It's not so easy to draw a person open a closet or wardrobe and a person holding a gun. And about the grammar.
Tails returned to his and Sonic's house, went into his room and dressed up as a hunter with a gun. He was very worried about Sonic. Tails to the rescue. But later he'd realise that Shadow is not really bad.
No I was thinking more like talking about the children Sonic is going to have. (But its YOUR comic I'm just throwing out ideas. Are you still having artist block?)
No I was thinking more like talking about the children Sonic is going to have. (But its YOUR