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Again, please need your help fixing my awful english in order to release a good english version of this page... here's the text :

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panel 1

"i believe, that wat
happened was a alergic
reaction"

panel 2

"of course doctor will never
admit that, it will be a
negligence case"

panel 3

"after going out from the
hospital, i tried to contact
his relatives (family)

I didn't knew it will be the
last time that i was able to
see him alive

Received a phone call some
hours ago, bryce was dead"

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Published: 9 years, 7 months ago

Rating: General

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ThunderSnow88

9 years, 7 months ago

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1 - I believe what happened was an allergic reaction

2 - Of course, the doctor will never admit that, so it'll become a negligence case

3 - After leaving the hospital, I tried to contact his family
I didn't know it would be the last time I'd see him alive
I received a phone call later saying Bryce was dead

...Holy crap

bbmbbf

9 years, 7 months ago

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@ ThunderSnow88

Thanks for your help :)

GrayPaulineces

9 years, 7 months ago

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panel 1

"I believe that what had happened was an allergic reaction."

panel 2

"Of course doctor will never admit that, because it would become a negligence case."

panel 3

"After leaving the hospital, I tried to contact his family."

"I didn't know it would be the last time that I would ever see him alive."

"I received a phone call several hours later, saying that Bryce was dead."

bbmbbf

9 years, 7 months ago

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@ GrayPaulineces

Thanks u :)

GrayPaulineces

9 years, 7 months ago

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@ bbmbbf

You're welcome, mi amigo :D

AutumnCore

9 years, 7 months ago

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Insisto en que fueron los médicos los culpables.

roninhunt0987

9 years, 7 months ago

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death from an alergic reaction so to speak

bladenate

9 years, 7 months ago

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Esto es cada vez mas tragico, me imagino que la hermana de angel llorara cuando se entere, pero sera inegligencia medica o sera resultado del combate que tuvo con angel?

AutumnCore

9 years, 7 months ago

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@ bladenate

Pues yo insisto en que los médicos tuvieron la culpa.

bladenate

9 years, 7 months ago

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@ AutumnCore

Pues poder ser resultado tambien del combate, recuerda que angel estaba bajo los efectos de una droga pudo haber afectado a bryce del algun modo, aun que no se puede descartar tambien inegligencia medica

CoffeeFox

9 years, 7 months ago

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why would a doctor not admit to the patience having an allergic reaction?
is anything that would incriminate him further?
i feel that you should probably re-write this

ruink

9 years, 7 months ago

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@ CoffeeFox

experimental treatment

ruink

9 years, 7 months ago

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Edited 9 years, 7 months ago by Owner

panel 1

"I believe, that what happened was an allergic reaction."

panel 2

"Of course doctor will never admit that, so it will be a case of negligence."

panel 3

"After leaving the hospital, I tried to contact his relatives, but I was unaware that it will be thelast time that I saw Bryce alive.

I received a phone call a few hours ago, telling me Bryce had died."

this will work

bbmbbf

9 years, 7 months ago

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@ ruink

Thanks my friend

BinaryHedgehog

9 years, 7 months ago

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Panel 1
"What I believed happened was that Bryce had an allergic reaction"
Panel 2
"Obviously, such a thing would be considered negligence, so they kept that under wraps"
Panel 3
"After leaving the hospital, and went about contacting his relatives... but little did I know that would be the last time I would ever see Bryce alive. I got a call few hours ago, telling me Bryce had passed."

bbmbbf

9 years, 7 months ago

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@ BinaryHedgehog

Thanks for your help :)

FoxyLove

9 years, 7 months ago

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Now that is totally screwed up. That quack killed him because he couldn't diagnose him correctly and is trying to walk from the blame. His sister will claw him to ribbons.

GurahkWeavile

9 years, 7 months ago

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No no NOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

peter10ns

9 years, 7 months ago

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shitty. but way did the dr want hem to be dead i wander.

Rikubattle

9 years, 7 months ago

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Conspiración.

ScottySkunk

9 years, 7 months ago

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time to sue for malpractice.

BadlyBadlyKuro

9 years, 7 months ago

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Ayyy... That quack is sooo gonna be screwed

blackcat355

9 years, 7 months ago

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Crap!

6Aleph9

9 years, 7 months ago

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panel 1
"I believe what had happened was an allergic reaction."

panel 2

"Of course the doctor will never
admit that. It will become a
case of negligence."

panel 3

"after leaving the
hospital, I tried to contact
his family."

"I didn't know at the moment that it would be the
last time that I'll
see him alive."

"I had received a phone call some
time ago. I was told Bryce was dead."

bbmbbf

9 years, 7 months ago

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@ 6Aleph9

Thank u ^^

LexiTheShunamir

9 years, 7 months ago

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they killed him!

"I didn't know it will be the last time that I would ever see him alive."
Should say would Not will

Zehntacles

9 years, 7 months ago

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I'm not sure why they killed this guy, but it sure was a sloppy method leaving a witness behind.

Namingway

9 years, 7 months ago

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"unaware that it would be the last time..."

Coop

9 years, 7 months ago

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we come a loong way from those good ol games

bbmbbf

9 years, 7 months ago

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@ Coop

isn't? ^^

Coop

9 years, 6 months ago

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@ bbmbbf

yes is niice

Shryke

9 years, 7 months ago

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The last line should probably be "I got a call a few hours later" rather than "a few hours ago" unless he is telling the story in real time, right now. I don't know where this fits in the timeline with "right now" so if that IS what's happening then "a few hours ago" would be right.

Xujinan

9 years, 7 months ago

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Why is everyone replacing had passed with died? They mean the same thing people.

AlexanderValentine

9 years, 6 months ago

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@ Xujinan

Dunno myself. "Passed" is the better usage, as it could be considered a softer word to use.

Died, on the other hand; should be used in more extreme circumstance.