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Quicksand date (+short story)

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William315
William315

Felt like doing a story for this, though don't count on that happening for future art won from raffles.


"Trust me, it's fine!", Bambi said as he smacks a hoof against the clay-rich quicksand, splattering some around. Faline still wasn't so sure, looking down at the indentation Bambi had made. "I don't know... We're always told to stay away from things like this..."

"Relax, I've actually sunk here before, and I've never even gone under. We can get out no problem!"

"...Alright. I suppose you would know." Faline hesitantly steps into the quicksand, and Bambi happily follows her in. They both go to about the middle of this fairly small pool before they stop, looking down as they begin sinking. Bambi smiles at Faline, who begins to warm up to the situation. "...This feels better than I thought it would!" Bambi nods. "I know! The first time, I didn't expect it to feel this good!"

The two continue slowly sinking, the cool quicksand taking in more and more of each deer's body; knees, thighs, torso... Almost too soon, all that was still above the surface were Bambi and Faline's necks and heads. As even that started to change, Bambi looks down at the quicksand. "...I think, this time, I'm gonna go under. You should come with me!" After a moment to think, Faline smiles and nods. "Sure! I bet it'll feel even better!"

As the quicksand passes their necks, they tilt their heads back to get one last deep breath, before finally being fully submerged in the quicksand. This was actually Bambi's first time needing to hold his breath, although Faline had done some swimming in the past. Bubbles leave the duo's nostrils, though neither see them, having their eyes closed. They both smile between puffed cheeks, and allow themselves to slowly sink deeper...

Minutes pass, the air in each deer's young lungs being slowly used up, and bubbles gradually becoming more common. As nice as the quicksand still feels, the need to breathe was making it harder and harder to relax, and muffled whines can eventually be heard as a burning feeling forms in Bambi and Faline's chests. Finally, after just over 8 minutes of breath holding, Faline decides she's had enough, and starts scrambling for the quicksand pool's surface, bubbles trailing from her lips. With how thick the quicksand is, especially because of how much clay is in it, she has some trouble swimming, but gradually gains height.

Nearly a minute and a half later, she nears her limit, the last of her breath sputtering loose and cheeks deflating. But, managing to hold off inhaling for just a few seconds, Faline surfaces just in time, heavily gasping and coughing. Panting hard, she struggles her way to get fully up to the surface, standing on the quicksand again and starting to make her way to the shore. Once she gets there, she sits down and wipes the quicksand from her face, breathing heavily for a bit longer. That was WAY too close, but she was okay. Faline giggles at how filthy she is, and heads off to go clean herself up, having forgotten all about the friend she'd sunk with, and not even noticing a large cluster of bubbles popping on the quicksand's surface.

Half a minute prior, Bambi struggled harder and harder, not yet going to the surface, thinking he's not far from it. He blushed purple and eventually blue as his body shook all over, pushing himself to his absolute limit... Finally, a cloud of bubbles gushed from his mouth as he lost the fight to hold his breath. With barely enough air left to even whine, he finally started swimming up, doing everything he could to keep from breathing until he'd surface... But, about 10 seconds later, and with the distant surface still not reached, Bambi no longer had a say in whether his lungs would be staying empty. He shuddered once more, and his mouth opened wide again, this time to flood his throat and lungs with quicksand! He thrashed aimlessly, choking and gagging while still trying to swim up, though he was unaware he'd gotten turned around in his struggles and was actually now swimming back down.

The drowning deer rapidly weakens as what little oxygen he has left in his blood is used up, and in only about 20 seconds after his first gasp, he goes limp, now lacking the strength to move. The very last of his entirely used-up air gurgles free in a few bubbles, and he hiccups as he twitches, still trying to swim, barely able to feel anything... Until he feels nothing, losing consciousness, eventually finally reaching the bottom of the quicksand pool he'd enjoyed so much.


The next thing Bambi knows, he's on dry land, hacking out quicksand in big globs. When he can open his eyes, he can see his parents standing over him. "S...Sorry...", he manages to wheeze out between coughs. His dad just shakes his head. "You can't let yourself drown in a place like this quicksand. If you truly want to experience it, stick to somewhere where you can be seen, like water." Bambi looks up at him, very much confused at his lack of concern. "...What?" His dad looks to his mom. "Did you not tell him? I thought he did this because he knew."

