight a little heavy?

kitsuneyoukai

12 years, 7 months ago

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@ Bastardcollie

in panel 1, yeah i guess alittle bit haevy i suppose :l its hard to draw skinny things, for me anyway.
it was my first attempt drawing him too =T so ... *shrugs*

koolkat65

12 years, 1 month ago

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"Boys can only do it when there's girls present." (the 'there's' should be 'there're' or 'there are')

I guess it's safe to assume she's never heard of homosexuality (and a couple of others).