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Little Tails 8 - Page 09
Little Tails 8 - Page 11
Again, please need your help fixing my awful english in order to release a good english version of this page...  here's the text :

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panel 1

"i believe, that wat
happened was a alergic
reaction"

panel 2

"of course doctor will never
admit that, it will be a
negligence case"

panel 3

"after going out from the
hospital, i tried to contact
his relatives (family)

I didn't knew it will be the
last time that i was able to
see him alive

Received a phone call some
hours ago,  bryce was dead"

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Published: 9 years, 7 months ago
Rating: General

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ThunderSnow88
9 years, 7 months ago
1 - I believe what happened was an allergic reaction

2 - Of course, the doctor will never admit that, so it'll become a negligence case

3 - After leaving the hospital, I tried to contact his family
I didn't know it would be the last time I'd see him alive
I received a phone call later saying Bryce was dead


...Holy crap
bbmbbf
9 years, 7 months ago
Thanks for your help :)
GrayPaulineces
9 years, 7 months ago
panel 1

"I believe that what had happened was an allergic reaction."

panel 2

"Of course doctor will never admit that, because it would become a negligence case."

panel 3

"After leaving the hospital, I tried to contact his family."

"I didn't know it would be the last time that I would ever see him alive."

"I received a phone call several hours later,  saying that Bryce was dead."
bbmbbf
9 years, 7 months ago
Thanks u :)
GrayPaulineces
9 years, 7 months ago
You're welcome, mi amigo :D
AutumnCore
9 years, 7 months ago
Insisto en que fueron los médicos los culpables.
roninhunt0987
9 years, 7 months ago
death from an alergic reaction so to speak
bladenate
9 years, 7 months ago
Esto es cada vez mas tragico, me imagino que la hermana de angel llorara cuando se entere, pero sera inegligencia medica o sera resultado del combate que tuvo con angel?
AutumnCore
9 years, 7 months ago
Pues yo insisto en que los médicos tuvieron la culpa.
bladenate
9 years, 7 months ago
Pues poder ser resultado tambien del combate, recuerda que angel estaba bajo los efectos de una droga pudo haber afectado a bryce del algun modo, aun que no se puede descartar tambien inegligencia medica
CoffeeFox
9 years, 7 months ago
why would a doctor not admit to the patience having an allergic reaction?
is anything that would incriminate him further?
i feel that you should probably re-write this
ruink
9 years, 7 months ago
experimental treatment
ruink
9 years, 7 months ago
panel 1

"I believe, that what happened was an allergic reaction."

panel 2

"Of course doctor will never admit that, so it will be a case of negligence."

panel 3

"After leaving the hospital, I tried to contact his relatives, but I was unaware that it will be thelast time that I saw Bryce alive.

I received a phone call a few hours ago, telling me Bryce had died."

this will work
bbmbbf
9 years, 7 months ago
Thanks my friend
BinaryHedgehog
9 years, 7 months ago
Panel 1
"What I believed happened was that Bryce had an allergic reaction"
Panel 2
"Obviously, such a thing would be considered negligence, so they kept that under wraps"
Panel 3
"After leaving the hospital, and went about contacting his relatives... but little did I know that would be the last time I would ever see Bryce alive. I got a call few hours ago, telling me Bryce had passed."
bbmbbf
9 years, 7 months ago
Thanks for your help :)
FoxyLove
9 years, 7 months ago
Now that is totally screwed up. That quack killed him because he couldn't diagnose him correctly and is trying to walk from the blame. His sister will claw him to ribbons.
GurahkWeavile
9 years, 7 months ago
No no NOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
peter10ns
9 years, 7 months ago
shitty. but way did the dr want hem to be dead i wander.
Rikubattle
9 years, 7 months ago
Conspiración.
ScottySkunk
9 years, 7 months ago
time to sue for malpractice.
BadlyBadlyKuro
9 years, 7 months ago
Ayyy... That quack is sooo gonna be screwed
blackcat355
9 years, 7 months ago
Crap!
6Aleph9
9 years, 7 months ago
panel 1
"I believe what had happened was an allergic reaction."

panel 2

"Of course the doctor will never
admit that. It will become a
case of negligence."

panel 3

"after leaving the
hospital, I tried to contact
his family."

"I didn't know at the moment that it would be the
last time that I'll
see him alive."

"I had received a phone call some
time ago.  I was told Bryce was dead."
bbmbbf
9 years, 7 months ago
Thank u ^^
LexiTheShunamir
9 years, 7 months ago
they killed him!


"I didn't know it will be the last time that I would ever see him alive."
Should say would Not will
Zehntacles
9 years, 7 months ago
I'm not sure why they killed this guy, but it sure was a sloppy method leaving a witness behind.
Namingway
9 years, 7 months ago
"unaware that it would be the last time..."
Coop
9 years, 7 months ago
we come a loong way from those good ol games
bbmbbf
9 years, 7 months ago
isn't? ^^
Coop
9 years, 6 months ago
yes is  niice
Shryke
9 years, 7 months ago
The last line should probably be "I got a call a few hours later" rather than "a few hours ago" unless he is telling the story in real time, right now. I don't know where this fits in the timeline with "right now" so if that IS what's happening then "a few hours ago" would be right.
Xujinan
9 years, 7 months ago
Why is everyone replacing had passed with died? They mean the same thing people.
AlexanderValentine
9 years, 6 months ago
Dunno myself. "Passed" is the better usage, as it could be considered a softer word to use.

Died, on the other hand; should be used in more extreme circumstance.
vaston64
9 years, 7 months ago
Lies! that has to be murder!
AstralFrankie
9 years, 6 months ago
Okay.  What...the bloody hell...is going on here?
LeydenTheWolf
9 years, 6 months ago
Nice work. And oh man. Poor Bryce. =(
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