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twilightstormshi
| " | lunchmoney wrote: |
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This was a logic-defying page that stormshi knows other rapists who haven't acted yet due to a shred of morals remaining have been waiting a long time to see. |
| " | kitsuneyoukai wrote: |
| alot of the reason its taking longer is my fault, since im trying to up the quality of the pages to make it worth atleast 30$ and get more money =/ since im living off this as my job (just barely making enough to eat :P). i wish i could get it done faster x.x. |
| " | i firmly believe that, even if there is a full-blown rape, the victim has the most important voice. not the victim's mother, not the victim's best friend; the victim. literally no one else experienced the situation in the way they did. that's why i gave applebloom that line on page 54, "i'm the pony that got hurt, so why's it nopony's listening to me?" if the victim truly manages to be in their right mind and forgive the rapist, then the rapist should be forgiven. period. by everyone. the thought of continuing to punish a person who has already reformed--in ANY situation--is repugnant to me, i don't care how angry anyone is at that person. i don't. |
| " | twilightstormshi wrote: |
| i wanna write some good books eventually. ..i've just never been able to stop thinking about things and questioning my own opinions. i think probably a lot of people do that? |
| " | Bledar wrote: |
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What I think is really witty about this comic is how you chose to get your message across. The first pages were all very erotic, and once all the sexiness got our attention, you brought up the issue you wanted to talk about. So it was a very good technique to use. I've seen morals being used in children's books, Disney movies and so on, but never in porn before :) |
| " | twilightstormshi wrote: |
| yeah, that's what i was trying to do, and it worked... but a lot of people seemed ticked off by it, necessary or not. and i can see how they would feel baited. there must be a better way to hook people on a story without making it feel like ALL porn or ALL plot. i feel like, in writing, if i ever have to make a choice between two extremes, then i haven't found the right technique for expressing what i want to express. necessity is the mother of invention =P |
