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DILF (Original Abandon)

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(Original Comic) DILF -XLV-
Last in pool
"The abandon of original timeline"

Warning : DILF is a story that I work several pages ahead of time. This is all pre-made I made (not include paper draft) before the story derail and end early.

Warning : All texts wasn't be proofread. Please read with caution.

Warning : It's April fools day today. I wish I could say that the ending is a lie. I wish I could say I'm fine. I wish I could lie to myself that everything will be ok. But I can't...My imagination for this story is all dead and it's not fun to do it anymore…I'm too scared to fantasize…

Keywords
dragon 106,934, comic 54,912, bird 22,687, fish 5,464, kobold 5,448, mask 4,740, weapon 3,610, cloth 1,219
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Type: Picture/Pinup
Published: 1 month, 1 week ago
Rating: General

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Mizuhiro
1 month, 1 week ago
Im sorry for you. My friends and I loved that story. But world wasn't ready for your kobold
MickiTheFox
1 month, 1 week ago
love this! would have been awesome too! XD
buwaro
1 month, 1 week ago
There was true beauty in these comics and though it's sad to see what could have been I still applaud with all the other kobolds I have been inspired by this comic.

*clap clap clap*
evoyager
1 month, 1 week ago
My heart weeps for the Untold Story. Too bad the people on Patron were less receptive to it.
StardustPony
1 month, 1 week ago
why are you scared of fantasize...
how did you get to that point
deadmeat888
1 month, 1 week ago
toxicity, hostility and threatnings... not to mention alot of other things. imagine someone wanting to kill you for a imaginary story is quite... scary. specially when hundreds do this at the same time together
noryn
1 month, 1 week ago
nah dude. It's just passive aggression because people didn't like a character's motivation.
Marstel
1 month, 1 week ago
Excellent! One should never underestimate the desire for grandchildren. 😁😆😂

Too bad it came otherwise.
ratsenkio
1 month, 1 week ago
What a shame to see a great story go to waste because of the hate of some fools
Ghakle
1 month, 1 week ago


AbsoluteKasai
1 month, 1 week ago
I really love this version >~< It would have been way better than the ending the trolls brought upon us <3
Ghakle
1 month, 1 week ago
I'm gonna be honest. Retroactive justification of something that seems gimmicky or overpowered can be funny but only if used sparingly like a spice for a dish. If it's just a repeating pattern of doing it over and over, the comedic value is lost like the flavor of a dish drowned in spice and instead of a cute gimmick, the repeated retroactive justifications appear to be an antagonization of the reader which only draws more criticism and criticism that is more harsh which may lead to the perception of an influx of 'toxic trolls'.

In this case, the kobold has gone from a cute mini-but-mighty sort to a character perceived as a Mary Sue who can do no wrong because everything they do is justified later and even the lack of flaws is later corrected by adding in irrelevant weaknesses later and the continued pattern of retroactively justifying everything appears to be just be spiteful and further antagonizing the reader even if that's not the artist's actual intent.

I've seen this kinda thing happen before with a few artists in the past and honestly, they're not even aware that they're doing it. Entire storylines get delayed while they instead try to make new pages to justify something that got questioned about in the comments section and it happens again and again, more and more viewers being hemmoraged as both viewer and artist antagonize one another until the artist is left viewed as only a spiteful over-emotional mess supported by a small group of panderers/yes-men who won't give honest reviews.

TLDR: Just write the story you want to write.

RepSouls
1 month, 1 week ago
I have to disagree with your assessment.  I don't think anything presented here pushes the envelope past what was already established in the comic.  The scene is set with good comedic timing, follows with character development then unfortunately ends before it can reach a conclusion.  I will admit that the rape portion feels a bit meta, but a) I have no way to prove when it was written and b) I can't be salty even if it is a directed at his detractors.  The reveal of the mother is nice because it solidifies dragon's backstory, the stick is a gateway into it, the opening reference is clever, and the min maxed hero getting stomped by a hard counter fits well within the self aware rpg setting.  
NeksusCat
1 month, 1 week ago
Well, it's trully sad the story didn't continue like that.. :(
*hugs tight and comforts*
It's a scary time we live in, when anything you say or do may trigger someone to be offended, even if you didn't mean to.
Wish soneone would be so kind to restore the sanity of the real world...
Otlan
1 month, 1 week ago
*Whimpers and cries before hugging you tight* I'm so sorry T_T ...this story had so much potential T_T ...

Please don't lose your creative drive though. Your such a wonderful Artist and Story Teller, no matter what a bunch of Faceless Assholes say!
PlatineDragon
1 month, 1 week ago
That would have been way better and funnier than the ending that was induced by a bunch of toxic trolls. I just want you to know that I started following yu because of this story, and that I think it would have been great if it had proceeded like that.
If one day you are willing to give it another try, I'll sure be readying it. You are a great artist.
Also, I have to say that I was surprised for hear about the haters, I didn't really read the comments to the story, and I had no idea that you were facing so much anger from some idiots online.
Don't let that get to you.
xephion
1 month, 1 week ago
You need to trust yourself more and stop caring about bad opinions you always had this problem. Dont let others decide your way of life. For every troll therewas 10 other people who loves your work
Tenkage
1 month, 1 week ago
damn I'd love to have seen this time line...please don't let the trolls get to you...
MDarrock
1 month, 1 week ago
At this point, we can't consider them trolls anymore... THEY'RE GOBLINS!!! And i heard rumors of one of could deal with them quite efficiently... A real slayer, he is...
Tenkage
1 month, 1 week ago
that would be nice
Azriel087
1 month, 1 week ago
Love it. much better
AerinPierce
1 month, 1 week ago
If this was the original idea, would have been great, some comedy that the comic had quite a bit of.
FauxPas
1 month, 1 week ago
This is the kind of stuff that would draw me back into the story. It's fun, lighthearted, has cute mama dragons, makes more sense, and is superior to the alternative that was forced onto us under duress to vavacung. Maybe hard to say but vavacung needs to stand behind his work 100% and not be shoehorned into doing work that less then savory people conned him into doing. As an artist you literally can't please everyone, and need to be content with those who have chosen to enjoy your work and its progress, then those who hate/despise it for whatever reason. Be proud of your work and your art vavacung, and don't let outsiders influence you to do otherwise!
Firerush
1 month, 1 week ago
I love this idea and I wish you people hadn't hurt you over this. I'm sorry to see that this story will never come to pass.

