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Drawing from 2021, revised in 2024~
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It’s been a while since I last wrote a story in dialogue format x.x

I want to apologize in advance to anyone reading this, especially if you're from Northern Ireland or the UK. These characters are meant to be from Northern Ireland. I don’t speak English fluently; I’m just a Spaniard trying to learn with limited help from Google. I’d be grateful for any advice on how to improve what’s written.

It was a typical day: cloudy and cold, with the constant threat of rain. Classes passed without incident, and as usual, Evelyn was one of the last to leave the classroom. Her friend Kara waited patiently for her.

As they left school, Kara asked Evelyn to wait for a moment as she wanted to stop by the convenience store for a coffee. That afternoon, they were heading to Evelyn's house to study. While Evelyn waited alone, Andrea appeared unexpectedly and shoved her roughly, causing her to fall to the ground.

With a sneer, Andrea leaned over Evelyn, who was trying to get up.

—Look who’s here, the same old daft wee eejit.

Trembling with fear, Evelyn could barely speak. Her eyes showed her terror as she instinctively raised a hand to protect herself. Words stuck in her throat.

Andrea relished the scene and, with a cruel smile, crouched to her level.

—What's the craic, ya wee freak? Can’t you pick yerself up?

Evelyn's voice came out as an inaudible murmur. Her body shook, and she desperately sought help with her eyes, as if trapped in a nightmare.

Andrea stood up, crossing her arms, and looked at her with disdain.

—Pathetic, are ye that weak ye can’t even speak? —With a swift motion, she kicked Evelyn in the side.

Evelyn let out a cry of pain, trying to hold back tears.

At that moment, Kara exited the store and saw everything: how Andrea had kicked her friend on the ground and how she was mercilessly mocking her. Outraged, Kara dropped her coffee and quickly moved towards them, placing herself between Evelyn and her bully.

Andrea let out a chuckle and, with sarcasm in her voice, said:

—Oh, look who’s rocked up, the big knight in shining armour lookin' for her damsel in distress.

—Enough of that! Why don't you pick on someone your own size? —Kara exclaimed, her voice full of fury.

Andrea tried to maintain her arrogant stance, but her eyes showed caution.

—Calm your knickers Kara, I was only messing with Evie.

Kara wasn't fooled.

—Yeah, 'cause kicking someone when they're down is just fucking hilarious —she replied with biting sarcasm.

Andrea shrugged, trying to appear indifferent.

—Ah, it's no big deal. She’ll be grand. Anyway, if she can’t handle a wee shove, what’s she gonna do in life? It’s all for her own good, like.

—Do you really believe that? —Kara's anger was growing—. All you do is hurt her because you're insecure. —She stepped forward, forcing Andrea to step back—. If you really cared, you'd stop bullying her and find another way to deal with your insecurities.

Andrea raised an eyebrow and let out a mocking laugh.

—Insecurity? I dunno what yer on about. I'm just havin' a bit of craic with her, not like I’m really hurtin' her. Besides, it’s her own fault; if she was a bit tougher, I wouldn’t be able to wind her up so easy.

—You're definitely hurting her! You just enjoy seeing her suffer. And it's not her fault she's kind and shy; that's just who she is! —Kara let out a frustrated huff.

Andrea's smile faded slightly.

—Huh? are ya sweet on her or what? Right, I’ll leave your wee girlfriend alone for today, then.—With one last provocative comment, she walked away.

The mention of the word "girlfriend" made Evelyn's body tense even more. Her eyes widened slightly, and although she was still on the ground, she could feel her heart pounding in her chest. Her cheeks flushed slightly with nervous embarrassment.

Once Andrea was far enough away, Kara turned to her friend, still on the ground. She crouched down and offered her hand.

—Come on, get up —she said kindly but firmly.

Evelyn looked up, still scared, and took her friend's hand. Once on her feet, she leaned against the wall, massaging her aching side.

Kara grimaced as she saw her friend rubbing her side.

—Are you alright? Does it hurt? —she asked, concerned.

—I'm fine —muttered Evelyn, embarrassed by her lack of strength—. It just hurts a little. We can still go to my house to study.

Kara sighed and nodded, offering her an encouraging smile.

