- the prey didn't die at first strike and they are in mortal danger? why? (that g r k... means something?) . . .cliffhangers! cliffhangers everywhere! :-)
- there is a problem with lettering? the apostrophe does not show in the balloons of the next-to-last panel, but does in the previous one.
- love the first panel. very well done. - the prey didn't die at first strike and they are in morta