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page 3 of approx 15. we're not totally sure, it shouldn't be over 20.
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had a hell of a time doing this page, the amount of stuff twi wanted in it and the locations made me worry too much i think... hope it don't look too bad...

edit: made like 4 punctuation/diction corrections

Keywords
male 626,075, female 506,749, human 45,207, blush 23,717, nintendo 7,281, dinosaur 6,542, yoshi 3,357, brothers 3,221, condom 2,824, eggs 2,046, mario 1,609, drugs 1,189, mushroom 625, toad 375, baking 235, princess peach 205, luigi 199, batter 73, nintendo ds 59, nintendo 64 56, mario 64 23
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Type: Comic
Published: 2 years, 7 months ago
Rating: General

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specterHSC
2 years, 7 months ago
Looks good to me. Can't wait to see whats next. Is this like paper Mario where the toads break the 4th wall?
chocochu
2 years, 7 months ago
I thinks it looks fine chu great lines twi~ :3
Novusuna
2 years, 7 months ago
Art looks great to me, but some of the panels are a bit text heavy. It's all readable, but the text boxes end up covering up a lot.
twilightstormshi
2 years, 7 months ago
yeah, i agree. we have some kinks left to work out in our process, but at least they're getting less major over time. we reached a point where the whole plot background had to be explained on this page, pretty much, so just hearing it's readable is a relief
johalt
2 years, 7 months ago
Honestly, though, their style of text boxes work for it. After all, you still see a lot of the background through them.
BronyXXI
2 years, 7 months ago
Hi! Its-a me. Mario!
DevianMJL
2 years, 7 months ago
Let's just say it, Yoshi needs some Love...seriously he does...
Frankfurt24
2 years, 7 months ago
I will admit, ive never seen a comic page as text heavy as this one before...but in all honesty, I see nothing amiss really.
NeksusCat
2 years, 7 months ago
That dialog is brilliant! XD <3
02darkness
2 years, 7 months ago
Loving the toadstool dialogue! Really eager to see some yoshi loving; he could use a bit more rule34 :3
Tlaren
2 years, 7 months ago
I love how the Toads are just bullshitting constantly.  Gives them some real dimensionality as characters.
ShinyhunterLobo
2 years, 7 months ago
dimensionality but not likability, they're useless little shits and ramble on and on, not to mention their voice is enough to make you want to rip your eardrums out
ruink
2 years, 7 months ago
so glad I don't make them irritating like that in Mario Project.....
TrueHiddenS
2 years, 7 months ago
Text heavy? Yes.
Hilarious? Yes.
My kind of comic!
SurferOtter
2 years, 7 months ago
Toads = Internet. We're all thinking what their saying.
zarek13
2 years, 7 months ago
Dooooo it....
GarretMvahd
2 years, 7 months ago
Hey Yoshi, eat Mario and turn him into an egg, then throw him down the nearest warp pipe
SwinkDink
2 years, 7 months ago
I love the dialogue here!
Kalibran
2 years, 7 months ago
She's gonna ride that yoshi.
MedleyChimera
2 years, 7 months ago
So if this is gonna be Yosh+Peach are we just gonna see the usual black silhouettes and a link to kitchan?
kitsuneyoukai
2 years, 7 months ago
yeah its yoshi+peach :3 i'll have to be links to kitchan, since peach is human :v. i could MAYBE (depends how hard it is to do) do a version where peach is wearing a cat suit... might have to check if that is allowed even then though...
edit: my theory is that since in my version of the catsuit, it's like part of you, so there wouldnt be a hole or whatever :v so maybe it'd be allowed~
PrysmTKitsune
2 years, 7 months ago
...or you could have yoshi egg her and make peach yoshi....just saying >.> i know you wont do it but im sorry ive just got myself thinking what peach would look like as a yoshi lately...she is cute in that cat suit though...and you could just 'close the hood' on it so to speak for IB so shes totaly feline
GreenReaper
2 years, 7 months ago
If the character is actually human inside the suit, it counts, I'm afraid. Otherwise we'd have people in catsuits out the wazoo. :-)

Conversely Shy Guys are allowed unless there is an indication they're actually human under the mask, because the assumption is that they're not.

If the character physically transforms as a result of putting the suit on, such that it becomes an integral part of them and the resulting character would normally meet our policies, that would work, as long as the transformation happened prior to any sexy stuff.

Probably the most sensible thing to do is just to draw your intended vision and post a preview of the bits that can't be shown here.
PrysmTKitsune
2 years, 7 months ago
as much as i like porn kitsu, if you stoped right now id be totaly happy cause this page made me laugh my head off...laughter is just as good as sex anyday in my book [and in my case less rare] and if ya think about it there very similar, they both leave you short of breath, sore if you do them too long, make you feel really good, and make you blush if they happen int he wrong situation....
kitsuneyoukai
2 years, 7 months ago
then twi did a fucking amazing job with writing it :b
Pokeblue
2 years, 7 months ago
I'm reading this at 3am in the morning where I'm at, and coupled with this page and your comment. I almost laughed loud enough to wake my family, if I didn't manage to get my hand over my mouth to stop myself anyway. XD
Charem
2 years, 7 months ago
I know how it can be difficult to write in a plot efficiently for a comic like this without dumping too much text into it and cluttering it.  A bit of that was done here, but it's certainly alright.  :3  I like where this is going and the cooking scenes are adorable~
PURRfect93
2 years, 7 months ago
*insert another comment about the roads talking* XD I enjoy that quite a bit :3
ImaginaryVoice
2 years, 7 months ago
Oh, so this isnt the one where Yoshi saves Mario, Luigi and Wario.

