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Amy x Bernadette story comic test page

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Amy x Bernadette story character ref
Last in pool
This was a test comic page I made to see how well I could write a comic
(WARNING TERRIBLE WRITING AND DIALOG AHEAD)
This was the last thing I made for this project

Keywords
female 1,132,276, hedgehog 77,752, adult 33,380, age difference 31,173, lesbian 21,216, amy rose 17,616, yuri 5,172, age gap 1,549, pre teen 339, bernadette hedgehog 131
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Type: Picture/Pinup
Published: 8 years, 1 month ago
Rating: General

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MasterStevo31
8 years, 1 month ago
Not a bad start of a beta test! :D
EmbertheArtist
8 years, 1 month ago
Really? Did you read all of it?
MasterStevo31
8 years, 1 month ago
Yep, I'm a fast scanning reader, it's really good and cute so far~
EmbertheArtist
8 years, 1 month ago
Okay
Glad you like it!
MasterStevo31
8 years, 1 month ago
Just keep up the progress :3
EmbertheArtist
8 years, 1 month ago
I will
MasterStevo31
8 years, 1 month ago
If need advices or such feel free to pm me, I love to help peeps keep up their works into making their first comics ^w^
EmbertheArtist
8 years, 1 month ago
I'll keep that in mind
MasterStevo31
8 years, 1 month ago
I just love helping out and keep boosting the spirits of keep making comics~
Denizen1414
8 years, 1 month ago
i like it^^ not bad really. dialogue is okay
EmbertheArtist
8 years, 1 month ago
I still need to learn how to write butter
Denizen1414
8 years, 1 month ago
keep up the practice then^^
HyperShadow92
8 years, 1 month ago
This is lookin’ pretty sweet. It looks really good here.
EmbertheArtist
8 years, 1 month ago
Thanks man im glad you like it!
HyperShadow92
8 years, 1 month ago
np, keep up the good work!
TheRevengeX11
8 years, 1 month ago
Actually yah, this looks pretty good so far. The dialogue sounds natural, the panels make sense and add some character, and the flow looks good. Keep up the great work!
EmbertheArtist
8 years, 1 month ago
Im glad you like it
Though I still feel I need to improve
SuperBunnyGT
8 years, 1 month ago
im loving this direction, though it still needs something blue
EmbertheArtist
8 years, 1 month ago
For a sequel maybe
That's if I even go through with this
specterHSC
8 years, 1 month ago
I hope to see more of this soon.
EmbertheArtist
8 years, 1 month ago
I'll think about it
roninhunt0987
8 years, 1 month ago
X3 hehehhe i smell yuri is gonna happen... X3 between you and i.. -whispers- i am secretly into yuri hehe
Cyandog182
8 years, 1 month ago
I really hope you do more of this.  The dialog is fine, I know casual banter can be really hard to write so stop beating yourself up over it.  Also now that you put the idea of Amy and Bernadette having sex in my head you have to keep going.
EmbertheArtist
8 years, 1 month ago
At some point maybe but right now I don't have everything I need to even make a full comic
FrankNova
8 years ago
not bad at all
Thunderwolf1992
6 years, 11 months ago
Not bad it's really good test I'm impressed
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