"I've never said a word about it to him, I didn't think he was ready to know!"

"Then we should explain. He's old enough to understand." Bambi's dad crouches down to be closer to Bambi's level. "You, I, and your mother have no need for air. We still feel like we do, and pass out like anyone else if we go without any for too long, but it's never any danger." Bambi's mom nods. "It runs in our family. I remember my granddad had it too, and he said his did as well."

"So... Drowning will never hurt me?"

"Not on its own.", Bambi's dad says. "But something could still happen to you after that, and you wouldn't be able to do anything about it. In the future, don't let yourself drown unless someone is around to help after, okay?"

"...I'm not sure I even want to do it again at all, it hurt so bad..."

Now fully recovered, Bambi gets up and heads with his parents to get the quicksand cleaned off of him, eventually finding Faline again, who profusely apologizes for forgetting about him.

Keywords
male 1,167,824, female 1,056,446, feral 88,970, young 64,421, deer 28,918, drowning 2,908, bambi 1,622, quicksand 617, sinking 596, breath holding 444, faline 282, non fatal 217
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Type: Picture/Pinup
Published: 9 months, 1 week ago
Rating: Mature

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William315
9 months, 1 week ago
I LOVE IT!!!
William315
9 months ago
mucky
mucky


like what you see?
William315
8 months, 4 weeks ago
(small RP starter) (a familiar humanoid fox is heard nearby) Bambi, Bambi? you there? i got your message
lolboy4
8 months, 3 weeks ago
(Should Bambi be on land, sinking, or already under?)
William315
8 months, 3 weeks ago
(i planned on doing this in PMs too cuz of stupid PS3 web buttons not working, but he's just about to jump back into the pit)
lolboy4
8 months, 3 weeks ago
(Then we'll do it in PMs. Forgot you use a PS3 for this)
William315
6 months, 3 weeks ago
(in this, he's happily sinking and already up past his legs)
lolboy4
6 months, 3 weeks ago
Bambi: "Man, I can't believe I went so long without knowing how good it feels to sink!"
William315
6 months, 3 weeks ago
Bambi, are you there?
lolboy4
6 months, 3 weeks ago
"Oh! Will, is that you?"
William315
6 months, 3 weeks ago
Bambi? where are you?
lolboy4
6 months, 3 weeks ago
"I'm over here in this quicksand! And don't worry, I'm fine!"
William315
6 months, 3 weeks ago
(finds you) there you are! having a sink i see.
lolboy4
6 months, 3 weeks ago
"Yep! It's been a little while since last time I did this, figured it'd be nice. And it is!"
William315
6 months, 3 weeks ago
mind if i join?
lolboy4
6 months, 3 weeks ago
"Go ahead! Sinking is always better with friends!"
William315
6 months, 3 weeks ago
cannonball! (cannonballs into the mud and sinks to Bambi's eye level)
lolboy4
6 months, 3 weeks ago
Bambi laughs as the mud splatters around, and he wipes some off his face.
William315
6 months, 3 weeks ago
Youre my favorite sink buddy
lolboy4
6 months, 3 weeks ago
"Faline's my favorite, but don't worry, you're at least in second. A pretty close second, too!"
William315
6 months, 3 weeks ago
I thought so. So what has your parents been up to?
lolboy4
6 months, 3 weeks ago
"They've been doing fine, they and Faline actually came out to sink with me a while back! We had a friend pull us out, so we all got to sink together for once!"
William315
6 months, 3 weeks ago
Oh, have i met this friend? (A rabbit and a skunk were in hearing range)

( supposed to be Thumper and Flower)
lolboy4
6 months, 3 weeks ago
Bambi: "Well, there's two actually, just one wasn't strong enough. I don't think you've met them... Oh, I think I see them, actually! Hey Thumper, Flower!"

Thumper: "Oh hey, Bambi! Oh, he's that Will guy, isn't he?"
William315
6 months, 3 weeks ago
that's me, Flood or Fact game show host and Titanic 2 captain. it's nice to meet you 2
lolboy4
6 months, 3 weeks ago
Flower: "Good to meet you too! Bambi's told us a lot about you, hehe!"