So in this one, Yoshi literally did ALL the work?
twilightstormshi
2 years, 7 months ago
it's the same game (mario 64 DS), but an AU where you don't have to save any of the others and can beat the game entirely as yoshi
ImaginaryVoice
2 years, 7 months ago
Huh, neato.
Pokeblue
2 years, 7 months ago
This is probably because I don't active search for much artwork regarding the toadstools, but this is seriously the first time I've ever seen them so bluntly honest. XD

Anyway, I really like this page, it was a little more text-heavy than I'm use to, but I think it helped carry the message across.
snofox
2 years, 7 months ago
screw the cake, let's see them make a pie... cream pie ;3
DracoPotens
2 years, 7 months ago
Wether this is set in Paper Mario or Mario 64 confuses me slightly, but it doesn't really matter as Yoshi looks so cute in that apron<3
Also love the sass all of the Toad's have, I enjoy that personality style...and Jon Tron confirmed for comic? XD
twilightstormshi
2 years, 7 months ago
in my head, every game in the mario franchise takes place in the same universe, and all the characters from every game exist simultaneously in that universe, so that's what's going on here

in paper mario (the 64 one), all the toads' names end in "T." or a T sound and are puns like Tayce T. and Zess T. Jon T. is supposed to be the word jaunty, which means adventurous and eager
DracoPotens
2 years, 7 months ago
That's riiiight, thank you for reminding me about those Toads from Paper Mario having the T. at the end of their name. I played Paper Mario for the first time over last summer, and it was so fun~ What a clever little detail you put in there. (I still think Jon Tron would have been hilarious though XD)
zacharynl
2 years, 7 months ago
New favorite comic already!
LehChipmoonk
2 years, 7 months ago
Sounds like the toads are expecting peach to have fun with Yoshi right in front of them.   ( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°)
Jewelwriter
2 years, 7 months ago
Sometimes, the visual jokes are just as funny as the text given by the chars. *Chuckling at Yoshi's*
twilightstormshi
2 years, 7 months ago
yeah, we always talk about what jokes we might be able to put on the page, both visual and texual ones
Jewelwriter
2 years, 7 months ago
Yea.  It makes me think Yoshi is thinking [Yea.  He's "Super" Mario, but his shroom is in need of power ups more than him.]
Rhysion
2 years, 7 months ago
Lots of dialog, but I rather like the toads here! They've got character.
necrontyr47
2 years, 7 months ago
Am I the only one who's imagining the voices of the Toads's as the thugs from
the Batman Arkham games? XD
Kickinthehead
2 years, 7 months ago
hahaha i feel like i read the toads like a gangster would say it XD
twilightstormshi
2 years, 7 months ago
it's inspired by the way kit's family talk with each other. i live with him and his family in a fairly small city, and we have other boarders in the house too, and we all gossip and bullshit with each other frequently. i thought that style fit the situation and fit character of the toads too
necrontyr47
2 years, 7 months ago
Oh ok. Still, can't help but imagine those voices. Just finished Arkham City lol
tallnbuilt
2 years, 7 months ago
Coming within 3 pages "Too Hot For Inkbunny" with links in the description!
KittyGuardian
2 years, 7 months ago
Most of the comments are about the quantity of dialog in this page. Too much. As much as it's needed. Not care.
But everybody's avoiding the elephant in the room. That being the incredible amount of...

.........TITS............

Tits combined bigger then her head ... altho I guess they often are...
Who wants to see a tit job for Twilight's distant feral cousin from the incredibly gifted princess Peach?
tallnbuilt
2 years, 7 months ago
That is my gripe about this comic. Not loyal to the source body type. Only acceptable deviation in mind is aging characters to sexual maturity.
KittyGuardian
2 years, 7 months ago
What? There is a source body type really? I have never seen Peachés body at all .... She has always been in another castle ... let alone seeing her naked .... or giving a tit job...!!!
SparkyTheFox
2 years, 7 months ago
Yoshi x Peach, and a comic that's actually text heavy. I'm enjoying this more and more.
crazyon
2 years, 7 months ago
I'm surprised nobody realised Jon T is suppose to be referencing Jon Tron
twilightstormshi
2 years, 7 months ago
it's not. =P it's supposed to be a pun on the word jaunty using the style of toad naming in the paper mario games
cayo00048
2 years, 6 months ago
...
oddly, when reading this for the first time, I am watching the second episode of starcade...
ComradeSOD
2 years, 7 months ago
I love the comic so far but I hate the font.
ruink
2 years, 7 months ago
that's quite the interesting way you've drawn the Mushroom Retainers  and of course, Peach usually wears a dark pink thong
microbuss
2 years, 7 months ago
oh I'd totally bang the Princess hehe
ok ok Yoshi too *evil*
AkeaGrommet
2 years, 7 months ago
The princess is missing her blue bauble on the chest in the panel where she's stirring the cake batter. It may have fallen into the batter, at which point we'll have a Surprise Cake!  Cue Little Rascal footage!
kitsuneyoukai
2 years, 7 months ago
its covered by an apron is why. :P
AkeaGrommet
2 years, 7 months ago
But... but... but...Yoshi's wearing the apron.  She said so in an earlier panel.
kitsuneyoukai
2 years, 7 months ago
i mean they both are wearing one, it wasn't very clear sadly :v
AquaShade
2 years, 6 months ago
the toads.... I lol'd. xD
very nice comic. Yoshi always deserves more love
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