Shipping and Descendant Warning : Spike X Rarity(Nightmare pony) = Sparity(Daughter) Pinkie Pie X ??? = Super Surprise(Descendant) (Spifire X Soarin) X (Daring Do X Ahuizotl) = Aerial Ace(Descendant) Big Macintosh X Fluttershy = Apple Eden (Descendant) Twilight Sparkle X -- Top Secret -- = Alternate Dawn(Son) Applejack X ??? = Little AJ (Daughter)
Warning : This story takes place 100 years after Rarity dead. This story base on season 4. So anything that happened in season 5 will have nothing to do with this story.
Warning : This story's an alternate universe and is really crazy at times. Futa-spell or the magic that can make female pony impregnate another female pony doesn't exist.
Warning : a lot of 4th wall breaking and referencing. Sharing universe with "To Love God - To Love Mortal" but in the future and more crazy(and the crazy will be double by now). *You don't need to read "To Love God - To Love Mortal" to understand this story. It's just have many Easter egg for that story here.*
sometimes people do end up living that long. its fairly rare but its not unheard of for someone to live to be 105 or more. Not to mention that they have magic on they're side, who know's whats possible in that regard.
sometimes people do end up living that long. its fairly rare but its not unheard of for someone to l
I'm just saying Rarity's been alive again for a while. You would think the would remove the gravestone but whoever is in charge of that seems to have vanished.
I'm just saying Rarity's been alive again for a while. You would think the would remove the gravesto
hmmm i was thinking this would be a long running thing, but guess i was wrong. nice ending though. especially if it is a cliff hanger to make people want the next "chapter"
hmmm i was thinking this would be a long running thing, but guess i was wrong. nice ending though. e
DAMN Fuck... This end has caused tears to my eyes like Waterfalls. It happened so fast I could not stop it.
All in all one: Absolutely successful story. With ups and downs. I speak for all of us when I say: "You've pulled us with your epic story in your spell Vavacung."
TOP PERFORMANCE! Do it again !!
But i´ll caaaaan´t Wait for Chaos Future
DAMN Fuck... This end has caused tears to my eyes like Waterfalls. It happened so fast I could not s
actualy this is the 'perfect' way to do it, doesnt have to show the cutie mark doesnt have to explain how she survived *snickers* my vote would have either been twilight turned her into sweetie bot [at her own request] or shes become some form of undead [a blank maybe though without the urge brains problem] though since the next pages name is 'chaos future' you have to wonder if maybe good old discord was involved somehow perhaps, i wouldnt put it past him to be able to make a pony immortal if it was somehow funny.
actualy this is the 'perfect' way to do it, doesnt have to show the cutie mark doesnt have to explai
At least there's a sequel. For a second I thought this was the ending of everything, and I was like "NO YOU CANNOT DO THAT YOU ARE EVIL" But there's a sequel, so you're good.
At least there's a sequel. For a second I thought this was the ending of everything, and I was like
What?! That's a crappy end... So many things unanswered, like will Sparity every find out she's the reincarnation of Nightmare Rarity, Will Spike find out about the prince kissing his daughter and go on a rampage, and will we find out what secrets are hidden in Ponyville? Find out this and more in our next episode "Immortal and Love?" or "It was all just a bad dream"
Sorry just went into old style tv show mode... it was nice how they gave away the next episode. Anyways all valid points. I think your comic is a bit on podgy side but I like it with all the pokemon references... And the week fourth wall bit to explain everything in simple way.
What?! That's a crappy end... So many things unanswered, like will Sparity every find out she's the
WTF ... I just noticed something! Vavacung ... You have an error in the story ... the end does not fit together with the beginning. On page 6 Panel 1 is a grave stone with the inscription Sweetie Belle. And in the end, Sweetie Belle is still alive. This is me just now noticed when I read the comic to the 6th or 7th time.
May you Fix it? Or do you want the reader to the end of Surprise?
WTF ... I just noticed something! Vavacung ... You have an error in the story ... the end does not f
Now that to love alicorn has ended and we get to see chaos future finally start up, its theory time! Im guessing the reason that sweetie belle is still alive after so long is its got something to do with discord. First, just from the name of the squeal alone. Who else is the king of chaos and mischief? Secondly, how exactly do you burn apple juice? and in a blender of all things?? Would love to see more theory's on this one.
Now that to love alicorn has ended and we get to see chaos future finally start up, its theory time!
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