No need to apologize! I don't mind mistakes being pointed out :)
Looking at it the perspective on Desmond is a bit off, especially compared to Chani's tail. His tail and hind legs look too small. The size difference between the two has been challenging to keep consistent, especially with the different angles of each panel.
No need to apologize! I don't mind mistakes being pointed out :) Looking at it the perspective on D
thank you for understand i explain mor about, but english very bad sorry :( mebbe, if ground pushed more back, desmon seem more away? thank you for putting art, I enjoy still
thank you for understand i explain mor about, but english very bad sorry :( mebbe, if ground pushed
I'm planning on going over the whole comic again once it's done, I already know there are some issues in earlier pages. Gotta focus on getting the rest of the pages done though or I'll run out :)
I'm planning on going over the whole comic again once it's done, I already know there are some issue
its meant to make it look like hes several feet away from chani, when people are diffrent distances apart they look diffrent sizes, someone very close to you looks big, while someone several feet away appears smaller.
its meant to make it look like hes several feet away from chani, when people are diffrent distances
hello, thanking for answer I know of definition 'perspective', no need explain :) i just not seeing it, it not look like he 'several feet away from chani' to my eyes, problem there so there I comment
hello, thanking for answer I know of definition 'perspective', no need explain :) i just not seeing
I had somehow never realized just how long Chani's tail is. I mean, obviously Des' entire body is long and noodley, but it looks like Chani's tail weighs more than the entire rest of her body. n_n
That aside, this page is full of Feels and I don't know what to do with them. :c
I had somehow never realized just how long Chani's tail is. I mean, obviously Des' entire body is lo
It's very rarely straight, or completely in frame... and sometimes I draw it too short, but yep she has a massive tail. I really wanted to get this scenario in this comic where Chani picks up Desmond with her tail but it never really worked with the story.
I know, feels cruel to only be posting a page a week. There will be a kind of resolution soon though.
It's very rarely straight, or completely in frame... and sometimes I draw it too short, but yep she
Please tell me those aren't shrimp. I don't think I could take the stereotype. Not with all the feels. (particularly since it's an Australian stereotype, and you're New Zealand-der...dish...landien whatever the term is. Honestly these things can be so confusing. Like we call them Germans but the real name is Deutschland, so are they Deutschlanders?)
Please tell me those aren't shrimp. I don't think I could take the stereotype. Not with all the feel
It's a stereotype associated with Australia, even if it isn't true. That and Shrimp and Prawns are not the same thing :)
There's really no point in getting wound up over any though. I work in the tourism industry and we had a family asking why there weren't any sheep around. Apparently they were expecting sheep to be just wandering around everywhere, even in the middle of Christchurch. The other one is that we ALL love rugby...
It's a stereotype associated with Australia, even if it isn't true. That and Shrimp and Prawns are n
That's why it's a stereotype, it's wrong. And you can't tell you haven't heard that stupid fake accent saying "Let's put another shrimp on the barbie" ewwwwww it makes me sick hearing it in my head.
That's why it's a stereotype, it's wrong. And you can't tell you haven't heard that stupid fake acc