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Chaos Future 46 : Cutting Rope

The Adventure Logs Of Young Queen Set 70

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Chaos Future 45 : O.S.
Chaos Future 47 : Friend Not Foe
"Your sword will only physical hurt her. But Element Of Harmony can help purify her. So please step aside and let me do the job"

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Warning : This story takes place 100 years after Rarity dead. This story base on season 4. So anything that happened in season 5 will have nothing to do with this story. (Except how CMC got their cutie mark. They have canon one)

Warning : This story's an alternate universe and is really crazy as hell. It crazy until crazy word isn't fit it anymore. It's become chaos now...

Warning : a lot of 4th wall breaking and referencing. Sharing universe with "To Love God - To Love Mortal" and "To Love Alicorn" but in the future and more crazy. And a continue story of "Crazy Future"

Warning : Don't take this story too serious or you might get headache from overthinking....

Warning : few number of love(Comments) might make comic page take long time to complete...

Keywords
female 1,005,609, anthro 191,058, comic 79,654, oc 72,228, mlp 67,722, unicorn 29,029, earth pony 12,186, rarity 6,656, applejack 5,687, nightmare rarity 270, little aj 8
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Type: Picture/Pinup
Published: 7 years, 5 months ago
Rating: General

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RileyRivers
7 years, 5 months ago
Okay, I've had enough of this goddamn bullshit! (smacks both AJs) Stop for five fucking seconds and let the Nightmare explain herself! Stupid sacks of shit!
Drag0nL0v3r
7 years, 5 months ago
Its a tactic used by many to add fluff to the length of a story.
RileyRivers
7 years, 5 months ago
I still don't like that Rarity's good old friend doesn't even give Rarity time to explain. Aside from Little AJ's comment on Rarity being corrupted, all it would take is Rarity getting the chance to explain that she was attacked and defended herself. But, the Apple Bitches decided that "No, she's evil, kill her".
DaftVenture
7 years, 5 months ago
Snorts. You honestly believe aj thinks rarity is corrupted? She would have killed her first.  Read some books man, this is classic character action. While we are on the subject, really? You're calling a /little girl/ a sack of shit because she is innocent enough to believe bad is always bad? Rarity is /literally/ a monster. I'd even call her a lich. WHY should anyone believe her? You are too attatched to one character to put yourself in the others' shoes.
RileyRivers
7 years, 5 months ago
No. Read the past two pages because you clearly skimmed them and missed the fact that Applejack thinks exactly that. Also, Little AJ took one look at Rarity and attacked her. Rarity didn't do anything but say hi to Little AJ. Even when Rarity begged Little AJ to stop, Little AJ still attacked.
DaftVenture
7 years, 5 months ago
Seriously... I give up. Vavacung, I love your art but damn man your readers are naive.

If you read more you'd realise that this is something that happens more often than not. Some new big challenge just when the hero thought they where finished, and not only that, but specifically a friend overreacting to a miss communication. Suspence gets built up but then in the end 99% of the time its the hero who has the misunderstanding. More than likely aj is razzing her, but even if that werent the case AJ has already spoken to her and judged her for herself. And my point stands. She wouldn't have cut the kid down, she'd have cut rarity's head off while the lady was deer-in-the-headlights. Clearly something else is going on here.

As for the kid. HELLO! OF COURSE SHE ATTACKED HER. she can SEE monsters. She /knows/ rarity is filled with dark power. What she is doing is the /logical/ choice. She is trying to HELP them become purified. Rarity IS filled with dark energy, and IS pretty much a monster. Even if she's a nice one, she's basically a corpse held together with evil energy. If it wasn't for the fact that rarity is the hero of this story, you'd be rooting for the pipsqueak to trash the BigBad. There's an entire separate comic that could be written about the hybrid reject who wants to prove herself, struggles every day to be a pittance of what her mother is, and suddenly gets her big break when the dreadlich comes to town and starts tricking all of her friends that its just a regular pony. THAT is little aj's shoes. She sees a an evil monster with an undeniable S-rank Boss Monster tag floating above it's head, and she's the one who's duty it is to... Not kill it, cure it. That's what she's been trying to do this entire time. Its rarity's misfortune that that would happen to kill her.
Drag0nL0v3r
7 years, 5 months ago
TL;DR
DaftVenture
7 years, 5 months ago
Why am I not suprised. *eyeroll*

I hope you keep making great stories with interesting characters, vavacung, even if your readers can only grasp the most superficial details of the stories
Drag0nL0v3r
7 years, 5 months ago
Oh get off your high horse. Arguing under a piece of fiction on the internet with a random person and acting superior. Tsk tsk, how pathetic.
KatoriaTheRed
7 years, 5 months ago
TL: DR huh? it took me less than 30 seconds to read all of that AND understand it from him. :P
DaftVenture
7 years, 5 months ago
Snorts. They must have blocked me because I can't reply.  Funny how they're just as guilty of arguing over fictional characters on the internet.

