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"HOW THE HELL DOES THIS HAPPEN?!"
"Jazz, calm down, we'll get her back."  Maxxi said calmly.
"How can you be so fucking calm?! Houser jsut kidnapped her! AND HE'S FERAL!"  Leon exploded as well.
"Houser's wanted Coco to himself for years now, he won't kill he rright away, mates.  He'll toy with her for a few days at most, we have time."  Maxxi resoned.
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"So~ your brother, huh?"  Houser asked, reclining on his chair and gazing at the letter.  Coco whimpered as tears escaped her eyes.  Houser had her chained in the corner.  Her arms tied together with a length of iron chain attached to the ceiling that kept ehr standing.  "He does sound nice~"  He said, licking the knife with Coco's blood on it.  Coco had three cuts along her torso that bled freely.  "Maybe I'll invite him over, what do you say?"  Coco stayed quite and looked down.  Houser smirked adn walked over to her.  Grabbing her hair he pulled her head back and placed the blade at her neck, "when I talk, you answer me like a good little slut, do you understand?"  He asked, pushing th eknife enough to draw a drop of blood.  Coco nodded, petrified.  He smiled and went back to the chair and went on the computer.  "You know what's fun?  Seeing how far away from rescure you are.  Here, that little red dot is us, and all those green dots here are the others.  See how far awway they are?"  Coco looked.  From the digital map it looked like they were five miles away from them, and three of the dots were heading int he opposite direction of the,  "And all those little yellow dots are ALL my other hiding places~"  Houser chuckled.  Coco's heart droppped.  She couldn't count all those dots! How would they find her.  "Oh lookey~ there they go~"  House laughed as all the dots began moving away from the red dot.  "Let me tell you something, or, what I'll do.  I'm gonna keep you alive for about mmm, three days.  At the end of those three days, I'll kill you.  Besides, with Ratchet things are fun, but all the others are boring me, so, I'm just gonna dissapear, but, everyday after I kill you, I'll send a little bit of you to them! Maybe a finger, maybe your tongue.  Who knows? HAHAHAHA!"
Coco looked down, he had dropped the letter from ehr brother, and now it the page was turning red from ehr blood on the floor.  Tommorow she was supposed to be meeting him...it didin't look like that would happen.
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"Got em!"  Maxxi smiled, showing Leon his results.  Leon smirked.  Houser had them all bugged, luckily, Maxxi short circuted them all and Scooter managed to get some matching ones.  A few little tinks later, identical bugs were made.  They put them all in helium balloons and let them fly!
"How far?"
"Two and a half miles, just follow this road."  Maxxi said, checking the map.  
"Got the gun Dante?"
"Hmph."  Dante grunted and held up two long distance rifles.
"Exelent~"  Scooter chuckled reaching for one.  Dante flipped one and aimed it at him.
"Fuck off."  He growled.
"Leon?"  Scooter squeaked.
"Dante, don't, we need him alive for this, you can kill him later!"  Leon scolded.  Dante growled and pulled hte gun back.
"TUrn left here."  Maxxi pointed to a dirt road off the the side which Leon turned on.  "Half a mile down."
"Then we'll stop here, Scooter, you go in first."
Scooter giggled and jumped in his seat "It's like we're spies ona  secret mission!"
Dante pressed the gun to the back of his head.
"Dante~~~"  Scooter yelped and melded into the shadows.
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"You wait here, I'll go get some fun stuff~"  Houser said, walking out of the small shack.  Coco looked up at her wrists, now cut and bruised.  She heard teh motorcycle start and drown away in teh distance.  She looked down and saw the knife laying a short distance away.  Maybe if she could get it~
"Coco?"  COco froze and looked up.  The door was cracked open and she saw a familiar mix of pink and black poke out of the crack.
"Scooter!"  Coco's voice was hoarse, but she didn't care.
"Is he here?"
"He just left, get he chains undone!"  Coco paniced.  Scooter came in and looked at he chains, tried to pull at them, but got no where.  "The kife, try the knife!"  Scooter grabbed it and tried to break teh lock.  
"What's that?"  Scooter asked, hearing the motorcycle come closer.
"He's coming back!"  Coco whimpered.
"Don't worry, I'll-"  He stopped when the cycle stopped right outside.  
"Hide!"  Coco whispered.  Scooter scuried around trying to find a place before looking at Coco and disapearing into the shaadows in a black mist as the door opened.
