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Little Tails 0.5 - Page 07
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Little Tails 1 - Cover
Please take a look to the speech of the next lines, so i can release a proper english version

Panel 1
"i'm going to see her tonight, i'll prepare myself
"take it easy, you don't want to ruin it... good luck

Panel 2
"Idiot"

Panel 3
"Annie is alright, i should not get over excited, i don't want to look nervous
i'm going to talk with her, and tell her what i feel, it's the only wat that i'll know
if i like her or not

Panel 4
"I feel that everything going to be good,  thank u annie"

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Published: 3 years, 8 months ago
Rating: General

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TillyFox
3 years, 8 months ago
Panel 1
"I'll see her tonight, I better get ready
"Calm down, you don't want to ruin it... good luck

Panel 2
"Idiot"

Panel 3
"Annie is right, I shouldn't get too excited, I don't want to look nervous.
I'm going to talk to her and tell her what I feel, it's the only way that i'll know if I really like her or not

Panel 4
"I think everything is going to be OK,  Thanks Annie"


Kind of sad, that last line, since we already know what happens next. :(
ScottyKat
3 years, 8 months ago
So far the only right choice for Angel is Annie.. Cathy has potential... but i wanna know more about her.
MoadDib
3 years, 8 months ago
" TillyFox wrote:
Panel 1
"I'll see her tonight, I better get ready
"Calm down, you don't want to ruin it... good luck

Panel 2
"Idiot"

Panel 3
"Annie is right, I shouldn't get too excited, I don't want to look nervous.
I'm going to talk to her and tell her what I feel, it's the only way that i'll know if I really like her or not

Panel 4
"I think everything is going to be OK,  Thanks Annie"


Kind of sad, that last line, since we already know what happens next. :(

Tilly seems to have done a good job with this, but I'd make some minor adjustments to a couple of lines.
Panel 1
"I'll go see her tonight, I'd better get ready."

Panel 3
"Annie is right, I shouldn't get too excited, I don't want to look nervous.
I'm going to talk to her and tell her how I feel, it's the only way that i'll know if she likes me or not."

Once again, like in Page 05, the translation makes it seem like Angel doesn't know if he likes April or not, but he certainly seems to know, but just doesn't know how she feels about him. So, I've adjusted the line to better reflect that.


Panel 4
"I think everything is going to be okay. Thanks Annie"
GurahkWeavile
3 years, 8 months ago
And then he gets run over by a car
ScottyKat
3 years, 8 months ago
lol. silly angel... the right choice is Annie. Now be a good brother and have sex with annie untill you realize that she is your perfect partner.

minor fixes here.
panel 3
"it's the only wat" should be "it's the only way"
panel 4
"i feel like everything is going to be all right, thank you annie"
roninhunt0987
3 years, 8 months ago
XDDD Annie Called Angel an Idiot.. i wonder why she said that in mind??
kingkingkolton
3 years, 8 months ago
Panel 1
"I'm going to see her tonight, I'd get ready." A flow fix.
"Take it easy, you don't want to ruin it... Good luck!"

Panel 2
"Idiot."

Panel 3
"Annie's right, I shouldn't not get too excited; I don't want to look nervous."
"I'm going to talk with her and tell her what I feel. It's the only way that I'll know if I like her or not."

Panel 4
"I think everything's going to be okay. Thank you, Annie"

All of these were mostly word fixes and punctuation.
kingkingkolton
3 years, 8 months ago
A fix for my fix:

Panel 1
"I'm going to see her tonight, I'll get ready." A flow fix.
"Take it easy, you don't want to ruin it... Good luck!"

Panel 2
"Idiot."

Panel 3
"Annie's right, I shouldn't get too excited; I don't want to look nervous."
xcar
3 years, 8 months ago
Panel 1
"i'm going to see her tonight, i'll go prepare myself
"take it easy, you don't want to ruin it... good luck

Panel 2
"moron"

Panel 3
"Annie is right, i should not get over excited, i don't want to look nervous
i'm going to talk with her, to tell her how i feel, is the only wat to know
if she likes me or not

Panel 4
"I feel that everything going to be good,  thank u annie"
Lemniscate
3 years, 8 months ago
Panel 1
"I'm going to see her tonight. I have to get ready."

"Take it easy, you don't want to blow it... Good luck!"

Panel 2
"Idiot"

Panel 3
"Annie's right, I shouldn't get too excited. I don't want to look nervous when I see her."

"I'm going to talk to her, and let her know how I feel. It's the only way I'll know for sure if I like her or not."

Panel 4
"Everything will be all right. I can feel it. Thanks, Annie."
6Aleph9
3 years, 8 months ago
Panel 1
"I'm going to see her tonight.  I'll get ready."
"Take it easy, you don't want to ruin it. Good luck.

Panel 2
"...Idiot"

Panel 3
"Annie is right, I should not get over excited.  I don't want to appear nervous when I see her.
I'll talk with her, and tell her how I feel. It's the only way I'll know
whether I like her or not."

Panel 4
"I feel that everything will be all right.  Thank you Annie."
DZAladan
2 years, 1 month ago
Be careful, you forgot to post the english version: http://palcomix.com/littlecubs/?comic=chapter-0-5-page-08
bbmbbf
2 years, 1 month ago
Thanks for remind me ^^
DZAladan
2 years, 1 month ago
Uhhh... this is the wrong page (chapter 9 page 7).
Whoops?
bbmbbf
2 years, 1 month ago
I updated the file again..
LeydenTheWolf
2 years, 1 month ago
Real cute. <3
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