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Crazy Future Part 36

Character Card : Apple Eden
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Crazy Future Part 35
Crazy Future Part 37
"She can see ghost but she fear ghost..."

Shipping and Descendant Warning :
Spike X Rarity(Nightmare pony) = Sparity(Daughter)
Pinkie Pie X ??? = Super Surprise(Descendant)
(Spifire X Soarin) X (Daring Do X Ahuizotl) = Aerial Ace(Descendant)
Big Macintosh X Fluttershy = Apple Eden (Descendant)

Warning : This story takes place 100 years after Rarity dead. This story base on season 4. So anything that happened in season 5 will have nothing to do with this story.

Warning : This story's an alternate universe and is really crazy at times. Futa-spell or the magic that can make female pony impregnate another female pony doesn't exist.

Warning : a lot of 4th wall breaking and referencing. Sharing universe with "To Love God - To Love Mortal" but in the future and more crazy. *You don't need to read "To Love God - To Love Mortal" to understand this story. It's just have many Easter egg for that story here.*

If you confused about chronology of this story, You can watch this timeline to help you => https://vavacung.deviantart.com/art/Crazy-Future-Timeli...

English Editor : https://dracoblair.deviantart.com/

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mlp 67,724, twilight sparkle 8,395, rarity 6,656, spike 6,079, ocs 4,885, future 1,096, nightmare rarity 270, background pony 212, mane6 190
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Type: Picture/Pinup
Published: 9 years, 5 months ago
Rating: General

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MrFox2020
9 years, 5 months ago
Must...resist...sixth sense joke!
IkosVharr
9 years, 5 months ago
" MrFox2020 wrote:
Must...resist...sixth sense joke!


i see dead people
fsLeg
9 years, 5 months ago
"I see dead ponies. All the time."
lerwin
9 years, 5 months ago
sixth sense?
shadowfox79
9 years, 5 months ago
Plot Twist Mode On...
It's not that she sees dead ponies .. but that she is one herself ...
kinda like a changeling who has forgotten that it was a changeling and the identity of the ponysona it was mimicking became the dominant part of its mind overruling its original ponysona..

So to put it simply eden is a changeling who has forgotten that it was a changeling and now firmly believes that it really is eden....
There ya go..
Plot Twist Mode Off
LTemplar
9 years, 5 months ago
Can changelings see dead ponies?
shadowfox79
9 years, 5 months ago
since changelings are basically for a simple term a form of necromorph (like in deadspace) or something like that
as they are spawn by placing abducted ponies into the egg sacks that get laid by queen chrysalis that changes them  
i would deduce that they could "see" and track other "dead" ponies by perhaps a pheromone scent or something just like ants and wasps do while also having a quasi hive mind being lead by their queen
TenchiArizonia
9 years, 5 months ago
Your plot twist makes sense.... Except it was Applejack who married a changling.
vavacung
9 years, 5 months ago
This story doesn't share universe with When Villain Win. So no...Applejack don't married with Changeling here.
Ryusett
9 years, 5 months ago
she can see dead ponies "i did it for you mrfox"
Fresnor
9 years, 5 months ago
She's the Ghost Horse Whisperer?
SentinelX
9 years, 5 months ago
Maybe she's the Ghost Pony Rider.
UltraSonic
9 years, 5 months ago
<3
ElfenSciuridae
9 years, 5 months ago
The Apple of Eden from the Tree of Knowledge One is NOT Supposed to Know? Interesting name there.

And now that everything is cleared up from the last comic, just one question...
by "great-great-grandmother" is she referring to Granny Smith? Because as Big X Fluttershy's child, that would make Granny Smith her a great-grandmother and not great-great-grandmother.

Yes, I'm nitpicking.
vavacung
9 years, 5 months ago
Nope. Fluttershy is really be great-great grandmother of Apple Eden.
ElfenSciuridae
9 years, 5 months ago
Hmmm...
PrysmTKitsune
9 years, 5 months ago
she is the 'desendent' of flutershy and big mac, there are a few generations after not stated cause we wouldnt know them, its like this flutershy and mac have a kid, that kid got married and had a kid of its own and that kid was apple eden.or maybe shes the kid of the kid of the kid gaah head hurts anyway theres several generations between her and flutershy nad big mac
ElfenSciuridae
9 years, 5 months ago
I do understand both the English Language and the passing down of Genetic Traits through the Generations.
Unless each Generation gave birth to the other one in less than 25 years, 4 generations is not going to fit in 100 years.

That is in Human terms, unless you are counting Horse years. Horses sexually mature in 3 to 5 years and die in about 25 to 30 when domesticated, less than 15 in the wild.
vavacung
9 years, 5 months ago
100 year ago is the day that Rarity die by old age....
PrysmTKitsune
9 years, 5 months ago
the aproximate lifespan of a pony in equestria is never mentioned so far as im aware, however, given that vava changed the comics opener a little recently stateing this takes place 170 years after season 4, and 100 years after rarity 'died' and asuming that she died at a relativly old age due to her magical nature [90 since she was probly in her 20s in the show] as tot he breeding rate that too is never discused so vava can asume its anything they wish.
LatinoOso1965
9 years, 5 months ago
She is so adorable and has a special skill. I bet on Nightmare Night that will be hell for Eden well done my friend.
Taoaliah
9 years, 5 months ago
so cute ^w^
Tenshineko
9 years, 5 months ago
So she's like a Ghost Whisperer? *Ducks from the 1,000 lb load of bricks* I'm sorry!!!
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