Thumper: "We don't have that nonlethal drowning thing Bambi has, so we're just gonna be staying on shore."
William315
6 months, 3 weeks ago
i can help you with that.
lolboy4
6 months, 3 weeks ago
Flower: "Right, giving your blood can transfer that... Are you sure that's safe, though?"

Thumper: "I-I'm not sure I'd even want to drown in the first place..."

Bambi: "Yeah, I didn't think you would, Thumper, that's why I never really talked about that much with you."
William315
6 months, 3 weeks ago
well, Bambi's blood would be safer on your bodies, but you'd still drown normally and pass out like he does. so take your pick i guess
lolboy4
6 months, 3 weeks ago
Flower: "I think I'll go with Bambi's then, to stay safe. Who knows, I might end up liking drowning!"

Thumper: "Will, yours just lets someone breathe anything, right? I'd prefer that, I think."
William315
6 months, 3 weeks ago
ok. we'll do blood swaps later. meantime, you can watch (the earth under Thumper and Flower collapses, sending both into the mud)
lolboy4
6 months, 3 weeks ago
Thumper: "Ah! Crap, I don't want to sink!"

Flower: "J-jeez, not right now!" She and Thumper struggle to get out of the mud.

Bambi: "Hang on, I'll help!" He starts working his way toward them.
William315
6 months, 3 weeks ago
(due to thier small size, Thumper and Flower didn't sink. but Bambi was sinking quickly and was growing more difficult to move for him)
lolboy4
6 months, 3 weeks ago
Thumper sighs in relief. "Good, it stopped... That could've been really bad!"

Flower: "...Now that we're not sinking, this is actually kind of nice!"

Bambi: "Okay, good, you guys are gonna be fine..."
William315
6 months, 3 weeks ago
(Bambi was almost mouth deep) sinking quickly i see
lolboy4
6 months, 3 weeks ago
Bambi: "Must be because I was trying to get over to them... Don't remember the last time I sank this fast!"
William315
6 months, 3 weeks ago
(Bambi's mouth goes under)
lolboy4
6 months, 3 weeks ago
Bambi tilts his head back enough to breathe through his nose while he still can.
William315
6 months, 3 weeks ago
he does love it
lolboy4
6 months, 3 weeks ago
Flower: "He sure does, he's always telling me how great it feels to sink."

Thumper: "It's kind of a wonder he doesn't just inhale right when he goes under, instead of holding his breath."

Bambi giggles a little at that, some bubbles rising up.
William315
6 months, 3 weeks ago
to be honest, i think he likes holding his breath cuz of the thrill it adds. many other friends i have enjoy it too, even i dblo. (mouth dipped under at the last word. (Thumper and Flower decide to be brave and join us under)
lolboy4
6 months, 3 weeks ago
Thumper: "...You know what, I'll try out going under after all."

Flower: "Make sure to get us out eventually!"

They both hold their breath and dig their way under the mud as Bambi starts needing to hold his breath too.
William315
6 months, 3 weeks ago
mhm. blows bubbles in the mud
lolboy4
6 months, 3 weeks ago
Bambi happily blows some bubbles as well, though Thumper and Flower both keep their breath in for now.
William315
6 months, 3 weeks ago
(after a couple minutes, i think Thumper and Flower need to surface. i push them up to the surface)
lolboy4
6 months, 3 weeks ago
They were definitely getting close to badly needing to, and they both gasp. They're able to stay on the surface on their own now.
William315
6 months, 3 weeks ago
(i give them a thumbs up)
lolboy4
6 months, 3 weeks ago
Thumper: "Thanks for that, I was getting a little worried about coming back up."

