Inkbunny

looking forward to that.

thankies

Bunners

Khzhak

3 years ago

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did you use an existing language as inspiration for that, or is that something fictional or something you invented?
Also putting my prediction here. I bet she's professing her love for him. Or if nothing else, her lust XD

Chucky

3 years ago

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@ Khzhak

I just kinda pulled it out of my ass. I wanted it to have a bit if a Germanic sound maybe, minus the harsh consonants.

ScottySkunk

3 years ago

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This is a cute page

NoddMouse

3 years ago

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Small typo in the upper right hand corner panel. Should be contrast.
Very nice page though ^.^

Chucky

3 years ago

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@ NoddMouse

Fixed it, thanks.

Snowfirechakat

3 years ago

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wow for being rusty i think she remembers a lot of it

Chucky

3 years ago

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@ Snowfirechakat

It's actually a fairly simple greeting, I'll put it on the next page.

Snowfirechakat

3 years ago

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cool and i have to say her language sounds really pretty

BigD

3 years ago

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Wonder what she'd say if he wanted to do foodplay or stuffing.

Chucky

3 years ago

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@ BigD

If they had more time together she'd totally do it if he wanted to. She's not squeemish about much of anything.

CrinkleCorgi

3 years ago

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Seems like a very romantic language

Chucky

3 years ago

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@ CrinkleCorgi

It is, depending on what appeals to one's ears. Very flowing with soft consonants and long vowel sounds.

MrCyberwolf

3 years ago

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I love that look on Gwendolyn's face in the 9th panel.

Chucky

3 years ago

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@ MrCyberwolf

Chucky's consistent interest in her has been very unexpected and the reason for how things are turning out.

TheRealMedley

3 years ago

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i love how innocent and young she looks here, like a school girl talking to her crush

Chucky

3 years ago

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@ TheRealMedley

And Chucky isn't even trying, he's just naturally very curious about her and it's getting her in all the right places.

TheRealMedley

3 years ago

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that's what makes it better, it isnt forced, its just natural lovey dovey <3

MviluUatusun

3 years ago

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Okay. I'd like to know. What's the difference in pronunciation between A and AA? Also, how is G pronounced, as in Giant or as in God? Are R's rolled? Is U pronounced OO or Uh? I ask because I think I could say what Gwendolyn's saying if I knew those pronunciations. I can tell that Mossflorian is easier to speak than my Tashoonian language which can be found in chapter 5 of my story, "Marooned on Tashoo".

Chucky

3 years ago

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I haven't really thought that far, I just liked the way it looked. In my head I read it in standard American English. For AA, just use a prolonged short A sound.

TrainfanSteamLoco

3 years ago

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Edited 3 years ago by Owner

Panel 5
Was that an accidental innuendo joke?

Chucky

3 years ago

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@ TrainfanSteamLoco

Yes and no. If a young witch is to learn to fly a broom, she must learn to control a long piece of wood between her legs. That being said, I find all images of witches on brooms to have a little innuendo to them.

MviluUatusun

3 years ago

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Hmm. I never thought about it that way. That may be why in the original "Bewitched" TV show's opening animation, Samantha is riding her broom "side-saddle" like a lady would ride a horse.

Chucky

3 years ago

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Watch Kikki's Delivery Service. 13 year old witch girl heads out on her own. If I remember, most scenes of her on the broom feel just a little naught, especially with the number of panties shots.

MviluUatusun

3 years ago

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I have seen it but, it was a few years ago so, I don't remember a whole lot about it.

Chucky

3 years ago

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After your comment I had to watch it again last night just to make sure I wasn't remembering something they way I wanted to. Nope, copious broomstick straddling and panties shots. It's worth watching again if you haven't seen it in a while. Kiki scenes aside, it's an animation masterpiece.

MviluUatusun

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Oh, back when Kiki's Delivery Service was done, the scenes you talked about were a common part of almost every anime show. My favorite anime show of all time, "Urusei Yatsura", showed exposed boobs and butts on a regular basis. (They were prevented from showing full frontal due to Japanese law.) Also, the female lead character wore a tiger-striped bikini in almost every episode.

Oh, I went to Netflix and found that it was almost 4 years ago that I rented that show. It's in my queue again.

Chucky

3 years ago

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I think I know the show you're talking about, I never saw it though. There have been some gems on Netflix. I just watched Highrise Invasion, cute girls with lots of panties shots.

