Over 3 years have passed since I drew the original first page of Critters in Space. I draw a bit different now (mostly digital) and thus decided to start from scratch.
I hired Karno to revamp the layout to make it more dynamic. And then I used this layout to draw the WIP of this first page. Please comment how you like it.
ALSO! I need a better name for the comic. Critters in Space does not have the same ring anymore. I need something awesome to lure in potential readers. And to sweeten the deal. The one who's name I pick will get a doddle from me for free.
Here is a short summary of what is happening. Space exploration, but in a gritty and perverted universe with sex. Main characters are all cute animals. They work on a gigantic salvaging ship (called bellybutton) capable of looting whole planets. There they meet all kinds of strange creatures and sometimes always have sex with them.
Edit: One thing that came to mind after reading the suggestions might be In-sanity In space
Playing off the many similar letters... but it's not quite there yet. Keep the suggestions comming. Sanity Optional?
Belly Button Space Salvage(rs) Yiff Ship Sex Ship Sex Salvage(rs) Yiff Salvage(rs)
Obviously the parentheses are to signify optional parts of the name. Like Salvage, or Salvagers. Auto correct doesn't like salvagers either, so I dunno.
Oh, one more 'out-there' sugggestion...
Perverse Bellybutton
Well, or Perverted Bellybutton, I guess.
I dunno. Any of those close?
Edit: since I can still edit....
playing off Bubblegum Crisis, how about 'Bellybutton Emergency!'?
or you could just be real obvious, and call it Furvert. I know, I know, just throwing it out here, probably not.
hmm...some ideas. Belly Button Space Salvage(rs) Yiff Ship Sex Ship Sex Salvage(rs) Yiff Salvage(rs
Hm... pretty good basic ideas. It's just that salvaging is not the focus point. Yes the ship happens to be a salvaging ship, but that is not the point.
The main part are cute animales, in space having adventures that are often sexy.
Hm... pretty good basic ideas. It's just that salvaging is not the focus point. Yes the ship happens
Oh... I like it... I like it a lot. Just a tiny bit of extra and we are good. When the people only read the name then they might not get the link to Parsec.
Perhaps combine it with the old title? Parsex: Critters in Space?
Oh... I like it... I like it a lot. Just a tiny bit of extra and we are good. When the people only r