Why don't people understand that demons generally don't get the concept of gratitude. And that you can't rise in such a high position, in a society like that, by being nice.
Why don't people understand that demons generally don't get the concept of gratitude. And that you c
I mean, between Vivzi's Hell and Project Moon's The City, I think the later would probably be closer to what "Hell" actually is. neatly divided into 26 unique, but equally horrible places to live, where Human Suffering isn't only mandatory, it's also a business transaction (shoutout to District 21's T-Corp, who use Time itself as a currency and taxes your color away). Get sorted away to your eternal punishment and try not to get splattered by the monstrosities, corporations, or roving gangs that will happily turn you into a pile of gore for the funny.
Vivzi's Hell is closer to what I'd imagine the endgame of Anarchism to look like. A hierarchy of Might where one of the Strong Guys might be nice to the people they value, but most are just indifferent jerks at best who don't want outsiders stepping on their turf. Maybe one or two genuinely evil people, but most would just be detached and aloof until a turf war happens.
I mean, between Vivzi's Hell and Project Moon's The City, I think the later would probably be closer
Considering how much of Classical Literature that Project Moon pulls from, this might be intentional. Otherwise, hell yeah, peak dystopia crafting from the twisted mind of a burnt-out South Korean.
Considering how much of Classical Literature that Project Moon pulls from, this might be intentional
Long ago, when WNYE was broadcasting from my school, one of the transmitter tubes died and needed to be replaced... it was (I shit you not) 2ft wide, 3.5ft tall. and powered about 25,000 watts of radio power.I seen it in operation, the heat it generated, I was12ft away and I was basking in its warmth as I saw electron beams flow from the Cathode to Anode and around the grids. This thing was huge!
Something like that, on an altar, irradiating its radiation and heat onto the collective of worshipers bowed down on hands and kneels to it... I can see that happening.
A very large one... Long ago, when WNYE was broadcasting from my school, one of the transmitter tub
LOL! All this time I thought Manosa was a male! Not that it matters, great characters are not determined by their gender but by what they do in the story. Heroes can be male or female, that does not matter unless it is necessary that it does. Such for me paying attention to details until now! LOL!
LOL! All this time I thought Manosa was a male! Not that it matters, great characters are not determ
.. I'm really liking Lily. She's honest even when it can backfire, but she plays her cards face up. It -will- be unpleasant, but better than dying. Others could've not mentioned the unpleasentness until later, or dismissed it as a non-worth-caring inconvenience. But Lily gave the full info it freely.
.. I'm really liking Lily. She's honest even when it can backfire, but she plays her cards face up.
🤔 Mendax's body here shares some near analogs to the form Dr Kintsugi assumes for her sessions with her devotees. I presume that means it's a corrupted version of a more benign higher spirit for the world?
🤔 Mendax's body here shares some near analogs to the form Dr Kintsugi assumes for her sessions with
I really love this whole story! You've taken great care with the world-building, the characters, and their development. I'm always excited to see a new page posted!
I really love this whole story! You've taken great care with the world-building, the characters, and
Kind of, but that's not bad. I believe there are a few spots in the overall story that felt a little rushed, but I think that tends to happen with just about any story out there. I feel that's unavoidable, especially with how long this story is. Keep up the great work! I can't wait to see more!
Kind of, but that's not bad. I believe there are a few spots in the overall story that felt a little
Interesting design on Lady Mendax. After finally figuring out the screwmlin anatomy it was a little easier to figure hers out once that mouth was open. But I am curious about one thing. Are those boobs actually the chin? If so, that is some Bruce Campbell level cleft they have going on. Also just thought of something. Say Manosa can manage to make it to Esperanza and get cured. Then Sluthole Lily is free. I wonder if she could potentially end up in a loving, non-toxic relationship with Norbek? He seems to be recovering well and freed from the evil influence of the Circle of Chaos. Imagine what two imps actually falling in love and finding happiness could do if the others still down there find out. It could be a whole uprising if they learn they could actually find their own happiness outside of the Circle.
Interesting design on Lady Mendax. After finally figuring out the screwmlin anatomy it was a little
Yep, Mendax doesn't actually have breasts, those are her huge chin.
Regarding Lily, the next page will show what happens to her. Norbak is already kind of dating Drya, but I'm sure Lily would have no problem finding a caring lover who can teach her about consent.
Yep, Mendax doesn't actually have breasts, those are her huge chin. Regarding Lily, the next page w
Mendax is kinda cute. i like the spooky fake face and boobs thing. would be funny if she also isnt even a she lol but still has a teasing girly voice. idk i get shes like a monster but i still kinda like her. she still tries to appear cute and sexy. would super play around with that, dress her chin up in cute bras and such xD
Mendax is kinda cute. i like the spooky fake face and boobs thing. would be funny if she also isnt e
lol i wish there was like a ref sheet of her, im way to into this monster thing xD you draw really scary hot monsters and really hot monsters in general. idk im weird
lol i wish there was like a ref sheet of her, im way to into this monster thing xD you draw really s
