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Published: 11 years, 10 months ago

Rating: General

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AutumnCore

11 years, 10 months ago

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Se ven un poco más altos.
Ahora sí aparentan la edad que se supone que tienen. :P

Zorroblanco

9 years, 11 months ago

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@ AutumnCore

Y que edad se supone que tienen?

AutumnCore

11 years, 10 months ago

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Panel 1: Perfecto

Panel 2: "... it was fine, but I didn't dare to say too much to her"

Panel 3:
" I'd like to order..."
"What if she doesn't like me?"

Panel 4:
"I ordered a milkshake for you, as you told me.

Creo que con éso.

FoxyLove

11 years, 10 months ago

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Panel 1. "Then destiny gave me the perfect excuse..."

Panel 2. "We went shopping. It was fine but I was still shy so I didn't say very much.

Panel 3. "How can I say what I want to say to her." "I'd like to order please?" "Sure little lady." "What if I don't like her?"

Panel 4. "Hey. Did the waiter already come by? Did you all order something already?" "Yes. I ordered a milkshake like you asked me to do. "I'm not really hungry."

ScottySkunk

11 years, 10 months ago

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@ FoxyLove

tigger is consistantly good

FoxyLove

11 years, 10 months ago

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@ ScottySkunk

Cause he's GREAT! XDDDDDD

ScottySkunk

11 years, 10 months ago

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@ FoxyLove

*bops gently* booooooo

FoxyLove

11 years, 10 months ago

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@ ScottySkunk

Careful I pounce. *pounces ScottyKat* :3

ScottySkunk

11 years, 10 months ago

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@ FoxyLove

nyah *pounce pounce*

ScottySkunk

11 years, 10 months ago

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Annie looks good in green

kingkingkolton

11 years, 10 months ago

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panel 1
"Destiny gave me the perfect excuse..." I removed an unnecessary word.

Panel 2
"We agreed to go shopping... It was fine but I didn't dare say too much to her"

Panel 3
-"How can I beat shyness?"
-"I'd like to order"
-"Sure little lady."
-"What if I don't like her?..." Capitalization and a word change.

Panel 4
"Well, did the waiter come? Did you order already?"
"I asked for a milkshake for you like you told me to."
"I'm not hungry." Punctuation fixes, mostly. I made the second line sound more natural.

obe12

11 years, 10 months ago

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Aquí te has saltado unas cuantas páginas, a mí no me engañas xD. Todos sabemos por qué April se dejó el collar ( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°)
Es broma, ya sé que esta historia no está conectada a esos comics :)

MoadDib

11 years, 10 months ago

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panel 1

"	"the destiny gave me the perfect excuse..."

"Then destiny gave me the perfect excuse..."

Panel 2

"	"We agreed to go shopping.. it was fine but i didn't dared to say too much to her"

We went shopping. It was fine, but I was too shy to say much to her."

Panel 3

"	-"how can i beat this shyness?" -"i'll like to order" -"sure little lady" -"what if i don't like her?..

-"How can I tell her what I want to?"
-"I'd like to order."
-"Sure little lady."
-"What if she doesn't like me."

The last line is a pretty big change, but I think that's what you intended to say there, since Angel seems worried that she won't return his feelings, not that he doesn't have feelings for her.

Panel 4

"	"Well, did the waiter came?, did you ordered already?" "I asked a milkshake for you as you told me "I'm not hungry"

"Well, did the waiter come by? Did you already order?"
"I ordered a milkshake for you like you told me to."
"I'm not hungry."

xcar

11 years, 10 months ago

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panel 1
"the destiny gave me the perfect excuse..."

Panel 2
"We agreed to go shopping.. it was fine but i didn't dared to speak too much with her"

Panel 3
-"how can i beat this shyness?"
-"i'll like to order"
-"sure little lady"
-"what if she doesn't like me?..

Panel 4
"Well, did the waiter came?, did you ordered?"
"I ordered a milkshake for you as you told me
"and... I'm not hungry"

LemmyNiscuit

11 years, 10 months ago

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panel 1
"Destiny gave me the perfect opportunity..."

Panel 2
"We agreed to go shopping... It was fine but, I didn't have the courage to talk to her..."

Panel 3

"How can I beat my shyness?"
"I'm ready to order."

(If you want something informal, "Sure little lady." is fine; or, if you want more formal):
"Sure, ma'am."

"What if... I don't like her?"

Panel 4
"Hey! Did the waiter come? Have you ordered already?"

"Yeah. I got the milkshake you asked for."

(I would correct what you have to "I...I wasn't hungry." or, closer to the Spanish:)
"I... I didn't want anything."

6Aleph9

11 years, 10 months ago

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panel 1
"Then, destiny gave me the perfect excuse..."

Panel 2
"We agreed to go shopping... It was fine, but I didn't dare to say too much to her."

Panel 3
-"How can I stop being so shy around her?"
-"I'd like to make an order."
-"Sure young lady."
-"What if I don't like her...?

Panel 4
"Well, did the waiter come? Did you order already?"
"I ordered the milkshake you asked for.
"I...I'm not hungry."