MviluUatusun

3 years ago

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Urusei Yatsura is very funny. You have a lecherous teenage boy, who's chosen to defend the earth from being taken over by an alien race called the Oni (demon in Japanese). All he has to do is win a game of tag against their champion, a well-endowed young woman named Lum. He wins and she misinterprets something he says as a marriage proposal. The show lasted for about 200 episodes. If you can find it, you should watch it because I believe you'll love it.

Chucky

3 years ago

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I googled it, it's exactly the one I thought it was. Yeah I'll have to find it.

MviluUatusun

3 years ago

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I know that Netflix has most of the DVDs available but, they are missing a few now.

ruink

3 years ago

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translation for the last panel, plz?

Chucky

3 years ago

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@ ruink

Next page.

KNIFE

3 years ago

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I like your use of the term "devoured" as in not only the cake and the food and her pleasure but the knowledge around her home and the story about herself. Chucky has appetites that he's only now realizing and they aren't just limited to food and sex! :D

Chucky

3 years ago

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@ KNIFE

Very much so, he finds Gwendolyn and everything about her so interesting he can't get enough.

MviluUatusun

3 years ago

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Uncle's teaching reminds me of somebody else's teaching. Now, who was it? I remember it was someone who was rather short, green, and had long ears. He talked kind of funny, too. Now, who was it? DARN this CRS. LOL

Chucky

3 years ago

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I thought the same thing right after I drew it.

MviluUatusun

3 years ago

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LOL

sqrl

3 years ago

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5th panel :" wingardium leviosaaaa" ;3

Chucky

3 years ago

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@ sqrl

Is that a spell from Harry Potter?

sqrl

3 years ago

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*chuckles* yeah, one of the first spells they get at school for lifting objects into the air :3

v3e5

3 years ago

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It's so odd seeing them like that during these recent several pages... them who fucked earlier!

Chucky

3 years ago

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@ v3e5

"Them who fucked earlier", I like that description.

v3e5

3 years ago

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Yeah, they fucked earlier, remember?

Chucky

3 years ago

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@ v3e5

Uh...yeah, I wrote it. I was saying I like your third person description.

v3e5

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Uh how else I would say it about your characters? "Hey you, Chucky! Yeah, you on that drawing, why not you just grab her fat rat ass & penetrate like you used to many pages ago?"

(Wait, I said "penetrate"? Looks like I'm playing WOT Blitz way too much, LOOOO0000000ooooooo000000OOOOL)

Chucky

3 years ago

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@ v3e5

Trust me, he'd love to. And there will be much penetration in the future. They aren't done with each other.

johnstart

3 years ago

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I got so into it I had hoped this story was finished, I end up here to find it's not and I'm left on a clifhanger

Chucky

3 years ago

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Well welcome back! It's a long way from finished so get comfortable.

johnstart

3 years ago

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back?

johnstart

3 years ago

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I read the whole comic (start to here) in one sitting over 10 hours ago, I actually thought when I started, you'd Finnished the comic, I'm pretty sure I had never spoken in the comic before 10 hours ago

Chucky

3 years ago

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Sorry, I misread your comment like you'd read the comic sometime in the past and came back to find it still not finished. Either way, glad you're here and thanks for giving it all that time.

johnstart

3 years ago

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all g, mistakes happen, I'm glad to be here also, I hope to see more soon, in your own thoughts do you think its before or after halfway? I'll enjoy the comic no matter how long, I'm just curious what you think, even if plans change, like, that stupid question the teacher asks "what do you think you'll be in 5 or 10 years?" I doubt it'll take 5 years... I'm rambling, anyway, just wondering if you think its before or after halfway, that's is all.... sorry...

Chucky

3 years ago

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I'm thinking it's a little before halfway. I'm working on page 115 right now and I'm thinking the comic will be around 250 pages long. That's the plan anyway. It could end up being longer, but if it is it won't be by much.

johnstart

3 years ago

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cool beans

KevinSnowpaw

3 years ago

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Her face is so cute in the last panel so girlish and triumphant X3

Chucky

3 years ago

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@ KevinSnowpaw

She hasn't spoken Mossflorian in a long time. What Chucky asked for was a real challenge and kind of an intimate request that she wasn't expecting.

KevinSnowpaw

3 years ago

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I wasent expecting how FUN her design and expression is in that panel!

Chucky

3 years ago

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@ KevinSnowpaw

I hope it's not out of character. I want it to look like Chucky is breaking down the barriers.

KevinSnowpaw

3 years ago

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