You know, that little cord on the handle always seemed odd to me, I mean why would a sword have a weapon cord unless Braver's grip was sacrificed too. I never commented on it because I didn't know what to say but it being a punishment stick... yeah that makes sense now.

Sorry for the digression, I wish I could hug you and I'm sorry that your imagination has been damaged, you should never feel scared to fantasize. I wish I could say more without just raging against the people who hurt you but they should feel ashamed for what they caused. I wish you luck and I hope you can still create in the future. I won't beg you to continue this, I don't want to hurt you, I just hope that someday the pain of these events will fade.
Badmunky64
1 month, 1 week ago
I doubt many of us would care if you finished/continue the story the want you to.
MDarrock
1 month, 1 week ago
GOBLIN ALERT!!!
Blackraven2
1 month, 1 week ago
this variant would have been awesome
Dgtdgt
1 month, 1 week ago
I do wish this would have been the one told.
SleepingCobrox
1 month, 1 week ago
Someday you’re gonna have to build a backbone if you want to continue doing comics in a way that won’t be abandoned. This is so much better than the ending we got that felt really weird and subpar compared to how you usually do comics or art sets
AgentBT
1 month, 1 week ago
It's easy for us to focus on the negative when there's a sea of positivity around it, but having so many all at once go against you, I can see why it would be hard for you. It's easy to hate on someone when you're behind a computer screen, but cowards when faceless and protected by the vail of the internet. Just like it can blossom into something good, it can also create something terrible that can hurt us in both mentality and imagination.

I'm deeply sorry that this has happened to you. I send you my internet hug as I was one that was deeply enjoying the story. I know my words may not hold much wait comparative to the faceless imps that sent you hate and despair, but know that there are people here that are in support of you. Take the time to rest and heal so that the shell that has been created can be withered down until it cracks to let the flowers of inspiration and imagination bloom.
MDarrock
1 month, 1 week ago
This was funny... Too bad the goblins had to show up and ruin everything
AlleyCat
1 month, 1 week ago
Man this story seems WAY too good to let a bunch of trolls bring it down :<
Firerush
1 month, 1 week ago
Sadly, Trolls are beneath feeling guilt over their actions
BrownOx
1 month, 1 week ago
I love this version way more than what ended up happening because others had to ruin the fun.
StardustPony
1 month, 1 week ago
well people is really stupid nowadays if they know were he lives then it’s better this way

but honestly people will not just magically stop being idiots tomorrow face them, ignore them, join them,
eventually our circumstances will lead us to one of them

deranged
1 month, 1 week ago
I do like this better than the arc we got in the end. It's more in tone with the beginning.

While the actual comic has a "wow, you actually went there" factor to the end that I appreciated, more of this would have been good. Fuck the haters for taking this away, man.
Kymerasy
1 month, 1 week ago
Don't listen to haters. I understand this was difficult, considering how this comic was an ongoing project for you where you were paying very close attention to feedback. Unfortunately, though, you listened to the wrong feedback. Negative voices will always sound the loudest to an artist but it DOES NOT mean they are the majority! I promise you! Do what you love, and people will love what you do! If they don't, then fuck em! Who needs em! Every media in existence has its haters, but it always has its lovers as well. Hold your friends and fans close and you will be fulfilled.
Zinc
1 month, 1 week ago
Vacacung, I do not wish to make light of your experience with those who may go against you, but let it be known that you have much more allies than you do enemies. We support you, Almost everyone here does.

HEAR OUR WORDS! Let them drown out the sounds of protest!
I do not request you continue this story, but I DEMAND THAT YOU LISTEN AS WE EXPRESS OUR AFFECTION TO YOU!
YOU ARE VALID AND SPECIAL!

DEAL. WITH. IT!

If you choose to ignore us, we will beat you with a metaphorical stick  until you accept us.

We (platonically) love you and it hurts us to see you suffering like this.

Shall we find the trolls and fuck them (up) for you?

When you find yourself  lamenting the negativity, let our positivity be your shield.
slyfoxxr64
1 month, 1 week ago
Such a fun story.  Hope things might still continue, in spite of the haters.
Collecter128
1 month, 1 week ago
It was a great story. I'm sorry to see it end that way. I hope maybe someday there may be hope for it.
StardustPony
1 month, 1 week ago
why don’t you hand us the names of the most ferocious of the bunch i bet that they would love to be harassed because their opinions are different than ours

i mean why should bother them if they do that all the time
it would be fun


but seriously at least lend us the name of those that gave you the death treats that is really a serious offense worthy of spamming their accounts  with reports
Tsaukpaetra
1 month ago
It would have been fun, have mother's approval for the courtship. Very interesting if the callous attitude was just an act meant to distract...
cwcwcw
1 month ago
It's ok. Besides you might come back to this sometime in the future. Who knows?
SerathDuo
1 month ago
*Hugs* Braver we miss you!
Killereye
1 month ago
♪☺♥
Kymerasy
4 weeks ago
Wait... you were getting threats to your life over this?
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