Try to make your transitions smoother not so abrupt 0:20- 0:22, 0:54, 1:13, 1:32, 1:48, 2:01 To my ear you have more or less just concatenated different pieces together. If that is your goal so be it, but I feel you should blend it more. ie sync the beat rate and overlap.
As an idea/suggestion, perhaps try a track where you blend in and out the various pieces over the length of the track. so at any one time you have 2-3 pieces audible.
Try to make your transitions smoother not so abrupt 0:20- 0:22, 0:54, 1:13, 1:32, 1:48, 2:01 To my e