Honestly I'm just tired of everyong dogging on a little girl like she's a devil. 99% of the comemts here for the blast dozen or so pages have been some form of "beat the shit out of her". I mean seriously? She may be wrong but she IS still a child. Punishing her for attempting to do what she thinks is the right thing is wrong.
KatoriaTheRed
7 years, 5 months ago
A spanking or a whuppin is just fine for a child. Anyone who says otherwise hasn't been hit by a switch or a belt in their life and thinks its child abuse. lol. I have had to go out and get my OWN switch a lot while I was growing up...needless to say a little bit of that is all it takes to set em right. There's a fine line between a spanking/whuppin, or outright beating.
DaftVenture
7 years, 5 months ago
Oh don't get me wrong, I support spanking a child that's being bad. But she's not. Not only is she doing what she thinks is the right thing, she's doing it for good reasons. Punishing her would only serve to tell her not to do the right thing for fear of being punished. What she NEEDS is for her mother to tell her that not every boss monster is evil, monster or no.
KatoriaTheRed
7 years, 5 months ago
Well in this instance, to me..she still deserves a small whap to get her to be quiet enough for AJ to tell her to knock it off. Not an outright spanking or beating, but a smack that says. "You dolt, calm down." A quick tap of the sword hilt or flat of the blade to make her turn around in surprise. If she continues..then it's time for the spanking. lol. For disobeying. People jumping to conclusions and not listening to someone need to be knocked on their butt and forced to sit still while they're told the truth, sometimes. Some people don't quit or listen until their forced to do so.
KatoriaTheRed
7 years, 5 months ago
I'm hoping AJ beans Little AJ over the head with the hilt of that sword from behind. :P
ElfenSciuridae
7 years, 5 months ago
I'm in agreement with that.
evoyager
7 years, 5 months ago
if she does it will be because she deserves it. little AJ pretty much just admitted she's been attacking Rarity with that phrase.
Roxxas
7 years, 5 months ago
the way AJ holding her sword more likely it'll be the flat of the blade.

but yeah.
lurkingeek
7 years, 5 months ago
Fingers, toes and spontaneously-sprouted extra appendages crossed.
MaryRowland
7 years, 5 months ago
" KatoriaTheRed wrote:
I'm hoping AJ beans Little AJ over the head with the hilt of that sword from behind. :P

Well it be a good way to knock some sense into her.
ElfenSciuridae
7 years, 5 months ago
When will it ever end? Of course the answer is never, because all they want is drama to spice up their dull lives.
hikari100
7 years, 5 months ago
Those two are being so stupid.
Blazecooper64
7 years, 5 months ago
Oh for the love of Celestia!
Dragon316
7 years, 5 months ago
Umm, unless Spike happens to turn up in the next couple seconds, Rarity's a goner.
lurkingeek
7 years, 5 months ago
...and how do we know Equestrian dragons outgun whatever Dark Souls artifacts these two might have stashed underneath their hats? I'd much rather see Squiggletail take off the kid gloves and, oh, pelt them with every freakin' unbucked apple in the orchard, plus a close flyby with the moon. Which she moved *accidentally* a couple dozen pages back.
Dragon316
7 years, 5 months ago
Tbh, ya gotta think that Spike will appear outta nowhere to defend his wife.
lurkingeek
7 years, 5 months ago
Sure, he'd certainly *try* if he happened upon this debacle. I'm just not so sure his intervention=instawin. AJ in particular might give Spikester an ugly surprise or two.
Icepaw
7 years, 5 months ago
Well..little AJ just messed up...she admits to attacking Rarity and think her mother will side with her.  Should hopefully explain why Rarity tied the filly up to begin with
MiniAjax
7 years, 5 months ago
AJ looks surprised and seems to think in the last panel. Why would an evil Rarity make it that easy for her to kill her...not even trying, just closing her eyes and waiting for the hit. I guess Rarity just proofed herself.
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