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Chapter 3 of dragon mating please read and review

How to discipline your Dragon

Chapter 3 of dragon mating

inspired by Dragon Mating Season a fanfic by  King Spike Rules

[ ]s are comments and narrative seen at the bottom/top of the panel/page. ( ) means speak
{ } means thoughts

Everypony are anthro ponies with hands and feet and all the girls have giant breasts (including the Cutie Mark Crusaders just not as big as the others but they are big)

Cover:

Rarity standing doing a sexy pose holding a whip wearing an all red leather dominatrix outfit (open cup bra and crotchless panties), mask, and cap (like Cynder from Girl’s Night Out)

Page 1:

the sun shining over Golden Oaks Library

[the sun rises on another beautiful day in Ponyville]

Panel 2:

Twilight’s bedroom as the sun rays shines through the window shades

[but for Spike and Twilight it is nothing compared to last night]

Panel 3:

Spike lays on the bed as a shadowy figure stands next to him

Figure: (wake up my number one lover)

Panel 4:

Spike continues to lay and snore on the bed as the shadowy figure sit on the bed

Figure: (hehe...okay Spike, I hoped I would wake you up this way)

Page 2:

Panel 1:

The figure stood over Spike, leaned forward, and planted a gentle kiss onto his lips

Panel 2:

the figure and Spike continue to kiss as Spike starts to sit up

Panel 3:

The figure separates from Spike as he starts to opens his eyes

Spike: (aahhh...good morning Twi...)

Panel 4:

Spike becomes wide eyed and blushes

Spike: (oh holy guacamole)

Page 3:

Panel 1:

Twilight, dripping wet with a small towel wrapped around her body and smiling

Twilight: (Like your wake up call?)

Page 4:

Panel 1:

Spike with a cocky smile as Twilight smiles and rolls her eyes

Spike: (If that is going to be a normal thing from now on, yeah)

Panel 2:

Twilight stands up and walks over to her dresser

Twilight: (Well, you should get dressed, Rarity invited us over for breakfast)

Panel 3:

Twilight rummages through the drawers and picks some sexy bra and panties

Panel 4:

Twilight lets the towel fall to the floor, revealing her nice, round yet firm flank

Page 5:

Panel 1:

Twilight bends down, Spike behind her still on the bed, stares, smiles and licks his lips

Panel 2:

Spike smiles as he reached out and squeezes one of her cheeks in his clawed hand, Twilight pleasantly surprised starts blushing and gently moaning

Panel 3:

Twilight becomes shocked, jumping a little and blushes as Spike spanks her

Twilight: (woo)

Panel 4:

Twilight turns around, covers her ass with her hands and gives Spike a sly smiling glare, Spike has a cocky grin

Twilight: (You’re a naughty boy)

Spike: (I'm naughty, you show me that nice, sexy flank and expect me NOT to act)

Page 6:

Panel 1:

Twilight puts on her bra and panties while watching Spike who has a cocky smile

Twilight: (Why don't you go shower and get dressed so we can get going)

Panel 2:

Spike gets up from the bed and walks past Twilight

Spike: (alright, alright)

Panel 3:

a naked Spike starts walking out, his tail swaying back and forth as Twilight smiles and stares lustfully at his ass

Spike: (oh by the way Twilight)

Panel 4:

Spike turns his head, smirks, looks back at Twilight, and gently pats his butt with his tail, Twilight smiles, turns her head, cups cheeks, and blushes

Spike: (do you like the view)

Page 7:

Panel 1:

Spike taking a shower

Panel 1.5:

Spike gets dressed

Panel 2:

Spike and Twilight leave the library

Panel 3:

the two walk through a market and look at some of the goods

Spike: (seems everything might be back to normal, not a single lewd thought)

Panel 4:

the two walk through the market as Twilight becomes shocked and blushes

Spike: (guess I should thank Miss Twilight’s private lessons in Sex-ed)

Twilight: (SPIKE!!!! n-not while we’re in public)

Page 8:

Panel 1:

Spike and Twilight reach Rarity’s boutique, Spike smirks and Twilight blushes and pouts

Spike: (alright, sorry it's just so much fun to tease you right now)

Panel 2:

Twilight knocks on the door

Panel 3:

Rarity in her normal outfit opening the door and welcoming them

Rarity: (Oh, welcome darlings)

Panel 4:

Rarity steps aside and allows the two in

Rarity: (Please come in)

Twilight and Spike: (Thank you)

Page 9:

Panel 1:

Rarity offers the two a seat

Rarity: (have a seat while I go and make us some tea and snacks)

Panel 2:

As Rarity is in the other room, getting there drinks ready, Twilight sees Spike is acting nervous as he sits in his chair