—Let's go to your house. —She walked beside her, matching her slow pace.

As they walked, it was clear that Evelyn was still shaken. She kept her eyes down and her steps were unsteady. When they arrived at the house, Evelyn took out her keys and unlocked the door. The house was silent, indicating her mother wasn't home.

Once inside, Kara helped Evelyn settle on the couch.

—Do you want something for the pain? Water, ice? —she asked, looking for something that could help.

Evelyn shook her head, still trying to regain her composure.

—I'm alright. Thanks for standing up for me —she said with a shy smile.

Kara nodded and sat down next to her.

—Always. No one has the right to treat you like that. You're strong, even if you don't see it now. You're not alone.

Evelyn felt warmth in her heart at her friend's words. Despite the fear and pain, she knew she could count on Kara. And that friendship, that unconditional support, was what truly mattered.

Ft. characters from left to right:
Evelyn, Kara

and Andrea

Keywords

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Published: 2 months, 1 week ago

Rating: Mature

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Conqueeftador

2 months, 1 week ago

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YEAAHH GET HER ASS

KDraws

1 month, 3 weeks ago

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@ Conqueeftador

Heck yeah! She doesn’t stand a chance when facing an angry hyena like Kara! >=3

TobyBaggins

2 months, 1 week ago

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Edited 2 months, 1 week ago by Owner

💖💖 I really liked the story and I think you did a wonderful job with the writing. I am no good with accents, but it sounded good. Whether or not the accent is right I leave up to the peeps from those locations.

I love how Kara came to Evelyn's rescue and could feel the emotion in her conviction to protect her friend. I have to say Andrea is an interesting character. She's a bully, but the pause she gave to Kara makes me wonder if deep down she could be a better person if shown the way. And poor Evelyn. Being the target of Andrea is so unfair, and that low blow of Andrea mockingly calling Kara her girlfriend when she secretly has feeling for her friend must have hurt as much as the kick to her side.

And this is all combined with the beautiful art that really shows off and sets the scene so well. Kara's anger, Evelyn's fear and Andrea's dismissive attitude is wonderfully illustrated. *hugs* Well done!

[P.S. Oh and not to mention the tragic loss of coffee "cries" 😭 ]

KDraws

1 month, 3 weeks ago

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@ TobyBaggins

Oh, the accent works? That’s such a relief! Thanks so much <3 I was a little worried about that part, so I’m really glad you think it came across well. And yes, Andrea is a total bully, definitely not someone you’d want as an enemy. I’m so happy you enjoyed the story, the characters, and the art. Your feedback really means a lot to me! Poor Evelyn really had it rough, especially with Andrea hitting her where it hurts most, both emotionally and physically. And don’t even get me started on the tragic coffee spill… XD

cries along

cesar23

2 months, 1 week ago

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Vaya, pues la verdad me ha gustado mucho el resultado final sobre todo debo admitir que la expresión de Kara Hace justicia a su especie, ya sabes cómo se ponen los Caninos cuando están furiosos es el tipo de expresión que me recuerda y sobre la historia, pues la leí y creo que el punto que más me hace gracia, y a la vez me enfada es el comportamiento de Andrea diciendo” Lo hago por su propio bien” Me parece un una psicópata Con ese comportamiento tan pasivo agresivo, creo que es el tipo de persona que no quieres de Enemiga. 👏 👏 👏

KDraws

1 month, 3 weeks ago

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@ cesar23

X'D si, ella es así. Si has tenido la mala suerte de lidiar con alguien como Andrea, creo que entenderás perfectamente como es...
Muchísimas gracias por tu opinión ^^ lo aprecio mucho >w<

ElfenSciuridae

2 months, 1 week ago

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Great art! Better story!

