This is Gilda sitting on the edge of the swamp reading some notes about a medicine she wants to make. She is the master of the Element of Health and her potions can cure any kind of status, mostly because her body produces a lot of toxins so she intimately understands any kind of problem that could affect the body (You can still make love to her and not get sick. Most of her mucus has healing properties).
I really think that if body parts are overlapping like this, I probably should layer them out. Still getting a grip on the shading technique, but in the end, I just have to take my time with it and not rush. That's how to get the clean effect I want.