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Thanks to the guys who helped with the speech fix...


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Published: 1 year, 4 months ago
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ScottyKat
1 year, 4 months ago
Angel looks happy. the text seems fine.

But annie should be saying "It can't be" instead of it can be.

April, why you so mad? lol
bbmbbf
1 year, 4 months ago
Thanks ^^
sonictopfan
1 year, 4 months ago
Annoe should say "This can't be" but aside from that I din't see anything wrong.
Neku11112
1 year, 4 months ago
Why is April mad :p
Boony
1 year, 4 months ago
April is jealous because she has a crush on Annie.
Neku11112
1 year, 4 months ago
I get that. But is she maybe upset cause she isn't getting a chance to talk to her?
Boony
1 year, 4 months ago
Probably. How would you feel if you got to go to a party with your crush just for a stranger to pull them away.
Neku11112
1 year, 4 months ago
Also, perhaps English? ^^
MDarrock
1 year, 4 months ago
panel 1
random girl : "You too"  (It fits better with the last page's text)
angel : "eh?"

panel 2

"c'mon, don't be shy"

panel 3

"Everybody smile!"   or   ''Cheeeese!''  (Saying cheese forces you to smile, specially if you stretch the ''e'')

panel 4

"it can't be..."   or    ''Can't be...''   or   ''I can't believe it''

panel 5

"Angel! You closed your eyes"
bbmbbf
1 year, 4 months ago
Thanks ^^
MDarrock
1 year, 4 months ago
Glad to help...
CuriousKit
1 year, 4 months ago
The text looks pretty good. For panel 4, I might suggest "Oh, what?!" instead of "It can be." (which should be "It can't be.")

Also, poor April.
bbmbbf
1 year, 4 months ago
Thank u  ^^
Blueafternoon
1 year, 4 months ago
Fifth panel should be: Aww! Angel you blinked
bbmbbf
1 year, 4 months ago
Thanks :D
FosterLightdweller
1 year, 4 months ago
I like the gal that's wearing the Raven outfit. <3
NikkiBoundWolf
1 year, 4 months ago
I'd ship Annie and April.
Cyandog182
1 year, 4 months ago
I love this chapter.  All the adorable kittens in costumes is too much!  I think calico Raven may be my favorite.
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