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How Grasshopper Mouse Got His Howl

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Keywords male 1177753, wolf 191062, mouse 53460, dire wolf 922, legend 727, myth 423, howling 333, furcadia 213, grasshopper mouse 86, wolfhowl 4, origin myth 1
How Grasshopper Mouse Got His Howl
© 2012 Marvin E. Fuller


       In the BeforeTime, when mice took their first steps in the World, they encountered many other species, some uncaring, some indifferent, most dangerous.  They feared the cats above all, whispering in frightened little voices of the felines' love of torment and cruelty.  The mice took to small places, hiding from the horrible gaze of the cats who would hunt them down and kill them.  But Grasshopper Mouse felt only discontent in the shadows and small places his tribe scurried within.  He stared out at the wide World denied his people, and anger stirred within his heart.
       "Why should mice be forever prey?" Envy whispered in his ear, "Mice deserve this World as much as the cats and dogs do. Why should they hide?"  Grasshopper Mouse resolved to seek out a teacher who could show him the predators' ways and free his people from the chains of fear.  He journeyed far and wide, relentless in his hunt, ever seeking the right predator.
       He sought out Mountain Lion and Lynx, but they scoffed at the notion.  "A mouse seeks to be more than he is?" they snorted in derision. "Fool! Return to your tribe and accept your lot!"
       He asked Gray Fox and Red Fox, but they tried to eat him for their supper.  "Fool!" they laughed.  "Mice do not belong in our ranks!  They belong in our bellies!"
       Frustrated, but resolute, Grasshopper Mouse traveled on until he found Dire Wolf.  "Here is a creature even the cats fear," thought Grasshopper Mouse.  "Surely, I can learn from him."
       Dire Wolf merely laughed at the impudent creature.  "I may be the last of my tribe, ruined by those accursed cats, but never have I been as lowly as mice!  Why should I teach you?"
       Grasshopper Mouse grew angry at Dire Wolf's words.  "If you will not teach me, I will find my own way or die trying!"
       "I see fire in your heart," replied Dire Wolf, impressed by Grasshopper Mouse's boldness.  "But you need more than passion to be a Dire Wolf!"
       "Then show me!" demanded Grasshopper Mouse.  "Show me how to be like the Dire Wolf!  Let the Dire Wolf live on through me and my tribe."
       Intrigued by this strange notion, Dire Wolf agreed and taught Grasshopper Mouse the ways of a canine, bestowing upon him the secrets of the hunt, the knowledge of the pack, and the wisdom and customs of Dire Wolf's own lost tribe.
       Lastly, Dire Wolf took the WolfSong in his heart and placed it within Grasshopper Mouse's breast.  "Hear the Great Chorus," Dire Wolf said.  "Add your Voice to it, and you will be called Kin to Wolf and Dog."  Listening to the ululations of wolves and coyotes and dogs rising to the sky, Grasshopper Mouse threw back his small head and gave forth a shrill howl, defiant and fierce.  The Great Chorus answered him, lifting his cries to the sky as their new brother.  Grasshopper Mouse knew he had at last learned what he most desired and bore his gifts back to his tribe.  He taught them the ways of the lost Dire Wolves and gave each the secret of the WolfSong in his heart.
       To this day, when the Full Moon shines high over the sky, listen closely, and hear this smallest kin of wolves sing in the Great Chorus, praising the last Dire Wolf and the Song he gave them.
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
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Furcadia's 2007 WolfHowl contest inspired this tale in the style of a Native American myth.  The theme was "Things That Make You Howl", and I took the unusual course of not making it a horror story.  It was one of three First Place winners.  I've since placed it in a potential series of stories called "Tales of the BeforeTime", although, like any of my ideas, this series becoming a reality is questionable.

Grasshopper mice are real animals in the American West.  They act a lot like miniature wolves, including howling (although at a pitch we can't hear).  They hunt like big cats and are able to kill and eat a rat much larger than they are.

