...i think your english editor needs to have another look at the last panel, it's really confusing, i can't actually tell what it's supposed to be... maybe "You almost got yourself killed, when chasing your prey there is no honor in allowing them to die by means which are not your own" or perhaps "You almost got yourself killed while chasing your prey! if it wasn't for me saving you then you wouldn't be here you silly pony"
...i think your english editor needs to have another look at the last panel, it's really confusing,