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ThunderSnow88

11 years, 8 months ago

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I hope they forgive him...

Drizzt248

11 years, 8 months ago

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Nice, I didn't like that last page though (when twi got angry)

Tambur

11 years, 8 months ago

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I like spike's giant fat ass on the second to last panel lol

FurryDoggo

11 years, 8 months ago

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And so it begins, Spike's quest to gain the forgiveness of the others. Twilight's sort of a question mark for now, and Fluttershy will be a bit difficult as well. It's good to see Pinkie forgiving Spike so easily, and I'm sure Rainbow Dash won't be a problem.

The apology that should be the most interesting is the one for Apple Bloom. But instead of thinking about it, I'll just wait and see what happens.

This is one of my favorite comics, and I'll continue to follow it 'til the very end!

Coop

11 years, 8 months ago

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1/6 forgiven

ruink

11 years, 8 months ago

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apparently, two down

elderflowerpudding

11 years, 8 months ago

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@ ruink

nah, rd doesn't know anything that happened yet. all she knows is that spike was happy with the blowjob she gave him and that he had a fun birthday party =P

ruink

11 years, 8 months ago

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@ elderflowerpudding

noted. either way, she'll prolly let it slide

RainbowDash09

11 years, 8 months ago

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@ elderflowerpudding

Erhmm, Question. After he apologizes, will the comic end right after the apologies? Or like will it show spike's egg hatching? and all of that other stuff....

elderflowerpudding

11 years, 8 months ago

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@ RainbowDash09

i won't reveal the end, but there will be 5-8 pages after he finishes apologizing =3

BassZ1890

11 years, 8 months ago

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I hope AJ and Big Mac are not going to forgive him for what he did to a little filly, the way he acted.

Yurusa

11 years, 8 months ago

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Man... I was hoping an alternate end would of been Spike x Rainbow Dash just cause Rainbow Dash deserves it... I mean to see how Rainbow Dash really likes Spike... oh well. A Spike x Zecora would of been interesting to see how you could get those 2 together honestly haha

elderflowerpudding

11 years, 8 months ago

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@ Yurusa

if you'd like, i'll post plot summaries of the alternate endings that don't win =o

CrazyGrapefruit

11 years, 8 months ago

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@ elderflowerpudding

I'll be more than happy take you up on that offer. This is one of those stories that I can imagine spiraling off in a dozen different directions and some of the ones you've taken looked charming/cute/sexy as hell. =D

Yurusa

11 years, 8 months ago

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@ elderflowerpudding

That'd be great, hehe, thanks twlightstormshi

NotAvailableToView

11 years, 8 months ago

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Im gonna make a hard leather back cover for this. One of the most well designed and interesting comics I have seen on here for a loooooooong while.

elderflowerpudding

11 years, 8 months ago

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@ NotAvailableToView

a... hard leather back cover? like something to put on a binding of the comic? =O

NotAvailableToView

11 years, 8 months ago

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@ elderflowerpudding

sort of

elderflowerpudding

11 years, 8 months ago

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@ NotAvailableToView

well be sure to post a picture when you have it <3

RainbowDash09

11 years, 8 months ago

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This is actually turning out good. But tbh, I feel bad for spike, it wasnt entirely his fault.

KonaNosune

11 years, 8 months ago

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I'm scared for spike when he goes to apologize to AJ Bigmac Granny Smith and Applebloom!

heropie

11 years, 8 months ago

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after spike says sorry, i hope the girls say sorry to him as well. its only fair

elderflowerpudding

11 years, 8 months ago

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@ heropie

i hope so too =x

ZebraAD

11 years, 8 months ago

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I love the story so far..... And the sex o//o... But I really enjoy reading your comics ^w^

elderflowerpudding

11 years, 8 months ago

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@ ZebraAD

thank you <3 that makes both kit and me very happy =3

FlorpFlorble

11 years, 8 months ago

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Pinkie forgives you for being coerced into sex with her?!

That's... Christ. Seriously?! Seri- No. Nope. Nope nope nope nope nope.

Pinkie, last chapter you proved that you acknowledge responsibility for this clusterfuck, or at least part of it. Hell, you left a trail of candy directly into your genitalia. I mean, seriously, I cannot think of an analogy more blatantly obvious than-

Oh, but Spike's willing to take the blame for you, so you might as well jump all the fuck over this oppurtunity.

Flips Equestria

okamifox

11 years, 8 months ago

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@ FlorpFlorble

FlorpFlorble wrote:

LMAO, sounds like the typical Plot hole you'll see on the show on a regular basis, I'll pass it... Also.... SPIKE WHAT ARE YOU CRAZY YOU'LL GET SKINNED ALIVE AND BE MADE INTO A DRAGON SKIN CHAIR FOR THE APPLE FAMILY TO SIT ON! DO NOT GO TO SWEET APPLE ACRES!!! 8( )

elderflowerpudding

11 years, 8 months ago

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@ FlorpFlorble

outraged over a point i was trying to make, yup *shades*

pinkie is -still- coercing spike so she doesn't have to take responsibility. she doesn't mean to, but... oh, you'll see.

but you can tell pinkie is still angry because she agrees that he's not a real dragon [panel 4]. inside, she doesn't want anything to do with this anymore because she's upset about something that she's not telling spike [pinkamena from the last page]! also, spike doesn't feel sorry for what he did because he was baited, but he feels sorry for himself and just wants it all over with [his expression in panel 4].

no one's actually dealing with the problem, just beating around the bush. playing hot potato with responsibility for the situation.

may seem stupid to you right now because the later pages aren't out, and you have no choice but to take things at face value. but it'll be fine and not stupid. seriously, just wait and see what happens.

kztxl7

11 years, 8 months ago

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@ elderflowerpudding

Yeah. This is what I was wondering about.

I was personally wondering if they would each take responsibility for what the coerced him into and their parts in this.

Vinylshadow

11 years, 8 months ago

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I sense an Orgy >.>

frostcat

11 years, 8 months ago

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I know that AJ will be pissed about what happened to Applebloom. I'm still upset that the smartest of the six can be easily mad and unforgiving...at least for now.

elderflowerpudding

11 years, 8 months ago

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@ frostcat

yeah, i know what you mean =/ it's honestly quite tough to write these characters angry because they're so fluffy and loving in show! and even when they do get angry in show, it's just cartoony. if i were reading this comic as a member of the audience, i'd be upset too. everyone (including spike) is a little bit out of his or her mind. we'll have to see if they can pull the kindness back out.

it's really interesting seeing how our viewers are reacting to this odd portrayal of their beloved characters.

Maxibull

11 years, 8 months ago

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its time to the redemption

RaveRaptor

11 years, 8 months ago

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Why can't Kandy Kicker's name be Kandy Kicker Kate?

DarkTailskp

11 years, 8 months ago

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*Reads* Oh dear sweet Celestia...Applejack is gonna murder him...the others might forgive him but she...might hold some hate at him for a while, or dear Big Mac. 0_o..........Spike, I wish you extreme luck.

CodieCub

11 years, 8 months ago

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This will be a long walk with a long talk, Twilightstormshi you've out done yourself in terms of making people feel stuff about fictional characters, I am literally on the edge of my seat for more

MalissaR

11 years, 8 months ago

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I'm freaking out........ when will the next page be out AHHHHHHHHH!!!!!

elderflowerpudding

11 years, 8 months ago

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@ MalissaR

probably this evening = )

MalissaR

11 years, 8 months ago

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YAY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

RainbowdashUSA

11 years, 2 months ago

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so... since spike mated with applebloom when she was in heat... wouldn't she be pregnant too?

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