KDraws

1 month, 3 weeks ago

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@ ElfenSciuridae

Thank you so much! Hearing you enjoyed both the art and the story really means a lot to me. Your support keeps me going!❤️❤️

PrincessTwi

2 months, 1 week ago

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I would protect Evie too, she's a cutie

KDraws

1 month, 3 weeks ago

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@ PrincessTwi

Aww, would you really? That’s so sweet of you! Evelyn would definitely appreciate someone like you in her corner!❤️

PrincessTwi

1 month, 3 weeks ago

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@ KDraws

Yeah for sure

NeksusCat

2 months, 1 week ago

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If I were there, that cup of coffee was going straight to that bitch's face! >:T

KDraws

1 month, 3 weeks ago

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@ NeksusCat

Haha, right? That cup of coffee would be flying like a comet straight into her face! No mercy! XD

rednet111

2 months, 1 week ago

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Such a beautiful picture and such an emotional story absolutely amazing

KDraws

1 month, 3 weeks ago

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@ rednet111

Thank you doggo >w< glad you like both!!! means a lot to me ❤️

Labyrias

2 months, 1 week ago

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Hmm... a time when all of this used to matter.
Its confusing though. No one has the right to treat you like that? The only rights you have in this world, the only possessions you have in this world, the only status and position you can have in this world are those which you can protect with your own two hands.

The youth always has such a confusing and jarring experience with society when the illusion of this made up clownery called rights, laws, importance, value of life and the rest of the jazz meets the cold hard floor of reality.
The illusion always did more damage to the young ones than the cold reality itself.
Always having to go through loops and hoops trying to figure out why there is a mismatch between what is supposed to be, and what actually is.

Hold those who are dear to you close and do not seek morals or justification in the world cause our mother gave but one such concept to us and even that was called survival of the fittest. Not more. And not less.

KDraws

1 month, 3 weeks ago

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@ Labyrias

I think you’re absolutely right. Life has a way of teaching us lessons through the toughest experiences, even if the blows aren't always physical. What makes it worse is that people like Andrea often act this way to hide their own fears and insecurities. It’s harsh, but it’s the reality Evelyn is forced to face here. You captured that contrast between illusion and reality so well... it’s something a lot of people struggle to understand.

GratitudeAdvocate

2 months, 1 week ago

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I want to apologize in advance to anyone reading this, especially if you're from Northern Ireland or the UK. These characters are meant to be from Northern Ireland. I don’t speak English fluently; I’m just a Spaniard trying to learn with limited help from Google. I’d be grateful for any advice on how to improve what’s written.

I'm no expert on the subject of exotic accents and written foreign dialogue, Kerry-Sama.
BUT! I know I'm dutifully impressed with how well you established and structured Andrea's dialogue and Northern Irish verbal linguistics. If there are errors, I don't notice any personally... I can read Andrea's written dialogue and HEAR that voice ringing out with that dank low-hanging drunken fighting Irish twang that one often hears from legitimate Northern Irish folks. I never would've personally imagined Andrea's voice to sound like that, I originally received a much more Compton-born South Central Ghetto-bitch vibe from her - but I suppose there are considerable ghettos to be found throughout Northern Ireland as well. You did a remarkable job with this story, dear precious Spaniard! <3 I felt a wave of emotions course through me while reading this story. Such a killer addition to the AMAZING illustrated scene unfolding at hand between your three girls. This is TRUE art, created by a gifted fellow artist & writer! <3

Oh, what a RUDE dog-girl Andrea is, for shame!
That took some serious nerve to drop the "girlfriend" remark even after dropping poor dear Evelyn to the ground with a freaking kick to her side, I swear - this story/art combo is quite beautiful and well-executed!
And yet my loathing of Andrea has grown a lot more than ever before with this story in particular, so distressing. I am truly inspired and SO happy to see Kara step up and tap into a deep-nestled courageous act of defiance against Andrea's bullying advances, that was satisfying and liberating. Seeing anyone's best friend get abused physically like that would cause such a reaction, no matter WHAT age one may be! Yeah, so Kara may have lost the coffee, but that's a better sacrifice to bear than losing a dear friend to vicious bullying victimization in the long run. FUUUUuuUUuuuuUUUCK ANDREA IS THE WORST OMG >8(