Twilight: (Spike, are you alright)

Spike: (I-I'm not sure what I should tell Rarity)

Panel 3:

Twilight is confused as Spike looks towards the kitchen where Rarity was

Twilight: (Tell her what)

Spike: (About last night)

Panel 4:

Twilight smiles as she pats his knee a thought bubble of her giggling above Twilight

Twilight: (Don't worry. I'm pretty sure she'd understand when you tell her)

Thought bubble: (isn’t he in for a surprise)

Page 10:

Panel 1:

Rarity enters the room with a tray full of small sandwiches, boiled eggs, gems, a few glasses of ice tea, and put it down on the table

Rarity: (Bon Appetite. Oh and Spike darling)

Spike: (Yeah?)

Panel 2:

everyone is sitting at the table enjoying the tea and snacks, Spike acting a bit nervous

Rarity: (I need help with one of my dresses, could you come by tonight to help me out)

Spike: (S-sure)

Panel 3:

The three continue to enjoy the sandwiches and spike eats a few gems

Panel 4:

Twilight and Spike leave as Rarity opens the door for them

Twilight: (thanks for having us over Rarity)

Rarity:(thanks for coming darlings and see you tonight Spikey-Wikey)

Spike: (right)

Page 11:

Panel 1:

Rarity smirks as she closes the door

Rarity: (soon Spikey-Wikey)

Panel 2:

Rarity walks to a closet

Panel 3:

Rarity opens the closet doors

Panel 4:

Pulls out a red dog collar with a tag that says Spike on it

Rarity: (very soon)

Page 12:

Rarity admires the collar as we see inside the closet there is a mannequin displaying a red leather dominatrix outfit (open cup bra, crotchless panties, elbow length gloves, and garter belts that clip on to rubber stockings) and dominatrix mask, on the wall next to it is glass case display of paddles, whip, chains, strap-ons, masks and feathers

Rarity: (you will be mine)

Page 13:

Panel 1:

the moon begins to rise behind the golden oaks library

[later that day...]

Panel 2:

Twilight sitting on the couch with a pile of books near her and reading a book as Spike nervously paces back and forth

Twilight: (Spike, calm down. It's going to work out)

Spike: (How, How can I just tell her that we can't be a thing now)

Panel 3:

Twilight looks up from her book as Spike looks at her and thinks

Twilight: (Did you ever tell her that you liked her in the first place)

Spike: (Well, no)

Twilight: (Well, then do you have to tell her about us)

Panel 4:

Spike perks up as Twilight continues to read her book

Spike: (N-no, I guess not)

Twilight: (Good, now you should get going before she wonders where you are)

Page 14:

Panel 1:

Spike starts to leaving the library

Spike: (you’re right see ya later Twilight)

Panel 2:

Spike takes a deep breath as walks the streets at night

Spike: (what a perfect night)

Panel 3:

Spike walks down the street, he notice a lot of mares were still walking around as they closed up shop or hanging out with their friends

Spike: (especially now that I don’t...)

Panel 4:

Spike holds his heads groaning a bit

Spike: (oh no, not again)

Page 15:

Panel 1:

Cheerilee 69s with Big Mac as an 18 year old Button Mash gets a titty fuck by his mother

Button Mash: (c’mon there’s always room for one more player, right)

Big Mac: (eeyup)

Page 16:

Panel 1:

Haakim fucking Amira while Dr. Hooves fucks Octavia

Amira: (no join us Spike the magnificent)

Octavia: (we always need someone to really pound us)

Page 17:

Panel 1:

Zecora, Sunset Shimmer, Trixie, and Vinyl Scratch all completely naked doing sexy poses

Zecora: (don’t you see Spike baby, we can be your personal orgy. We are all nothing but giant sluts, so come over here and slam our butts)

Page 18:

Panel 1:

Spike runs towards Rarity’s boutique

Spike: (aaahhhhh)

Panel 2:

Spike knocks on the door

Panel 3:

Spike is a little nervous as Rarity opens the door

Spike: (Oh, Spike. Welcome...)

Panel 4:

Spike gently pushes past Rarity

Page 19:

Panel 1:

Spike closes the door behind him panting heavily and leans against the door. Rarity looks a little worried

Spike: (M-my imagination was getting out of hand again, is it out of guilt)

Rarity: (Spike, a-are you alright)

Panel 2:

Spike acts a bit nervous while Rarity is confused

Spike: (Ummm, Rarity. I need to tell you something)

Rarity: (Yes, what is it Darling)

Panel 3:

Spike is nervous as Rarity acts upset and dramatic

Spike: (I-I mated with Twilight)

Rarity: (Spike, you mean to tell me you gave up on us)

Panel 4:

Spike becomes even more nervous as Rarity’s eyes water and her horn glows

Spike: (No, of course not. It was just...)

