After the day of their coronation, both kingdoms united and prospered under the guidance of their two kings, who never stopped ruling wisely.
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October 31st 2020
The End
I need to thank to everyone who followed this adventure with me and give lot of love and support. Thanks to all who were commenting, who were sharing this story with your friends, also who enjoyed it silently. My motivation for keep working on this story, for more challenging project it was for me, was all of you.
This adventure is not over yet, I'm looking the way to print it as a book, and if that happens, I may be add some few more pages to complement the story. I'll let you know when this happens, announcing it on journals and posts on my social network.
And if you want to read the whole story, you can find it here:
, who helped me on double checking my English writing on this story! And to everyone who read it and loved it, without you, this story wouldn't have been possible!
I remember listening to the video of this story a few years back, I thought this would end the same way and surprised that you changed it up. Overall it’s a wonderful story and I enjoyed reading it.
I remember listening to the video of this story a few years back, I thought this would end the same
A printed version would indeed be nice. However if you really want it to be a book, may I recommend to create a few more stories like this one and turn it into some kind of modern fairy tale comic book? 31 pages, even if you add a few more, don't make much of a book, but they would make a great part of a compilation.
A printed version would indeed be nice. However if you really want it to be a book, may I recommend
It's a very nice story. Have you given any thought to how the 2 kings provide for a successor? A kingdom-wide contest of some sort to choose their successor? A quest in disguise as commoners? Wizardry? Faerie magic? The intervention of the mice, who possess advanced medical science? Aliens? I hope I don't come off as overly critical. The marriage did unite the 2 kingdoms, which I believe is often a reason for royal marriages, and its good to see a story where it isn't the "My father wants me to marry that awful old lecher just for his political advantage!" trope. Maybe they just transition to democracy. I don't know; probably none of my ideas would work.
It's a very nice story. Have you given any thought to how the 2 kings provide for a successor? A kin
