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An Automatons Heart

Jynx! You owe me a Pin-up!
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Keywords female 1005961, fox 233119, sonic team 19246, robot 16972, miles tails prower 14135, death 11017, android 4594, auto-fiona 7
“Stop! I can’t bring myself to fight you!”

I don’t want to do this! Please, stop me! I don’t want to hurt him! I don’t want to-


“Finish him off, Automaton! I’m outta here!”

New Mission: Terminate Miles Prower


“Yes mas-blbl” Her voice was lost as she was pulled unerwater.

NO! SAY NO, DAMN IT!


Her body moved of its own volition, her most core programming in control as she was forced to watch the one she loved struggle to escape her, beaten and struggling to move.

“My submarine,” he choked, reaching for his ship, “I gotta reach it and escape.”

FASTER! YOU’VE GOTTA MOVE FASTER, TAILS! I’M CATCHING UP!


“Not in this lifetime, Tails.” Her voice growled without her control, gripping the fox’s head and pushing it under the water, “You’re going down once.”

The fox boys head was brought back up, sputtering, “Fuh-Fiona, don’t do this,” He pleaded, “Remember our moonlit walks, holding hands.”

“Twice,” Her body forced his under again; she could feel the unwanted grin on her own face.

I do remember, she sobbed mentally, a prisoner in her own hard drive, I’m sorry, I’m so sorry.


His head was brought up, too weak to struggle anymore, “Once more and I’ll drown,” he sputtered, “P-Please, Fiona…I love you…”

I love you too, Tails. I’m sorry, I was made to love you, I truly loved you, and I failed.


“Threeeee-,” Her body froze.

Conflict detected. Unit-0609141501 Primary Mission: Seduce/Love Miles Prower conflicting Assigned Mission: Terminate Miles Prower


Attempting resolution…

Resolution error, attempting contact with central computer…


“I knew you couldn’t do it-Fiona?”

Contact failed, error unresolved, attempting system resolution…

NO, YOU WILL NOT HURT HIM!


Mission conflict with system intelligence…


“-But I’ll make him repair you, and we can be together again, my love,” He cried for her, tears she wished she could shed.

Fatal error detected, attempting resolution…

I’m sorry, my love, but I don’t think that will happen, she thought as she saw him chase her fat bastard of a creator.

Fatal System Error Resolution failed…

In fact, she thought sadly, I’m afraid this is the end for me.

Fatal System Error

Error

Error


She watched him ride his sub off into the sunset, trying to hold on to the thoughts of their time together as she felt her systems fall apart, their playing on the beach-

Error

Error

Sharing a meal together, carving initials into a tree-

Error


Watching the sun set…their first kiss…

System Failure

System Failure

A single tear fell from her eye as the darkness closed in, her systems crashing.

I love you, Miles Prower
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
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First in pool
Last in pool
A little something I wrote on the spur of the moment a while back.

For those who don't know, Fiona the Auto-Automaton, or Auto-Fiona, was a character from the Sonic Comics (Issue 28 and 29), a robot based off the then imprisoned Fiona Fox meant to seduce and capture Tails so he could be robotisized, but he broke the machine so she was ordered to kill him. In the comic, she stopped because she rusted solid, which is bull to me for three reasons. 1. Robotnik has done some weird stuff, but I doubt he's stupid enough to have an android that can rust 2. She was in the water for less than ten minutes, and I know of no solid metal that rusts that quick and 3. In issue 28, you see her and Tails running in the water, and she is perfectly fine. So, I made this…

I may make a second part, as I do have some ideas, but we'll see...

Please tell me what you think, I'd like to know folks, it helps me improve, I think...

Keywords
female 1,005,961, fox 233,119, sonic team 19,246, robot 16,972, miles tails prower 14,135, death 11,017, android 4,594, auto-fiona 7
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Type: Writing - Document
Published: 10 years, 8 months ago
Rating: Mature

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Lurdanjo
10 years, 7 months ago
Dang. As a huge fan of that storyline when it first came out all those years ago, and one of the things that got me both into the furry fandom as well as giving me my current huge interest in lifelike androids, this story definitely flooded me with feels. Not bad at all.
WhiteWhiskey
10 years, 7 months ago
Thanks, it's nice to hear from someone on this. I sorta worried I'd rushed it a bit (I'd thought about it for a few months, but only took an hour or two to write it out).

I have a couple of plans for a pair of sequels, but I am working on something on another site at the moment. Maybe next month...
Lurdanjo
10 years, 7 months ago
If you were to write anything in the near future about lifelike androids or other synthetic entities portrayed in a sympathetic light, I'd love that very much! Glad to hear you have some plans for at least pseudo-sequels, though! The writing isn't bad at all, I definitely think you could go places if you keep it up. :)
WhiteWhiskey
9 years, 9 months ago
Not something written, but I got a commission you might want to see Here
DarkBlue666
9 years, 9 months ago
Oh man... It's always Tails who ends up with the tragic relationships, isn't it? Cosmo, Fiona, the real Fiona, Mina...
This stuff brings out something in my core. I hardly even remember that comic anymore, but I sure recall Tails and Fiona together in the moonlight... That doesn't leave you easily. :(
Brilliant work on this. I'd really like to read more, if you're in the making of something. ;)
Rojin321
9 years, 9 months ago
Total agreement, I'd definitely love to see this really go somewhere.
humbird0
8 years, 1 month ago
I love this. I remember reading that comic, and that little side-story was one of my favorites.
humbird0
8 years, 1 month ago
I was thinking about this story earlier today, and something interesting occurred to me:
In later (unrelated) cartoons and games, Tails is portrayed as being very good with technology.
... What if his tragic encounter with Fiona is the reason why?

And that inspired a very interesting story idea:

why tails became a genius with technology.txt
WhiteWhiskey
8 years, 1 month ago
It is an interesting idea
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