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Commission - Midnight and Cinder's family

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by laoru
Commission sketch 2- Nokino
re-do : "Remember this as the day you almost caught me !"
comission in two parts for
TlojHRT
TlojHRT
:)

His char Midnight with his wife Cinder and so his family.

Cinder is sighing at Saeko cause she bought an ice-cream eventhought they are about to go have dinner. So now looks like Lucy wants her ice cream, too.

Hope you like it !

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Type: Picture/Pinup
Published: 5 years, 8 months ago
Rating: General

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TlojHRT
5 years, 8 months ago
Aw, thank you! ^^ They look like one big happy family!
laoru
5 years, 8 months ago
Glad you like. I hope you don't mind I changed Cinder's outfit a little, but Saeko's one was like summer clothes so ... I thought it could look good ^^
TlojHRT
5 years, 8 months ago
And it does! ^^ You made Lucy a little flat but it's just because of her hoodie right?
laoru
5 years, 8 months ago
More because she is a kid actually ^^" but it's true I now remember you precised that she "was developing" in your description... Sorry !!! ^^""" so yeah, let's say that's the hoodie
TlojHRT
5 years, 8 months ago
Alright. ^^ I'm really satisfied with how you drew Cinder's tube top. Super sexy.
laoru
5 years, 8 months ago
I'm surprised, I thought you would say her breasts are too small ^^
TlojHRT
5 years, 8 months ago
Well maybe, but you drew them nicely. ^^
laoru
5 years, 8 months ago
Well I'm glad :D
TlojHRT
5 years, 8 months ago
Now I can go back to commissioning the comic! ^^
laoru
5 years, 8 months ago
Ow I didn't thought you would continue it o.o
TlojHRT
5 years, 8 months ago
Why not? ^^ I try to finish what I start.
laoru
5 years, 8 months ago
Ok ^^ just let me know then ;)
DravenLoso
5 years, 8 months ago
looru is super understanding for a second wife :P
MasterStevo31
5 years, 8 months ago
Cuteness! Excellent working :3
laoru
5 years, 8 months ago
Thank you ^^=
HTKWolfe
5 years, 8 months ago
Now I feel terrible for Looru and her family...

See, Cinder is a unique woman in a few regards. Chief among them is in her AU the Echidna race is traditionally polygamous, meaning the practice of multiple spouses is quite common. Furthermore her life left her with a strong distaste for men in general with the exceptions of Spike and Smoke, Midnight had to work hard just to get her to open up to the idea for relationships in general.

In Cinder's mind Looru is the First Wife, basically a matriach of the family under the husband. It's difficult for Cinder to accept that since she's such a proud and headstrong woman, but for the family she's willing to manage. I wanted her to be something special for Looru too. A good friend, a sister, maybe they could grow to see each other as lovers as well? Of course they seem to be on opposite ends of the spectrum for personalities. Looru as near as I can tell is a complete Angel where as Cinder is a barely tamed Demon. XD
laoru
5 years, 8 months ago
^^ don't worry for the family. Mitchell for exemple is more than happy. Light and Miru are just sad that their mother isn't happy, and isn't smiling naturally everytime anymore. even if she hides it.
The matter is Looru can't understand the idea of first wife or such. She doesn't consider herself as more important. She simply thinks that if Midnight married Cinder it's because he truly loves her, and she considers that she is a weight / burden for Midnight, preventing him to live his love with Cinder. Plus she also knows Cinder's past and truly wants her to be happy, thinking it's her turn to taste happiness. So even if sad, she just doesn't want to interfere and for a time she acted more like the cleaning lady than the wife, never wanting to bother them and feeling bad if Midnight was beiing tender with her in front of Cinder... Since for Looru, it's Cinder the wife now.

Of course Midnight and her argued a lot. Midnight is so pissed off he can't just enjoy two wives... XD ^^""" they had a lot of moments they tried to explain eachother, but at the end I think none of them can really accept or understand the other point of view. So Looru just tries and deal with it, trying to still act as a couple. She loves Midnight too much to leave, and at the same nothing will never be the same... Here's the story ^^
TlojHRT
5 years, 8 months ago
There's also the possibility of multiple realities where Midnight chose to marry only one of them, and didn't break any hearts. :P I intended this picture to be one of those universes, but I guess we can bring up the fact that I tried something new, it failed, and we fixed it but you're still saying it isn't fixed? :P
laoru
5 years, 8 months ago
Oh no it was great to do it. Not a "fail" for me... I'm not at allbtrying to make you feel  bad I promose... it indeed was something new in the story and that's great ! It makes something more real (cause indeed, real life isn't a succession of happiness ^^)
As I said they indeed had some argues and Looru deals with it now, accepting it a little more. But beiing who she is... Yeah, I can't imagine her reacting in any other way ..^^"
TlojHRT
5 years, 8 months ago
Uuuugh but I thought we fixed it. :/
HTKWolfe
5 years, 8 months ago
^^" Ah... I should point out that a small portion of Cinder's abilities is sensing emotions, none of this would be lost on her. And she would act to make Looru understand... Even if she has to slip into her dark side a bit to hammer the point home.

Polygamy to her isn't about one spouse being more important than another, but a certain hierarchy does help keep things sensible to her. I regret to say it's perfectly in character for Cinder to outright backhand Looru if it was becoming too difficult to get the idea across that Cinder's presence changes nothing for her relationship. Either that, or muscling past her own inhibitions to just haul Looru into a kiss in front of Midnight. It all depends on how frustrated Cinder is with life in general at the moment.
laoru
5 years, 8 months ago
X'D you know what ? It would be great to do a short rp with the 3 of us to fix that.
TlojHRT
TlojHRT
did played Cinder to telle Looru She was the first wife and other things, but since she is originally your char, maybe it could make something interesting and different ?
So we will be all happy ^^
HTKWolfe
5 years, 8 months ago
I'd love to. I love the idea that there are AUs where Midnight only met one of his wives, but I also adore the potential dynamic of their polygamous relationship. Especially if this brings in the rest of Midnight's family, like Luna for instance. X3

So when can we write up this short?
laoru
5 years, 8 months ago
The best would be something I can get on my phone, cause I'll be go to work in 1 hour. But since It's a night shift I'm alone and have some free time to rp a little ^^
TlojHRT
5 years, 8 months ago
I'm also going to work in a few hours, and I can't RP except for on my break. XP
laoru
5 years, 8 months ago
Do you still agree to do it later ? I want so bad to see Cinder's dark side to "kick" Looru's butt X'D
TlojHRT
5 years, 8 months ago
Lol, sure! I can come on after my shift.
laoru
5 years, 8 months ago
Me too ^^ I've slept all the day so I will be able to stay awake. So I finish my shift and will be home around 8am. It's like... Midnight  for both of you ?
But I can also start on my phone while still at work. Usually around 5:am I'm done with everything and just have to wait ^^
TlojHRT
5 years, 8 months ago
I guess it'll be up to HTK. He goes to bed earlier than we do. ^^
HTKWolfe
5 years, 8 months ago
I don't work today or tomorrow so I can be up a bit later than usual. Ring me up when you're ready!
laoru
5 years, 8 months ago
Yaaaaay awesome X3 I can't wait ! Jolt, I think you finish work a little before I do. So tell us when you're off so I can join you on my phone if I can :)
TlojHRT
5 years, 8 months ago
Alrighty, I'll make the document now.
laoru
5 years, 8 months ago
Oh, tell me : do you think colours are too "bright" ? Now I see it after having slept it hurts my eyes XD do you want me to lighter a little the colours so they are softer ?
TlojHRT
5 years, 8 months ago
I'm not sure, maybe? ^^
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