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MaxDeGroot
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Chapter 27: Good Riddance

Good Riddance (The Time Of Your Life)
lgo-027_gr_story.mp3
Chapter 24: Drink, Drink, Drink!
Chapter 30: Home For The Holidays
Chapter 26: The House That Built Me
Chapter 28: Sundown
SONG ALONE
Good Riddance (The Time Of Your Life) by MaxDeGroot


Icon by KDNightstar. Full image can be found here
Morning Inspection Blues by MaxDeGroot
. An additional image from this chapter by the same artist can be found here
Samuelson Gets Chewed Out by MaxDeGroot


Voice of Frank by jomooval.
Voice of Fake Cadet by SquirrellyJay.
Voice of Samuelson by David31.
Voice of Willis by Scatterpaws.
Voice of Zim by PersephoneMurray.
Voice of Frankel by RadarCub.
Voice of Adjutant by Tavimunk

Backing track purchased on http://www.karaoke-version.com. Original song performed by Green Day.

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Dipper is brought back from the party room, and things do not go according to plan, for Samuelson.

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Originally, I was going to have Dipper deny that Samuelson was responsible for the hazing, take his own punishment, and thus win Samuelson's heart, would would then get Dipper into an organization normally reserved for upper classmen.

However, lying to a superior officer would not be looked kindly on, I was told, so, I had to change it, without making Dipper look like a snitch. I did this by making Samuelson under suspicion already, unbeknownst to him. It was only Dipper's weakness to alcohol that broke the plans. Otherwise, Dipper would have slept through reveille and been brought up for disciplinary action. And Samuelson would have succeeded.

I was also given a better reward for Dipper, which will be revealed in the next installment.

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Type: Music - Single Track
Published: 3 years, 8 months ago
Rating: General

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moyomongoose
3 years, 8 months ago
That is a good story.

It reminds me of how some of the characters in my story who are cubs in the year 1960 will be doing tours of duty in Vietnam during the years around 1970.
Kennichu
3 years, 7 months ago
Serves him Right he Completely Deserved all of that!!!
MaxDeGroot
3 years, 7 months ago
Originally, I was going to have him get away with it, because Dipper refused to bring charges.

I was told by several military furs that you DON'T do that, since you could be brought up on charges yourself if you don't.
Kennichu
3 years, 7 months ago
Good Call then
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