I kind of ran into a little problem... in an attempt to correct my grammar and spelling mistakes I always seem to have (no mater how many times I go through the story) I was going to have someone go through the chapter and edit it. Unfortunately they never got around to it, so I decided to start releasing pages anyway so that people didn't think the comic was on hiatus or that I lost interest in the project.
Hopefully my errors in writing will not be too intolerable for everyone.
On the art, his room looks more boring coloured than it did black and white, though I guess it perfectly displays just how little excitement he has in his everyday life. The title page is actually a big contrast to the title page chapter 01 got.
Oh, and also, he doesn't seem quiet as depressed in this alternate version --> http://ravenwolf-kls.tumblr.com/post/13847825062/yup-i... (yeaaaah I was having trouble focusing today, just started a new medication... and those always mess around with my focusing capabilities ><)
I would be pleased to correct grammar and spelling. I get paid to do it, but since I love this comic, I'd be willing to do it for you gratis. Please consider my offer.
I would be pleased to correct grammar and spelling. I get paid to do it, but since I love this comic
