Dragon You Over - page 49 by kitsuneyoukai < Submission

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OmniMotionz

11 years, 8 months ago

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Yay! Now to follow an actual story line...... sort of.

Maxibull

11 years, 8 months ago

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PINKAMENA FTW!

S0n1cra1nb0w

11 years, 8 months ago

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Oh Celestia, even Pinkie looks so depressed
i hope she can help Spike for now.

SpaceShipEarth

11 years, 8 months ago

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A actually rather serious page

midnight66

11 years, 8 months ago

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well that's one of the running gags.

elderflowerpudding

11 years, 8 months ago

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@ midnight66

the cupcake bit?

midnight66

11 years, 8 months ago

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@ elderflowerpudding

yup.

arceus732

11 years, 8 months ago

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"Oh. You meant a real cupcake."
YA DONT SAY?! XD

ruink

11 years, 8 months ago

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interesting... and now comes the humbling of Spike....

PinkPony21

11 years, 8 months ago

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I don't like to point out flaws but Spike never did Fluttershy. He watched Fluttershy cop herself and he did the same while he imagined doing Fluttershy. Also I loved Pinkie with her hair down. YAY!

KonaNosune

11 years, 8 months ago

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@ PinkPony21

Ya stormshi please explain

elderflowerpudding

11 years, 8 months ago

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@ KonaNosune

he lumped her in with the rest because he feels guilty. he's also lying unintentionally, which will come back to bite him =P one of the drawbacks of releasing a story in serial like this is that people don't trust you to wrap things up in a neat little package like they would if they were reading a book or a printed comic.

PinkPony21

11 years, 8 months ago

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@ elderflowerpudding

Explanation accepted. Lies do end up biting the lairs in the butt. May Spike not face any more problems than he already has on his shoulders.

RainbowDash09

11 years, 8 months ago

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@ PinkPony21

Karma is a bitch. I Just hope spike apologizes or talks to twilight. telling her that he was baited and tempted to mate with other ponies. Serious Page.

PinkPony21

11 years, 8 months ago

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@ RainbowDash09

He was baited by Rainbow and Pinkie (Twilight not doing anything during Pinkie's lap dance) and his dragon instincts wouldn't let him stop until he had all that he wanted and more. Karma will be butting him so hard.

KonaNosune

11 years, 8 months ago

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@ PinkPony21

I'm worried for spike when A.J and Big Mac find out about Applebloom!

PinkPony21

11 years, 8 months ago

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@ KonaNosune

He'll pay such a price for that from those two.

GothGuru

11 years, 8 months ago

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@ elderflowerpudding

"	twilightstormshi wrote:
	he lumped her in with the rest because he feels guilty. he's also lying unintentionally, which will come back to bite him =P one of the drawbacks of releasing a story in serial like this is that people don't trust you to wrap things up in a neat little package like they would if they were reading a book or a printed comic.

You can blame Blake's 7 and Fur Will Fly.
Responsibility means cleaning up a mess especially if you don't think it's your fault.

elderflowerpudding

11 years, 8 months ago

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@ GothGuru

oh... ok oO

Coop

11 years, 8 months ago

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spike eyes off her vagy

GilPix

11 years, 8 months ago

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That one panel just sent chills down to my spine. o.o

FurryDoggo

11 years, 8 months ago

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Hmmm....wonder how Pinkie Pie will react to Spike's confession. If anything, it should go a whole lot better than with Twilight.

Nopast

11 years, 8 months ago

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dat reused pose x3

also, small spelling error in the very last bubble, unless it's grammatically correct~
He say "I know you can take this seriously" but shouldn't it be "can't"?

elderflowerpudding

11 years, 8 months ago

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@ Nopast

he means he thinks she's capable of it even though it's like she's been too happy the whole page

Nopast

11 years, 8 months ago

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@ elderflowerpudding

ah yeah, makes more sense.

Sorry for that brainfart there

Ouros

11 years, 8 months ago

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Aww! So cute! :$ <3

KonaNosune

11 years, 8 months ago

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DEAR CELESTIA PINKES FACE WHEN IT WAS OVER!!!!!!!!

Rylasasin

11 years, 8 months ago

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uh no spike you didn't cheat with fluttershy. You watched her masturbate and left her a mess to clean up on the window.

Psychovana

11 years, 8 months ago

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And everyone learned their lesson.

Radiaction

11 years, 8 months ago

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oh shit, pinkiemena

heropie

11 years, 8 months ago

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pinkie sad face is cute :3 and was spike walking in circles?

elderflowerpudding

11 years, 8 months ago

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@ heropie

yup he was =3

MooseJam

11 years, 8 months ago

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Serious reflection on what just happened and the repercusions that follow.

Aslermole

11 years, 8 months ago

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Edited 11 years, 8 months ago by Owner

Looks like now Spike has his claws full with this situation he caused in a way. Now he need solve it. Good luck, Spike. Let's hope it ends well.

CodieCub

11 years, 8 months ago

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oh my this can only end so many ways...

geurudo

11 years, 8 months ago

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Oh no, Cupcakes! RUN SPIKE RUN!

FlorpFlorble

11 years, 8 months ago

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To Spike I reply "They've essentially just spent all day saying 'Just one more drink couldn't hurt' to a person they'd inadvertently driven to alcoholism in the first place."

