Oh come on Katarina think about it; Tail's thinking about where Sonic was and why he didn't come home all night. I mean come on page one says that Sonic was only going to visit his Granma not spend the night.
Oh come on Katarina think about it; Tail's thinking about where Sonic was and why he didn't come hom
Well he might but dressing him up would fit just as well, I mean on page 25 Shadow says “my family was killed by poachers” why not bring those memories from his childhood into it?
Well he might but dressing him up would fit just as well, I mean on page 25 Shadow says “my family w
Well first Sonic would need to explain to Shadow that Tails is just worried about him, next Shadow would stop running, and then when Tails catches up, that's when Sonic would tell him that Shadow isn't dangerous.
Well first Sonic would need to explain to Shadow that Tails is just worried about him, next Shadow w
though hmm idk if I would put like to stay with me? Please? because the please makes it sound almost demanding, like he wants him to stay...I mean...it's not wrong...it just...idk...e3e I guess it's the please at the end that gets me because he's asking him as if it's his decision, but at the same time the please acts as a plead, like a "I want you to be here, so just say yes." idk...e3e I guess it's just me...but it's still cute -w-. sure i could be wrong, but hmmm....idk..that "like" i feel shouldn't...be there....but...I guess it's just me....eHe hmm...but I don't think grammar wise it's wrong....well I ain't an english teacher anyway. oHo
he's just a big puppy xD though hmm idk if I would put like to stay with me? Please? because the pl
no it's not you it's me, i just...idk..e3e like I said I could be off...I mean i would've done "Would you stay with me, please?" I mean either way if you think about it it's still polite...I guess I'm just used to what my english teacher usually would say or do...Even without the please it's still polite. I mean it's not wrong, grammar wise, it's just...idk...eHe as I said the like and the please kind of...not really a contradiction, but the please make it sound wanting, but yet he wants his choice...well okay i guess you could say contradicting slightly...I guess that's why it kind of...when I read it it's kind of...you know off a little to me...I guess me being a writer that's why...I swear English is so complicated....it's always black and white I swear...
but all i can say is, it's not wrong grammar wise as said, but it sounds wanting yet wanting his decision. That's how I look at it. I mean I know not everyone will see it that way, but sadly my head is like "Hey hey wait..wait...something is off here...i don't like it" xD ugh thank you brain I love you too...
no it's not you it's me, i just...idk..e3e like I said I could be off...I mean i would've done "Woul
