Very nice work! I'm always happy to see when artists reach out for help with accurate translation. Here's my suggestions, as a teacher in the humanities:
Panel 1:
Later on, Bryce looked much better - so much so that I thought it was unnecessary for us to be in that place!
Panel 2:
As soon as the doctor arrived, he gave him some painkillers (or so he said)
Panel 3:
Suddenly, he started to asphyxiate! The doctor quickly called for help...
Very nice work! I'm always happy to see when artists reach out for help with accurate translation.
yeah the doctor looks way to uninterested in the allergy reaction^^ i can image what he say "ingrid, please prepare me a coffee with 2 sugar and a little bit milk, and if you are finish, please send some medic, the patient has a allergy reaction and don´t get air" (ingrd is the nurse)^^
yeah the doctor looks way to uninterested in the allergy reaction^^ i can image what he say "ingrid,
Just needs some capitals on names and the beginning of the sentences and it is all right. Though the doctor doesn't look very concerned. Has an indifference look on him.
Just needs some capitals on names and the beginning of the sentences and it is all right. Though the
Aha! So Angel didn't choke Bryce to death! But what sort of 'medication' would bring about such a reaction that Bryce would actually asphyxiate? I don't like this.
Aha! So Angel didn't choke Bryce to death! But what sort of 'medication' would bring about such a
Hummm. Very suspicious. It even makes me wonder if Bryce really dies, or if the drug the doctor gave him only made it look like he died. There are certain toxins that bring on the appearance of death, but that can be countered later with an antidote. Buit why would anyone do either act? Why kill Bryce or make it appear he had died?
And what is going on with Angel's behavior? Did that same doctor or whoever he is associated with do something to Angel as well?
Hummm. Very suspicious. It even makes me wonder if Bryce really dies, or if the drug the doctor gave
I actually called ''the fake death theory'' at the end of the previous chapter when we see Bryce died, but only because I mixed him up with Angel (he got injected too, and passed out...). It would be funny if I got it right because of a mistake I made back then, right?
I actually called ''the fake death theory'' at the end of the previous chapter when we see Bryce die
I once collapsed on a doctor's office floor for about 20 minutes... douche just walked out of the room.. I actually lost time...
I told him my stomach was hurting and asked if I could stand up, and apparently I did stand up and we talked for about 15 minutes before I passed out, and woke up 20 minutes after I collapsed.. but I didn't remember even having gotten down off the exam table...
I asked him "WTF?" and he said "well I figured you just freaked out because we were talking about bloodwork..."
I once collapsed on a doctor's office floor for about 20 minutes... douche just walked out of the ro