Pinkamena demonstrated that she realizes this even now even in the fifth panel.

I wonder how much responsibility stubbourn old Rainbow Dash is willing to accept for her actions?

I suspect Pinkie and Twilight will have to gang up on her ala Canterlot Wedding.
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PoC

11 years, 8 months ago

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Here we go, this is exactly what was needed here. Good choice, and well played.

Juria316

11 years, 8 months ago

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What's this? Character development and a story I can actually follow?! Such a strange new concept, and I welcome it. :D

okamifox

11 years, 8 months ago

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I'm liking how the the flow of the story is changing from all out clopfest to a serious talk of morals. I beleive even pinky realized this when she said " it's over".. She knew things went too far and although she probably enjoyed the plowing and it felt probably fantastic and gave her the best orgasm she ever had........ Um.. sorry I got a little side tracked there... ( ;>3>) Anyways she realizes what she did was wrong and that it led to Spike's mistake and actions. So in a way she probably feels guilty even though she is trying to mask it with her nativity so not to draw attention to it.. So in a way I feel bad for them both cause one, Spike has screwed up and will probably be facing many repercussions of his actions.. [ Seriously Spike you may wanna steer clear of Apple Acres for a while.... like a pony lifetime..] And second Pinky for trying to act like theres nothing bothering her when she knows she screwed up just as badly... Man what a story

Thankyoucomeagain

11 years, 8 months ago

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Edited 11 years, 8 months ago by Owner

@ okamifox

(puts fists to head and moves them away while spreading fingers out) PHHHEEEEEEEWWWWWW
That was the most awesome comment I've ever seen!

okamifox

11 years, 8 months ago

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@ Thankyoucomeagain

"	Thankyoucomeagain wrote:
	(puts fists to head and moves them away while spreading fingers out) PHHHEEEEEEEWWWWWW That was the most awesome comment I've ever seen!

dunno if real honestly, or good sarcasm xD

Thankyoucomeagain

11 years, 8 months ago

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@ okamifox

Real

adekgol10

11 years, 8 months ago

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Oh, so sweet. Now I wait for Twi to come to them and forgive him, seeing her own fault in letting things to go so far without control and then... massive Ponyville "I'm sorry" orgy?

Risuaita

11 years, 8 months ago

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There is a bit too much text in the speech bubbles. So much to read at once makes you bored :/

KittyGuardian

11 years, 8 months ago

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@ Risuaita

Sooooo....
I am guessing, you never read any stories. Just here for the naughty art, I suppose? I guess everyone likes different things.

Risuaita

11 years, 8 months ago

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@ KittyGuardian

Absolutely the opposite. It is just so tiring to read anything if there is so much stuff in one panel and the whole page is full of stuff. Like in Death Note it gives you so much stuff to read that your head is about to expload, but something like Spider Man has good pacing while the characters go trough conversations.

elderflowerpudding

11 years, 8 months ago

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@ Risuaita

this is a really good point. in comics and shows, infodumps are a symptom of bad pacing and/or a plot that's too complicated.

Risuaita

11 years, 8 months ago

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@ elderflowerpudding

Yes. Even thought the characthers go trough alot of thoughts it shouldn't be shoved all in too tiny space.
We will get more into the character and feel as he did if the comics takes time with the thoughts

DarkTailskp

11 years, 8 months ago

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Edited 11 years, 8 months ago by Owner

Step 4, guilt and admitting your mistakes.

EDIT:Wait wait he didn't mate with Fluttershy, he just watched her.

Vinylshadow

11 years, 8 months ago

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Oh God, Pinkamena Diane Pie...

Tacoart

11 years, 8 months ago

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"I already know, I planted gummy on your back before you left" *spike turns around and suddenly gummy!

rudneve

11 years, 8 months ago

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Not sure if anyone else gets this problem, but when I go to the voting page it gets covered up by the comic.

kitsuneyoukai

11 years, 8 months ago

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@ rudneve

sometimes that happens when the paypal widget takes to long to load or something =P i had it happen too.

Thankyoucomeagain

11 years, 8 months ago

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I see that most people are voting for the cutie mark crusaders but dont you think that he should be with rarity? I mean, i know its just a comic but they are technically still children and it seems a little wrong... I just think spike should finish his life goal and finally be with rarity is all...

FrostedPony

11 years, 8 months ago

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@ Thankyoucomeagain

Spike is like the same age as the cutie mark crusaders, if not younger.

Thankyoucomeagain

11 years, 8 months ago

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@ FrostedPony

Ohhhh sorry its just the way that fluttershy said "And you did this to a filly?"

Ukir4321

11 years, 8 months ago

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Swag.mov came out and now this :D Awesome

SilverSpectre

11 years, 8 months ago

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Spike, if you're not going to eat the cupcake, GIVE IT TO ME! >:U *desires a nom*

GabrielGatto

11 years, 8 months ago

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I'd just like to point out that Twilight and Spike never officially said "we are together", and even if they did, shouldn't Twilight be mad that her friends fucked her boyfriend?

FrostedPony

11 years, 8 months ago

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@ GabrielGatto

They did say they loved each other and Spike did knock her up.