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Please help!

panel 1
april : "good to see you guys"
angel : "can you edit that nickname?

panel 2
april : "we have a lot of thing to talk.." (not really sure what to put here"
annie : "right"

panel 3
april : "well.. annie.. I..."
random girl : "OH MY GWAAAAAD!!!"

panel 4
Annie : "Uhh?"

panel 5
random girl : "can I take a photo with you?"

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Published: 9 years ago

Rating: General

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CuriousKit

9 years ago

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Edited 9 years ago by Owner

Please help? Relax, Kit is here!

Panel 1

- better as "Can you change that nickname?" - edit tends to be reserved for computer documents.

Panel 2:

- Angie: "We have a lot of things to talk about." (more serious) or "We have so much to talk about." (more casual) or "We have so much to catch up on!" (very casual)
- Given Annie's friendly face, I think she should say "Okay" rather than "Right" - saying 'right' implies you're dreading what's about to come or at least not positive about it.

Panel 3

- Everything okay here, as far as rabid fangirls go!

Panel 4

- I might go with "Huh?" instead.

Panel 5

- Everything okay here.

kingkingkolton

9 years ago

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@ CuriousKit

I agree wholeheartedly with this fix. I couldn't have said it better myself.

bbmbbf

9 years ago

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@ CuriousKit

I love you, thanks ^^ did a last minute edit to the second panel

ScottySkunk

9 years ago

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Haha i like this randon girl.

MviluUatusun

9 years ago

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Edited 9 years ago by Owner

Panel 1
Angel:  Can you change my nickname?

Panel 2
April:  We have so much to talk about.
Annie:  That's true.

Panel 3
Random girl:  Oh!  My Gawwwwwwwwwwwd!

Panel 4
Can I have my photo taken with you?

bbmbbf

9 years ago

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@ MviluUatusun

Thanks friend ^^

MviluUatusun

9 years ago

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@ bbmbbf

You're welcome. I hope my assistance was helpful.