Welcome to Inkbunny...
Allowed ratings
To view member-only content, create an account. ( Hide )
Kelo Kangaroo
« older newer »
Furry Commission Sheet

Medium (920px wide max)
Wide - use max window width - scroll to see page ⇅
Fit all of image in window
set default image size: small | medium | wide
Download (new tab)
I think this is probably one of the best pieces I've ever made...
Many hours of work later.
I feel proud.

Please leave a critique! <3

Keywords
female 527,034, dragon 81,900, hybrid 37,428, furry 32,703, magic 11,762, beach 11,413, water 8,131, snow 7,144, glow 2,889, sunset 2,528, fangs 2,334, markings 2,293, cave 1,692, mage 1,577, staff 929, peaceful 227, liam 214, st 183, forrest 88, beding 1
Details
Type: Picture/Pinup
Published: 3 years, 10 months ago
Rating: General

MD5 Hash for Page 1... Show Find Identical Posts [?]
Stats
20 views
2 favorites
2 comments

BBCode Tags Show [?]
 
tannim
3 years, 10 months ago
It does look good and you did well with it.
Her staff looks a lot like a Torchlight 2 staff or really any diablo-esk type game staff.

Armor is functional and not showing off so much skin to be too sexy.  Loin cloth is an unusual choice when wearing an armored top like that, but wear what you can get.  I like her hair, cute horns, torso proportions are fine . She could use a tail.

Legs are too thick below the knee.  She looks like she has tubes for legs at the moment.

Background is too blurry in the distance.  Uncomfortable to look at the trees and cave due to the blur.  Her lower arms look too short.

Color is good all around.
SnowFangs
3 years, 10 months ago
Thanks a lot tannim, I'm so happy to get such a great critique!

1. Tubey legs yea, to be honest I rushed the legs because they were frustrating me lot.
2. Short arms, hmmh, damn, didn't even notice that one! Daym.
3. Yea, I didn't know what to do with the tail.

And the distance is meant to be that blurry. I wanted all the focus on her.
Think of it as part of the magical aura, creating such a vibrant focal distance blur.
New Comment:
Move reply box to top
Log in or create an account to comment.