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MrDumbass

Stymied

I'm thinking about the later chapters of Duke's Dilemma.  I'm not sure it's going in a "good" direction in terms of storytelling.  I don't feel like it's quite as tense or gripping as I think it should be.

Then again, maybe that's just me being my own worst critic.

Either way, I can't seem to get much going for Chapter 10.  I'll be thinking on it for a while, though.
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