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panel 1

"and remember my friends,
if you are interested on
join to sandia-chan fan
club, don't forget that..."

panel 2

"there you are!!"

panel 3

"Angel, can you find some water for april?"
"of course"

panel 4

I'll call a taxi

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Published: 7 years, 12 months ago

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awesomnessman

7 years, 12 months ago

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Panel 1:
"And remember, friends, that if you're interested in joining the sandia-chan fan club don't forget that..."

Panel 2
"There you are!!"

Panel 3
"Angel, can you find some water for April?"
"Of course"

Panel 4
"I'll call a taxi"

TheDemSoc

7 years, 12 months ago

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@ awesomnessman

Translating is always fun.

Panel 1
"And remember, friends, that if you're interested in joining the Sandia-chan Fan Club, don't forget that..."

The rest of it looks good.

roninhunt0987

7 years, 12 months ago

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phew alright they're getting the hell out of there finally

LeydenTheWolf

7 years, 12 months ago

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@ roninhunt0987

Yup

AutumnCore

7 years, 12 months ago

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Ok... ¿qué tiene el de la sandía? XD

Khzhak

7 years, 12 months ago

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panel 1

"and remember my friends,
if you are interested in
joining the sandia-chan fan
club, don't forget to..."

I used to, because depending on what comes next, "to send a self-addressed stamped envelope, email, tweet with the hashtag #widget, like our facebook page, subscribe to our youtbe channel...." whereas that would contain more information.  "that you must/need to/should (anything after to ijn the previous example would work here)" like must send, need to subscribe, should like, etc.

panel 2 on, they look fine.

that or to both could work at the end of panel one, just to is slightly more concise.  if they're filling time too, maybe 'that' would be the proper word to use there.

English is confusing.  It doesn't borrow from other languages, it mugs them for all their loose grammar.

ruink

7 years, 12 months ago

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you pretty much have it on this page, but in the first panel, you want to say "If you want to join the Sandia-chan fan club. don't forget that-"

since the line of panel 2 abruptly interrupts the first panel, you end that line with a hyphen.

8manx2

7 years, 12 months ago

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hey do me a favor. my Spanish skills are no where near good enough to understand anything in this video, with it's audio quality. could you translate please ^-^
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=gusUEm97O9I