I still remember that winter. I lived alone for the first time on my life. It was a room inside an old building, in a neighborhood that wasn't so nice.
It was all that I could pay with the money that my parents send me every week. They worked hard to make me be someone.
I used to study at the mornings and I worked part time at the afternoon. Even with that, the money was not enough so I had some hard days sometimes
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I didn't reach the agency at time that day, so I was not able to pick up the money for the week.
"That's a bad luck."
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I knew they would not open until monday, but I knew I could handle the situation. I was getting used to that.
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And then I saw her. A little girl dressed in some kind of uniform, trying to pass unnoticed in between the boxes, but without success. Her natural shine had too much contrast between the melancholic gray of the alley, and it was clear to me that she was not from here.
panel 1 3 years ago I still remember that winter. I lived alone for the first time on my life. It
don't worry.. usually I take parts from many translations when I think i don't like one part of one specific translation :P so, even if someone did one already It's usefull for me ^^
don't worry.. usually I take parts from many translations when I think i don't like one part of one
I still remember that winter, I lived alone for the first time of my life, it was a room in an old building in a not so nice neighborhood
It was all that I could pay, with the money that my parents sent me every week, they worked hard to help me be someone.
I used to study in the mornings and worked part time in the afternoon, even with that, the money was not enough so I had some hard days sometimes.
panel 2
that day I didn't reach the agency in time, so I was not able to pick up the money for the week.
"that's bad luck"
panel 3
I knew they will not open until monday, but i knew i could handle the situation, I was getting used to it.
panel 4
And then I saw her, a little girl, dressing some kind of uniform, trying to pass unnoticed between the boxes, but without success, her natural shine was too much contrast betweeen the melancholic gray of the alley, it was clear that she was not from here.
panel 1 3 years ago I still remember that winter, I lived alone for the first time of my life, it
I still remember that winter, to live on my own for the very first time, it was a room in a rundown apartment in bad part of city.
It was all i could afford at the time from my loving parents' hard worked earnings.
Even with that it wasn't enough so I worked part-time to supplement what I had left, but still it wasn't enough.
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The time i didn't reach the agency before closing time to pick up my paycheck for the week.
"That's not good...."
Panel 3
They will be closed for the weekend, but I can handle being penniless for the time being.
Panel 4
That's when I saw her.
A girl, in a some kind of uniform.
She looked like she was trying to hide in the boxes but couldn't. She has a kind of brightness that you could not ignore in this dim bleakness. I clearly knew she was not from here.
Panel 1 I still remember that winter, to live on my own for the very first time, it was a room in a
I still remember That winter, I lived alone for the first time on my life, I was in a room of an old building in a poor neighborhood.
It was all that I could pay with the money that my parents sent me every week, they worked hard for make of me a complete man.
I used to study at the mornings and worked part time at the afternoon, but some days the money was not enough, so had some hard days sometimes.
panel 2
That day I can't go to the agency at time, so i was not able to pick up the money of the week.
"What a bad luck..."
panel 3
I knew that They'll not open until Monday, But I knew I could handle the situation, I lived like that for a year and I was getting used.
panel 4
And then I saw her, a little girl, dressing some kind of uniform, trying to pass unnoticed between the boxes, but without success, her natural shine was too much between the melancholic gray of the alley, it was clear that she was not from here.
Yo tampoco soy tan bueno en el ingles pero quería ayudar :P
panel 1 3 years ago I still remember That winter, I lived alone for the first time on my life, I w
Here's my take, with a little bit of artistic licence in my word usage, but hopefully not changing the meaning or impact:
Panel 1:
3 years ago
I still remember that winter. I lived alone for the first time in my life; it was just a room in an old building in a not-so-nice neighborhood. (or 'neighbourhood' depending if you wish to use the Commonwealth/British dialect of English instead of American)
It was all that I could afford with the money that my parents sent me every week. They worked hard to make me be someone.
I used to study in the mornings and worked part-time during the afternoon, but even with that, the money was not enough to get by on, so I had some hard days sometimes.
Panel 2
That day, I didn't reach the agency in time, so I was not able to pick up my wages for the week.
"That's bad luck." (I might recommend saying "That's unfortunate." or even "Well that sucks!" instead)
Panel 3
I knew it would not open until Monday, but I knew I could handle the situation; I was used to going hungry for a weekend.
Panel 4
And then I saw her - a little girl, dressed in some kind of uniform, trying to pass unnoticed between the boxes, but without success; her natural glow was too much of a contrast against the melancholy gray ('grey' in Commonwealth English) of the alley. It was clear that she was not from these parts.
Here's my take, with a little bit of artistic licence in my word usage, but hopefully not changing t
