This is great right here. Your style works very well when emulating this kind of artstyle, it's obviously got some significant differences but it looks a lot like the Cucumber Quest artstyle. I like the way you draw his clothes, male crossdressing really is good.
As for the story, I think we have a winner right here. I'm not sure if this qualifies as light hypermessing or heavy messing, but either way, the messing part was actually competently written. The entire thing pushes plenty of my buttons, so I am a bit biased in favour of it but I think objectively it is a good story, just a tad short. I liked the details of him starting to like sitting in his own filth, too.
This is great right here. Your style works very well when emulating this kind of artstyle, it's obvi