I think you handled the written dialogue with grace and finesse, Kerry-Sama! Writing weird-sounding, unique, culturally diverse and heavily accented dialogue out in a creative literary fashion isn't an easy endeavor, believe me - I know from lots of experience, plenty of trial and error. I've even slightly irritated others before by going TOO heavy with accented dialogue. XD
It happens! But like I said, this story feels balanced and fair. The narrative flow relies heavily on their natural developing dialogue, which is ideal and good for building tension. After multiple re-reads, I believe nothing you've written seems far too over-acheiving, forced or contrived. In fact, you've brought a wave of humanity and kindness to attention through Kara's profound support and defense of Evelyn. Most people would beg for such an act to occur for years. The struggles in Evelyn's story are all so relatable and real, this moment is captivating and heartbreaking all at once. I would drop-kick Andrea, high-five Kara and hug Evelyn so fast... BRING IT ON, I SAY!! <3

Seriously, all joking aside, I love how you've chosen to use dull tones and sharp angles to convey a bitter coldness, that feeling of ridicule and harrassment from a bully, all visually depicted with stunning accuracy. Seeing Evelyn lying on the ground, gazing upward in dire fear and shock, watching her dear friend Kara snarling at the town bully... this hits home. It's so emotional, I might shed a shepcoon tear or two. :'3

Another favorite quote of mine, made by Kara right towards the end:

"	"You're strong, even if you don't see it now. You're not alone."

Evelyn may not know it, but she has support in high-reaching places! Like Max always says: "Strength in numbers, baby..."

Labyrias

2 months, 1 week ago

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@ GratitudeAdvocate

Didnt even notice her request till you commented it, but hmm... in regards of exotic accents, dont they tend to just destroy immersion? Im asking your opinion on this one cause i wonder if its just a personal quirk of mine. Somehow trying to READ accent just doesnt work, its just jarring.

On the other hand, KDraws's art style allows it to come across readily. A lot of her characters and settings make a lot of sense when i imagine them in the setting of Ireland.
KD, if you read this, its just my personal opinion, but you shouldnt stress much about the language. Everyone reads the same way, they just pronounce it differently depending on region. On the other hand you could study a little bit of Ireland's buildings, sceneries, cities, towns. Take a stroll in google maps if nothing else and soak yourself a bit in the "aura" of the place.

Again: Completely personal take. Feel free to disregard anything either of you disagree with.

KDraws

1 month, 3 weeks ago

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@ Labyrias

Thanks for sharing your thoughts on this, I totally get where you're coming from. Accents in written dialogue can definitely be tricky, and I understand how it might break the immersion for some readers. What I was aiming for with Andrea's slang was mainly to highlight her stronger accent, which contrasts with Evelyn and Kara, who both have more neutral accents. I wanted that difference to stand out a bit and reflect her character more.

Also, I love that you mentioned exploring Irish buildings and scenery! That's an excellent suggestion, and it’s actually something I’ve been doing more lately. I’ve been using Google Maps to study environments and capture the vibe of different places, and I think that’s becoming more visible in my more recent illustrations. It'll take me a bit more time to fully reflect this though, since I still have quite a few pieces from 2021 onwards that I need to upload! X'3

Thanks again for your comment, it’s always great to hear different perspectives!

KDraws

1 month, 3 weeks ago

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@ GratitudeAdvocate

Your comment made my day, seriously. I always imagined Andrea having a really strong accent, which is why she's the only one of the three who speaks with that kind of slang and roughness. It just felt right for her personality, you know? So, it’s awesome to hear that it came across that way to you, especially with that "drunken Irish twang" you mentioned. Honestly, I hadn’t thought of her voice like that before, but I can totally see it now!

And yeah, Andrea is the worst... But Kara stepping up was super important to me, that moment of standing up for a friend just hits home so hard. I’m glad it hit the same way for you too!

Also, the way you described feeling all those emotions while reading the story and seeing the art really motivates me to keep creating. It means a lot, especially coming from a fellow artist like you! Honestly, your feedback gives me that extra push to keep going, and I appreciate it more than I can say.

But yeah, we’ll have to team up to drop-kick Andrea together someday! Thanks again, man, your support means the world! ❤️❤️❤️

moyomongoose

2 months ago

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There's an old saying about bullying..."It's always funny until somebody gets hurt".

KDraws

1 month, 3 weeks ago

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@ moyomongoose

That saying is spot on. With a bully around, it’s only a matter of time before someone gets hurt. It’s just never a joke when that happens.

MickeyCardinal

1 month, 1 week ago

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As someone currently in northern ireland sounds like the locals x3 good job kerry! >.<

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