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Amy x Bernadette story comic test page

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by EmbertheArtist

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A Rose Blossoms

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This was a test comic page I made to see how well I could write a comic
(WARNING TERRIBLE WRITING AND DIALOG AHEAD)
This was the last thing I made for this project

Keywords

female 1,124,256, hedgehog 77,495, adult 33,019, age difference 30,733, lesbian 21,070, amy rose 17,568, yuri 5,128, age gap 1,530, pre teen 332, bernadette hedgehog 131

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Type: Picture/Pinup

Published: 8 years ago

Rating: General

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MasterStevo31

8 years ago

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Not a bad start of a beta test! :D

EmbertheArtist

8 years ago

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@ MasterStevo31

Really? Did you read all of it?

MasterStevo31

8 years ago

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@ EmbertheArtist

Yep, I'm a fast scanning reader, it's really good and cute so far~

EmbertheArtist

8 years ago

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@ MasterStevo31

Okay
Glad you like it!

MasterStevo31

8 years ago

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@ EmbertheArtist

Just keep up the progress :3

EmbertheArtist

8 years ago

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@ MasterStevo31

I will

MasterStevo31

8 years ago

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@ EmbertheArtist

If need advices or such feel free to pm me, I love to help peeps keep up their works into making their first comics ^w^

EmbertheArtist

8 years ago

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@ MasterStevo31

I'll keep that in mind

MasterStevo31

8 years ago

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@ EmbertheArtist

I just love helping out and keep boosting the spirits of keep making comics~

Denizen1414

8 years ago

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i like it^^ not bad really. dialogue is okay

EmbertheArtist

8 years ago

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@ Denizen1414

I still need to learn how to write butter

Denizen1414

8 years ago

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@ EmbertheArtist

keep up the practice then^^

HyperShadow92

8 years ago

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This is lookin’ pretty sweet. It looks really good here.

EmbertheArtist

8 years ago

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@ HyperShadow92

Thanks man im glad you like it!

HyperShadow92

8 years ago

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@ EmbertheArtist

np, keep up the good work!

TheRevengeX11

8 years ago

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Actually yah, this looks pretty good so far. The dialogue sounds natural, the panels make sense and add some character, and the flow looks good. Keep up the great work!

EmbertheArtist

8 years ago

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@ TheRevengeX11

Im glad you like it
Though I still feel I need to improve

SuperBunnyGT

8 years ago

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im loving this direction, though it still needs something blue

EmbertheArtist

8 years ago

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@ SuperBunnyGT

For a sequel maybe
That's if I even go through with this

specterHSC

8 years ago

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I hope to see more of this soon.

EmbertheArtist

8 years ago

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@ specterHSC

I'll think about it

roninhunt0987

8 years ago

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X3 hehehhe i smell yuri is gonna happen... X3 between you and i.. -whispers- i am secretly into yuri hehe

Cyandog182

8 years ago

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I really hope you do more of this. The dialog is fine, I know casual banter can be really hard to write so stop beating yourself up over it. Also now that you put the idea of Amy and Bernadette having sex in my head you have to keep going.

EmbertheArtist

8 years ago

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@ Cyandog182

At some point maybe but right now I don't have everything I need to even make a full comic