Panel 1. "Then destiny gave me the perfect excuse..."
Panel 2. "We went shopping. It was fine but I was still shy so I didn't say very much.
Panel 3. "How can I say what I want to say to her." "I'd like to order please?" "Sure little lady." "What if I don't like her?"
Panel 4. "Hey. Did the waiter already come by? Did you all order something already?" "Yes. I ordered a milkshake like you asked me to do. "I'm not really hungry."
Panel 1. "Then destiny gave me the perfect excuse..." Panel 2. "We went shopping. It was fine but I
panel 1 "Destiny gave me the perfect excuse..." I removed an unnecessary word.
Panel 2 "We agreed to go shopping... It was fine but I didn't dare say too much to her"
Panel 3 -"How can I beat shyness?" -"I'd like to order" -"Sure little lady." -"What if I don't like her?..." Capitalization and a word change.
Panel 4 "Well, did the waiter come? Did you order already?" "I asked for a milkshake for you like you told me to." "I'm not hungry." Punctuation fixes, mostly. I made the second line sound more natural.
panel 1 "Destiny gave me the perfect excuse..." I removed an unnecessary word. Panel 2 "We agreed t
Aquí te has saltado unas cuantas páginas, a mí no me engañas xD. Todos sabemos por qué April se dejó el collar ( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°) Es broma, ya sé que esta historia no está conectada a esos comics :)
Aquí te has saltado unas cuantas páginas, a mí no me engañas xD. Todos sabemos por qué April se dejó
"We agreed to go shopping.. it was fine but i didn't dared to say too much to her"
We went shopping. It was fine, but I was too shy to say much to her."
Panel 3
"
-"how can i beat this shyness?" -"i'll like to order" -"sure little lady" -"what if i don't like her?..
-"How can I tell her what I want to?" -"I'd like to order." -"Sure little lady." -"What if she doesn't like me."
The last line is a pretty big change, but I think that's what you intended to say there, since Angel seems worried that she won't return his feelings, not that he doesn't have feelings for her.
Panel 4
"
"Well, did the waiter came?, did you ordered already?" "I asked a milkshake for you as you told me "I'm not hungry"
"Well, did the waiter come by? Did you already order?" "I ordered a milkshake for you like you told me to." "I'm not hungry."
panel 1 ~~~ Quote: "the destiny gave me the perfect excuse..." ~~~ "Then destiny gave me the p