Story © 2007-2012 Marvin E. Fuller


Addendum: Added missing word "Mouse" to submission title.  5/16/2012

Keywords
male 1,177,753, wolf 191,062, mouse 53,460, dire wolf 922, legend 727, myth 423, howling 333, furcadia 213, grasshopper mouse 86, wolfhowl 4, origin myth 1
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Published: 12 years, 7 months ago
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Winterimage
12 years, 7 months ago
That was a wonderful little tale, it really captures the feeling of a myth. Well done.
CyberCornEntropic
12 years, 7 months ago
Thank you.  I'm glad I managed to succeed. :D

I've occasionally made up myths and legends (such as
Why the Ground Quakes by CyberCornEntropic
), but this one is the second time I've ever won anything with one.  Years ago, when I went to middle school, my main interest in myths was the Greek and Roman ones (they still are to a degree).  For a writing contest, I decided to write my own Greek myth of how Aphrodite invented snowflakes.  The entry was notable for its brevity – no more than 3-4 paragraphs long – a shortness inspired by the likes of Bullfinch's Mythology and similar. :p It won third place.
dmfalk
12 years, 7 months ago
Mice sing, laugh, and bark, and are incredibly intelligent for their size, so why not? ;)

I personally will forever treasure my time with mice. :)

Beautiful story. :) (Might want to add "Mouse" to the submission title, though. :) )

d.m.f.
CyberCornEntropic
12 years, 7 months ago
Thank you.  And thanks for the catch.  I've revised the title now.

I've personally never had mice, primarily because I already had cats, usually more than one.  And they have been good mousers.  Even today, at least two of them live release the little squeakers in my home.  Have no fear.  I catch them alive and release them outside as unharmed as possible.

Despite so short contact with those mice, I have noticed differing personalities between different individuals.  Some seem like cute, adorable little kids one just wants to hug; one like a somewhat dull, lunkhead of a marshmallow; others feisty little critters.

I went with grasshopper mice here because of the apparent contrast of our perceptions of such a creature: the small prey animal acting like one of those animals that would normally prey on it.
dmfalk
12 years, 7 months ago
Oh, yes- They do have very distinct personalities, and are very good at expressing emotion-- And a pretty good memory, too. :) Only one ever seemed indifferent to me, but was only trying to be the head mouse- Before she passed away, she leaned her chin on my hand as a sort of thank-you. That all loved me, all in different ways, just like people. :) How I could tell they had enough intelligence to communicate was that I made kissing noises at them (similar to their bark-squeaks), in patterns-- And they repeated them back at me. :) If any tried to bite me, I told them "no", gently- They stopped, and never did so again. (I did allow them to nibble on my nails. :) ) Very well-behaved, and most of my 9 mice loved to get my attention and play with me, like running up my hands & arms, reach my shoulders, reach up to my ears, then "SQUEAK, SQUEAK!"

(Oh, how they HATED cage clean-up time! :D )

Ah, the memories... :)

Yes, I loved my mice, and they loved me. :)

Most rodents, actually, are quite bright critters.

(Yes, I have cats, too-- Have had cats for most of my life, and yes, even when the mice were here. Never had any real problems between them.)

d.m.f.
CyberCornEntropic
12 years, 7 months ago
Naturally, I don't get these sorts of responses out of mice, considering that they're pretty much in the clutches of terror when I encounter them. :o

I have encountered mice that, like some humans, were too smart for their own good, like the mouse that squeezed in under the back door while my mother was across the room, watching it.  That wasn't what made the mouse too clever, though.  Rather it was the five very interested cats who lived with my family back then.

Then I heard of a wild mouse who broke into someone's home only to be quickly caught live.  Fortunately for the mouse, its captors had recently lost their pet mouse and were looking for a replacement.  At least, the mouse found a home to live in even if that wasn't exactly what it had in mind. :p

I understand cats can tell the difference between pet mice and prey mice, possibly because of context and the possibility that their humans would be extremely upset if they nibbled on the wrong mouse.
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