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Space Comic: Take 2 - WIP - Still need a name!

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Over 3 years have passed since I drew the original first page of Critters in Space. I draw a bit different now (mostly digital) and thus decided to start from scratch.

I hired Karno to revamp the layout to make it more dynamic. And then I used this layout to draw the WIP of this first page. Please comment how you like it.

ALSO!
I need a better name for the comic. Critters in Space does not have the same ring anymore. I need something awesome to lure in potential readers. And to sweeten the deal. The one who's name I pick will get a doddle from me for free.

Here is a short summary of what is happening. Space exploration, but in a gritty and perverted universe with sex. Main characters are all cute animals. They work on a gigantic salvaging ship (called bellybutton) capable of looting whole planets. There they meet all kinds of strange creatures and sometimes always have sex with them.


Edit: One thing that came to mind after reading the suggestions might be
In-sanity
In space

Playing off the many similar letters... but it's not quite there yet. Keep the suggestions comming.
Sanity Optional?

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Type: Comic
Published: 11 years, 5 months ago
Rating: General

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Volsar
11 years, 5 months ago
Salvaging Sexual Sanity
SenGrisane
11 years, 5 months ago
Hm... I don't want to focus on the sex that much to warrant a full title.
Khzhak
11 years, 5 months ago
hmm...some ideas.

Belly Button
Space Salvage(rs)
Yiff Ship
Sex Ship
Sex Salvage(rs)
Yiff Salvage(rs)

Obviously the parentheses are to signify optional parts of the name.  Like Salvage, or Salvagers.  Auto correct doesn't like salvagers either, so I dunno.

Oh, one more 'out-there' sugggestion...

Perverse Bellybutton

Well, or Perverted Bellybutton, I guess.

I dunno.  Any of those close?

Edit: since I can still edit....

playing off Bubblegum Crisis, how about 'Bellybutton Emergency!'?

or you could just be real obvious, and call it Furvert.  I know, I know, just throwing it out here, probably not.
SenGrisane
11 years, 5 months ago
Hm... pretty good basic ideas. It's just that salvaging is not the focus point. Yes the ship happens to be a salvaging ship, but that is not the point.

The main part are cute animales, in space having adventures that are often sexy.
Circeus
11 years, 5 months ago
If the characters' personalities work for it, "Space Dicks"
SenGrisane
11 years, 5 months ago
Well there will be girls too ^^

Some of them are dicks, but not everyone :3
Kupofox
11 years, 5 months ago
Backyard bootietime space butt pirates. In space.
SenGrisane
11 years, 5 months ago
Very over the top. Not bad.

But they are not pirates. And what is with backyard?
HattieTheHat
11 years, 5 months ago
Pigs In Space. (nah, j/k)

How about "Lightyear High Club"? Like the Mile High club, but, well, you know...
SenGrisane
11 years, 5 months ago
Hm... I like the basic idea. It just does not roll of the tongue as well.

Maybe there is another unit to measure distances in space that would work better?
HattieTheHat
11 years, 5 months ago
OMG! I don't know how I didn't realise this sooner; "Parsex"
SenGrisane
11 years, 5 months ago
Oh... I like it... I like it a lot. Just a tiny bit of extra and we are good. When the people only read the name then they might not get the link to Parsec.

Perhaps combine it with the old title?
Parsex: Critters in Space?
HattieTheHat
11 years, 5 months ago
Sounds good.
SenGrisane
11 years, 5 months ago
I'll leave it open for a while more, but I think your chances are good ;3
Chelsea
11 years, 5 months ago
everyone have crappy idea here :I

you should just stick with Critters in Space

all the sex, yiff inuendo and what not are really really bad and lack of imagination
SenGrisane
11 years, 5 months ago
Hm... i did not specifically ask for sexy title.
I will keep you hint in mind.
Yanshine
11 years, 5 months ago
Adventure Cuties? I mean, this title could have a series! For instance, Adventure Cuties: in space!
SenGrisane
11 years, 5 months ago
Cuties in space ^^

There are already a lot of comics with the name Adventure in it. I wanna try to stick out.
Yanshine
11 years, 5 months ago
Well why not Cutie Critters? :D Still able to make diffrent plots and series! :3
" SenGrisane wrote:
Cuties in space ^^

There are already a lot of comics with the name Adventure in it. I wanna try to stick out.
SenGrisane
11 years, 5 months ago
Hm... Cutie Critters does not sound in the directing I was hoping ^^
Thanks for your suggestion :3
Yanshine
11 years, 5 months ago
Whatta ya mean? XD Give me a tip, I probably would give you a nice title! (Its mah thing.. Ya know??)
SenGrisane
11 years, 5 months ago
Okay we have:

Cuddlyey animals
We have gritty and silly SciFi setting
We have sex
We have odd humor.
Yanshine
11 years, 5 months ago
Can you give me a total plot to this comic?
SenGrisane
11 years, 5 months ago
I dunno in detail yet, but it goes like this.

Bunch of misfits get thrown together and have adventures on planets and ships, fight enemies based on puns and funny references.
Yanshine
11 years, 5 months ago
How many Main characters? :L
SenGrisane
11 years, 5 months ago
For now... around 5
Yanshine
11 years, 5 months ago
Hm.. How about "Ready, Scare, Sex, Laugh, Space!!" (Ready 3,2,1 go!) this is a random Justo ut of thought title I'll give you a good one soon tho X3
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