Depends on whether you charge by the word, paragraph, or page. My suggestion, charge $5-$10 per paragraph, depending on how great the wordsmithing your customers want the project.
The way I do story commissions, based on what the customer is after, I give said customer an estimate. If the customer will accept it, I start a draft, and then I tally up the total, I usually have the customer pay for the draft, so he/she can revise and proof it, however the customer would do their stories?
That said, if you want to start commissioning stories, why not commission drafts/abstracts? That way, when the customer decides to expand on the story and revise it, it will be worth it in the end. This kind of writing commission I plan to do, is known as creative consultation. They'll pay you to help add and refine details to their ideas. You can charge them a flat fee to go over their abstracts and provide them ideas to plots and maybe ways to describe settings and characters.
Depends on whether you charge by the word, paragraph, or page. My suggestion, charge $5-$10 per para