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Commission: The secret of my mom :Page 01:
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Jimmythereptile

Comic by me.

NOTE: Excuse me if my English its bad.

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Type: Comic
Published: 9 years, 5 months ago
Rating: General

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HeattheDragon
9 years, 5 months ago
Oh La La~
Otakon
9 years, 5 months ago
HeattheDragon
9 years, 5 months ago
Touché xD
Foxie03
9 years, 5 months ago
DUN, DUN, DUUUUNNN!!! *couldn't resist*
FoxyLove
9 years, 5 months ago
1st panal should say: A chest? What could be inside? For the 3rd: A VHS! And the last panal, Cream should say: Yes. Mom is hiding something and I would like to know what it is.

Other than that it looks to soon get very interesting. ;)
Otakon
9 years, 5 months ago
Fixed.
Thanks again =)
FoxyLove
9 years, 5 months ago
Not a problem. ;) and my bad. Also on the last panel. Tails first word should have been: Did
Otakon
9 years, 5 months ago
I see well because he is talking in present.
RabidRaccoon
9 years, 5 months ago
just a small thing too...  In that same panel, Tails should be saying "Did you say...." instead of "Do you say...."

^^;
Kiitsuu
9 years, 5 months ago
Ooooohhh, this is going to get interesting :3
NBbowler
9 years, 5 months ago
Uh oh, I think Vanilla may have been the star of a few adult films in the past!
GurahkWeavile
9 years, 5 months ago
This should be good
slicerness
9 years, 5 months ago
I do beta work for alot of fanfiction, so if you don't mind I could clean up the text for you? Or rather, write out the best sounding version of what you have them saying and write it here for you to look over so you can change it if you want, because I have zero artistic ability. If I tried I would need to add a giant white square to put the new text in and that would ruin the page.

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Panel 1:
Cream: A chest? I wonder what's inside of it...

Panel 3:
Cream: A VHS tape!

Panel 4:
Tails: So you just found this tape in a chest with no label?
Cream: Yeah! Mom's hiding something, I just know it, and I want to know what!
Otakon
9 years, 5 months ago
Thank you very much. =)

I like do all of my comics, since sketches to color, inclusive print if is in physical format.

I try always talk right, my problem in general is the english grammar but im learning it bit to bit writing it and doing the corrections.

I will use this post like a call of atenttion to improve my dialogues. I must read books.
slicerness
9 years, 5 months ago
You have gotten better, noticeably, since I started following you a while back, so I think you're making good progress.

Keep up the good work!
Otakon
9 years, 5 months ago
Thank you. =)
thebleedinginferno
9 years, 5 months ago
according to that rump, the plot thickens
DangerDragon
9 years, 5 months ago
this better not be a they watch porn and fuck story!
i want to see them watch that and then Vanilla and shadow come to teach them! >:P
cmy2001539
9 years, 5 months ago
Love it
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