I've been fighting the urge to draw pokemon fanarts cause I'm pretty excited about X and Y coming out =x I just don't have time right now with all the comic pages that need to be done x.x
I love this panel! but i would like it more if the spirit animals sentence were worded differently. you have the old style spiritualistic speech that pulls this whole seen together so nicely but some of the words they use seem out of place for that type of speech
I would like it better if it went something like this:
"For as long as Domestics have walked this land,My brothers (and sisters Optional) have been seen as bringers of omen. The wolf Spirit, Stealer of souls and I, The Bringer of curses. If that is the image of us you choose to paint, so shall we be!"
"As long as there are those who believe in these omens, You shall no longer walk this land as its children. Your lives shall no longer know prosperity, Your lives forever cast from the sacred circle of life; Unable to die (and unable to give birth Optional but helps set the mood). If you are killed by a force outside of nature; You will not be reborn but, instead-- Your soul will be taken by the wolf spirit to wander aimlessly in the void."
"Once our land is rid of these vile believers, the Curse shall be lifted, and your souls set free."
I that was suggested to me by a friend, your free to use it or not but i hope it helps you with future dialogs similar to this
I love this panel! but i would like it more if the spirit animals sentence were worded differently.
What cruel spirits. Insulted by others, they resort to punish their faithful followers if they don't complete their assigned task of genocide against the domestics (sure the domestic are persecuting the wild ones). Might makes right?
What cruel spirits. Insulted by others, they resort to punish their faithful followers if they don't