Flower: "That felt pretty good... Maybe I WOULD be okay with drowning after all. Once I get that ability that'll make it safe, anyway."
William315
6 months, 3 weeks ago
(i cuddle Bambi under the mud)
lolboy4
6 months, 3 weeks ago
Bambi does his best to cuddle you back, happily bubbling some even though he's feeling a need to breathe.
William315
6 months, 3 weeks ago
(i blow into Bambi's mouth, slightly overfilling his lungs. my air was fresh due to me not needing oxygen)
lolboy4
6 months, 3 weeks ago
Inflating a little from your breath, Bambi giggles out some bubbles.
William315
6 months, 3 weeks ago
(i resume cuddling)
lolboy4
6 months, 3 weeks ago
With his air having been refreshed by you, Bambi's lungs feel as if he'd just gone under, and he's perfectly fine with staying down cuddling you longer.
William315
6 months, 3 weeks ago
(we eventually hit the bottom) hmm
lolboy4
6 months, 3 weeks ago
Bambi sits down on the bottom once he realizes that's where he's at, wondering exactly how deep he is.
William315
6 months, 3 weeks ago
(wristband off. i inhale) we must be at least 3 yards deep
lolboy4
6 months, 3 weeks ago
Bambi nods, before remembering you probably can't see that. "Niblce anbld deblep doblwn...~"
William315
6 months, 2 weeks ago
i won't be surprised if it takes us a while to get back to the surface
lolboy4
6 months, 2 weeks ago
"Ibl dobln't reblallbly miblnd, itbl's woblrth iblt."
William315
6 months, 2 weeks ago
even if you drown?
lolboy4
6 months, 2 weeks ago
"Yeblp, evblen thblen. Ibl wiblsh Ibl cobluld geblt oublt obln mbly owbln afblter thblougblh, Ibl dobln't liblke mablkinblg otblherbls dblo iblt."
William315
6 months, 2 weeks ago
it's no trouble, what are friends for? (Bambi runs out of air after he finishes his sentence)
lolboy4
6 months, 2 weeks ago
"Alblwaybls niblce tblo hblave yoblur hblelp!" With that, Bambi's lungs are entirely empty, but he doesn't really mind even though he's starting to struggle some.
William315
6 months, 2 weeks ago
(Rubbing his chest to help keep his discomfirt low)
lolboy4
6 months, 2 weeks ago
While Bambi appreciates that, it's fairly quickly becoming less and less effective as he gets closer to running out of breath.
William315
6 months, 2 weeks ago
(The rubbing also greatly helps soothe pain when he eventually inhales and starts to drown)
lolboy4
6 months, 2 weeks ago
As he starts sucking in mud, Bambi is a bit surprised that the rubbing on his chest is helping quite a bit with the pain. He's almost able to breathe normally, but he does still cough a lot.
William315
6 months, 2 weeks ago
Attaboy, just try to breathe normally
lolboy4
6 months, 2 weeks ago
Quite a bit earlier in his drowning than normal, Bambi is actually able to stop coughing, just breathing mud like it's air. He gives you a hug as thanks for your help with that.
William315
6 months, 2 weeks ago
glad i could help
lolboy4
6 months, 2 weeks ago
Soon enough, despite being so much more calm than normal, Bambi starts getting weaker as his oxygen is sued up, his breathing slowing down.
William315
6 months, 2 weeks ago
(i cuddle him)
lolboy4
6 months, 2 weeks ago
Even as he tries to stay awake, Bambi eventually can't keep his eyes open any more, and finally passes out, his face fully blue.
William315
6 months, 2 weeks ago
(i eventually take Bambi to the surface)
lolboy4
6 months, 2 weeks ago
Mud pours from Bambi's mouth and nose as his body stays limp and unconscious.
William315
6 months, 2 weeks ago
(i get him to safe ground and do mouth-to-mouth)
lolboy4
6 months, 2 weeks ago
Bambi wakes up before too long, coughing up the mud from his lungs and starting to catch his breath.
William315
6 months, 2 weeks ago
how are you feeling?
lolboy4
6 months, 2 weeks ago
"I-I'm fine..." With a few more coughs, all the mud is out of him. "Thanks for bringing me back up."
William315
6 months, 2 weeks ago
what are friends for?
lolboy4
6 months, 2 weeks ago
Bambi gives you a hug.
William315
6 months, 1 week ago
i think it's time to take our friendship up a notch. whaddaya say, best friends?
lolboy4
6 months, 1 week ago
"Of course! Ha, I thought we already were!"
William315
6 months, 1 week ago
then it's settled
lolboy4
6 months, 1 week ago
"Yep, now it's official!"
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