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PREVIEW: The Black Idol

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This is a preview of the first issue of my upcoming comic. I know a lot of fans are absolutely starving for it, so I thought it best to feed your appetite for now.

The comic will be broken into issues, like traditional trade paper backs, aiming for 24ish pages. As of this writing, I have 13 pages inked and awaiting text/color.

Page 2 notes:
This page has pacing issues and will definitely be redone before release.

"The Black Idol" is just the title of the first story. The comic, as a whole, still has no title. Titling comics is hard, especially when you're going for something of a very specific feel and context. Needs to be marketable, but also fit the tone of the comic, and that's difficult when you're going for sci-fi and Lovecraftian horror.

Page 3 notes:
Alan Moore's "Watchmen" was an important influence for the visual style. His artist used color in a way I'm not, but he used a minimal sort of shading that I thought looked nice and would accelerate the drawing process.

More importantly, I was impressed with how much he managed to fit onto one page with his nine-panel layout, so I directly borrowed that which helped cut down on page length.

Page 4 notes:
I really want this comic released as soon as I can. I absolutely need it released before Anthrocon, but I think you can safely expect it somewhat before June. The comic will be released one issue at a time - meaning, once per month, I'll unload 24 pages on you guys all at once.

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Published: 12 years, 9 months ago
Rating: General

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AtRStories
12 years, 9 months ago
Reminiscent of Hans Rickheit!
Immelmann
12 years, 9 months ago
Never seen his stuff before... from what I've seen, I definitely should take a look, so thanks for mentioning him!
AtRStories
12 years, 9 months ago
Immelmann
12 years, 9 months ago
Haha, yes, I definitely see what you mean. He goes for the more psychedelic design with that, which is pretty awesome.
Nullbun
12 years, 9 months ago
DON'T TOUCH THE FUCKING MARKER.

You'll see dead people. :c
sedkitty
12 years, 9 months ago
I'm positive nothing bad will ever happen to these characters.  Finding an Elder-God-style statue on the moon happens all the time.  Very safe.
zwolf59661
12 years, 9 months ago
24 pages a month? That's almost like one page a day!
KaitoFenikkusu
12 years, 9 months ago
Dave Gibbons was the artist and letterer (sp?) of Watchmen and it was colored by John Higgins

*insert asinine GI Joe the more you know crap here ...*

... *goes to shove watchmen back on its shelf* ...
Gedrean
12 years, 9 months ago
*gibbers*  Finally new Immelmann stuff!

I do see the slight Watchmen influence in p3, and p2's... pacing... issues?  I don't see really a pacing issue there, I see an indication of driving across surface, a shot identifying our main characters (at least, assumed to be main characters, as they've been given a straight face shot), and then a lead-in to their goal.  What seems to be the pacing problem?

I'll be honest I'm having a hard time understanding what, aside from P1's premise that they're on the Lunar Surface, P1's second panel is supposed to be presenting.  Is it the craft they landed on, before using the transit vehicle in P2?
RuscoIstar
12 years, 9 months ago
Very Cthulhu! I like that!
DonutGalaxy
12 years, 9 months ago
Wow,Immy. This is a big step. And a big project. It looks amazing.
E1337ist
12 years, 9 months ago
I like the looks of where it's going, I'll say that.
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