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Thanks to all people who help me with the translation

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Published: 9 years, 3 months ago
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alfredofroylan
9 years, 3 months ago
La cara del papá me dice que estan viendo algo raro en la pantalla, algo cuya estupidez sea hipnotizante y que poco a poco destruye las neuronas...... tal vez Naruto.
AngelF
9 years, 3 months ago
Angel is a lousy boys name! ;D
Enjerurenewal
9 years, 3 months ago
Yay! :3
cesar23
9 years, 3 months ago
Sufrimos por igual el y yo...
JazzIsMaiBaby
9 years, 3 months ago
Here's how I would write it:

panel 1
"Hello, my name is Angel, and I think that I'm in love."

panel 2

"It's never happened to me, but I can't stop thinking about her. I just want to be by her side."

panel 3

"I live with my sister, Annie and my dad, who I'm only able to see on the weekends since he works a lot."
celticwolf72
9 years, 3 months ago
I mostly agree, though I'd drop the 'that' in the first panel translation.

"Hello, my name is Angel, and I think I'm in love."
Furryluv19
9 years, 3 months ago
I agree withJazzIsMaiBaby with it except for panel 3
Panel 3
I live with my sister, Annie, and my dad. However, I'm only able to see him on weekends as he works long hours.
JazzIsMaiBaby
9 years, 3 months ago
That does make more sense how you wrote it. That's why one should always get more than one opinion. XD
Furryluv19
9 years, 3 months ago
^.^ I like to write and one thing that was drilled into my brain was sentence structure.
JazzIsMaiBaby
9 years, 3 months ago
So do I. Basically, I just write it and then read it over to make sure that it makes sense and things are spelled correctly.
Furryluv19
9 years, 3 months ago
^.^ same.
ScottySkunk
9 years, 3 months ago
Annie too adorbs Jazz has it done well. with furryluv's third line
kingkingkolton
9 years, 3 months ago
panel 1
"Hello, my name is Angel and I think I'm in love" Just come capitalization and a I changed a letter

panel 2
"This has never happened to me; I can't stop thinking about her, I want to be by her side" Some word fixes and capitalization.

panel 3

"I live with my sister Annie and my dad, who I'm only able to see on weekends because he works a lot" A few word fixes.
xcar
9 years, 3 months ago
panel 1
"Hello, mi name is Angel and i think i'm in love"

panel 2
"it never happened to me, I can't stop thinking about her,
i want to be to her side

panel 3

I live with my sister Annie and my dad, who i only see on weekends since he works a lot
LemmyNiscuit
9 years, 3 months ago
I'm going to offer a less literal translation; one that might sound more natural in English, but won't match the Spanish version word-for-word.

panel 1
"Hi... My name is Angel, and I think... I'm in love."

panel 2
"I've never felt this way before. I can't stop thinking about her. I want to be with her."

panel 3

"I live with my sister, Annie, and my dad. He works a lot, so we only see him on weekends."
MoadDib
9 years, 3 months ago
This is a pretty good translation. It has a good flow & proper grammar.
I would remove the second ellipsis from the first line though.
"Hi... My name is Angel, and I think I'm in love."
LemmyNiscuit
9 years, 3 months ago
Thank you. My Spanish isn't that fresh, but I know a literal translation can sometimes come across a bit awkwardly; languages are different so I tried to line up some linguistic dissonances while keeping the idea of the script true.

As far as the ellipsis, the second one pauses for dramatic effect, as I believe this would be the first time Angel is admitting to himself that he's in love. This just gives his thoughts a kind of "mood." This kind of pause is often used in speeches to catch attention to emphasize a point.

But in general, the use and intention of ellipses varies from writer to writer.
6Aleph9
9 years, 3 months ago
Perhaps this will help?

panel 1
"Hello, my name is Angel and I think I'm in love."

panel 2
"it never happened to me before. I can't stop thinking of her.
I want to be at her side.

panel 3

I live with my sister Annie and my dad, who I'm only able
to see weekends since he works a lot.
LeydenTheWolf
9 years, 3 months ago
Nice job with the text language. =)
MviluUatusun
3 years, 7 months ago
I've got two questions.  The first one is, what happened to Part 1, Pages 2 through 7?  Second, what happened to the storyline.  It went to pretty dark pretty quickly.
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