"Oh, Coco~? I'm bac-"  Houser sniffed at the air and growled before his gaze zeroed in on Coco.  Coco struggled against the chains to no avale.  "Great, now I gotta do this faster!"  He growled marching towards her, a new knife in his hands.  This one longer and sharper.  He raised teh knife to stab her when a shot rang through the woods.  He wipped around, saw Leon coming at the door, growled and sunk the knife into Coco's stomach before disapearing.
"Coco!"  leon yelled, running to her.  Coco sobbed and looked away from him.  
"Leon, do not move the knife, jsut get the chains off her! Maxxi, there are some towels int eh trunk, start ripping them into strips."  Jazz ordered.  Maxxi listened and started ripping them into strips.  Leon ripped at the chains and broke them off her wrists.  Jazz caught her before she fell and stroked her head. "Help me get her in the car, Scooter, roll up some towels to act like a pillow!"  Scooter nodded adn started.  Leon and Jazz as carefully as possible got ehr to the car and layed ehr in the back seat.  Maxxi handed Jazz the strips and Jazz started tying them around Coco's stomach and the knife.  "Leon, start driving, be carefull, we don't need her moving."  Maxxi hopped in the thrid row seat and leaned over to look down at Coco.
"Don't worry, Coco, you're fine."  He said, stoking her face.  Jazz nodded encuragingly.  Maxxi continued to talk to ehr as Leon drove.  Coco's breathing became rapid/  
"Dante, hand me a water bottle."  Dante listened."This may hurt, Coco."  He said before pouring the water over the knife.  Coco groaned and gripped Maxxi's hand.
"How far the the nearest hospital?"
"What do you mean?  Jazz can fix her!"
"Not like this, I've only just learned how.  I can handle wounds, but nothing like this, she needs medical help."  Jazz said softly, his ears hanging low.  Once Leon was on the smooth highway road, he hit the gas.
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All the guys belong to :iconShadowTH22:
Coco is mine...if she lives...

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Published: 13 years, 1 month ago
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ShadowTH22
13 years, 1 month ago
WOO!! So interesting~ I was hoping for some sexy Houser action though D: naww~ XDD
ahh well this is just as good...or is it~? XDD nahh~ Sexy action!! 8D
anywho~ I love the drama!! cant wait for the next one!!
Jazzminthehedgehog
13 years, 1 month ago
lol, gonna start now!
ShadowTH22
13 years, 1 month ago
yay!!
Jazzminthehedgehog
13 years, 1 month ago
FUCK!!!! I had writen the entire chapter and was about to write out eh whole the guys belong to you thing, and I pressed tab, then back space, AND NOW IT'S FUCKING GONE!!!!!!!!
ShadowTH22
13 years, 1 month ago
D: NUUUUUUUU!!
Jazzminthehedgehog
13 years, 1 month ago
I HATE IT! THE CHAPTER WAS PERFECT!!! SO MUCH EMOTION!!!!! GAAHHHH!!!!! *Sigh* the next chance I have to write it won't be for another three hours or so, then I have two open periods and I can easily type them up....
ShadowTH22
13 years, 1 month ago
naww~ well I look forward to it!! dont worry I'm sure you can still get it perfect next time ;D
Jazzminthehedgehog
13 years, 1 month ago
I remeber what I wrote! So that's good, Leon's gonna be a bit hard to do so I may mess up his personality a pinch, Scooter is perfectly fine and Maxxi is good to, Ayva however may be a chalenge...
ShadowTH22
13 years, 1 month ago
haha well dont worry about it to much, I'll keep ya on the right track ;D
Jazzminthehedgehog
13 years, 1 month ago
kk, I remember I jsut made Leon all gloomy and not in the mood to talk, Scooter was nuzzling Coco'c hand, Ayva being pissed but trying to remain calm and Date just leaving.
ShadowTH22
13 years, 1 month ago
haha that actually sounds about right, if Leon is annoyed he usually doesnt talk much or punches random things as he walks around the house XD
SwyongXia
13 years, 1 month ago
Hey your story telling skills are really good-- you give full detail on the situations at hand in these action scenes..
You do very well in scenes like this to make them very suspenseful.. I thought It would be nice to Commend you.. ^^
Great work-- I remember you work by a quick pace and such(most of the time no home access online)-- so I understand about misspells as well-- they are bound to happen to everyone..don't worry about them..
Jazzminthehedgehog
13 years, 1 month ago
Yeah, misspells happen alot, sometimes it's because some kid has messed with the keyboard or something.
SwyongXia
13 years, 1 month ago
I am sure most people don't mind misspells anyways-- im sure its fine either way--
and that would be something you would not have control over.. if thats the case.
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