- better as "Can you change that nickname?" - edit tends to be reserved for computer documents.
Panel 2:
- Angie: "We have a lot of things to talk about." (more serious) or "We have so much to talk about." (more casual) or "We have so much to catch up on!" (very casual) - Given Annie's friendly face, I think she should say "Okay" rather than "Right" - saying 'right' implies you're dreading what's about to come or at least not positive about it.
Panel 3
- Everything okay here, as far as rabid fangirls go!
Panel 4
- I might go with "Huh?" instead.
Panel 5
- Everything okay here.
Please help? Relax, Kit is here! Panel 1 - better as "Can you change that nickname?" - edit tends