Page 20:

Panel 1:

Rarity magical pulls up her drama couch, lays on it, and fakes crying

Rarity: (Oh, My Spikey-Wikey gave up on me)

Spike: (No, Rarity. It's not that)

Panel 2:

Rarity continues to fake cry but secretly smiles, it goes unnoticed by Spike as he pleads for forgiveness

Spike: (I'll do anything to make it up to you)

Rarity: (anything)

Panel 3:

Spike begins to relax as Rarity lifts her head up with watery eyes gently sniffs

Spike: (yes anything)

Rarity: (alright you can start by...)

Panel 4:

Rarity sits up on the couch with a wicked smile magical levitates a blindfold, a collar with a chain attached to it and a pair of handcuffs, Spike starts to sweat a bit

Rarity: (putting these on)

Spike: (‘gulp’)

Page 21:

Panel 1:

Rarity and Spike climbing some stairs. Spike wearing the blindfold, collar, and has his claws handcuffed behind his back as Rarity leads him up and holds the chain attached to his collar

Spike: (Ummm, Rarity. I'm not so sure about this?)

Rarity: (Just relax and come with me)

Panel 2:

They reach the top of the stairs and Rarity opens the door

Panel 3:

Rarity leads him to the middle of the bedroom and uncuffs him

Rarity: (now stay here)

Panel 4:

Rarity starts getting undressed revealing her naked chest

Rarity: (and don’t do anything unless I say so)

Page 22:

Panel 1:

a naked Rarity puts on the red elbow length glows

Panel 2:

Rarity puts on the red stocking

Panel 3:

Rarity puts on the crotchless panties and open cup bra

Panel 4:

Rarity puts on the dominatrix mask

Page 23:

Panel 1:

Rarity wearing her red leather dominatrix outfit (open cup bra, crotchless panties, elbow length gloves, and garter belts that clip on to rubber stockings) and dominatrix mask, holding a riding crop

Rarity: (get ready spike it’s fun time)

Page 24:

Panel 1:

Spike stands there trying to remove his blindfold

Spike: (Rarity?)

Panel 2:

Rarity stops him by slapping his butt with a riding crop

Rarity: (I didn't tell you to remove the blindfold)

Panel 3:

Rarity walks up and whispers in Spike’s ear as he blushes, her breasts pressing against his back

Rarity: (now, be a dear and strip yourself naked for me and no questions)

Spike: (b-but why)

Panel 4:

Rarity slaps his butt again with the riding crop

Rarity: (I said no questions)

Page 25:

Panel 1:

Spike removes his shirt

Panel 1.5:

Spike removes his pants

Panel 2:

Rarity admires Spike’s naked body

Rarity: (my little Spikey-Wikey ain’t so little anymore)

Panel 3:

Rarity gives him a handjob as he moans

Rarity: (especially in this department)

Spike: (aahhh)

Panel 4:

Rarity is a little pissed and squeaked his cock a bit and causes him to groan a bit

Rarity: (someone hasn’t learned their lesson about not doing anything unless I say so)

Spike: (awk)

Page 26:

Panel 1:

Rarity removes the blindfold and Spike becomes wide eyed and gasps

Rarity: (you need to learn a little discipline)

Spike: (‘gasp’ Rar-)

Panel 2:

Rarity puts a ball gag on Spike and uses her magic to levitate a pair of shackles

Rarity: (this ought to keep you quiet)

Panel 3:

the shackles clamp around his wrists as they are pulled above his head as Rarity pulls the chain up

Rarity: (you need to learn, to talk only when your mistress says so darling)

Panel 4:

Spike hangs from the ceiling as Rarity taps a riding crop in her hands

Rarity: (and will now make that painfully obvious)

Page 27:

Panel 1:

Rarity slaps all over Spike’s body with the riding crop

Panel 2:

Rarity slaps all over Spike’s body with the riding crop

Rarity: (take this)

Panel 3:

Rarity spanks Spike with a paddle

Panel 4:

Rarity spanks Spike with a paddle

Rarity: (and this)

Page 28:

Panel 1:

Rarity uses a whip all over Spike

Rarity: (and finally this)

Panel 2:

Rarity uses a whip all over Spike

Rarity: (haha this is so much fun for me darling)

Panel 3:

Rarity grabs the chain and lowers an exhausted Spike

Rarity: (and by the looks of your big friend)

Panel 4:

Spike laying on the floor his hands still above his head in shackles as Rarity stands above him

Rarity: (you’re having just as much fun)

Page 29:

Panel 1:

Rarity stands above Spike and rubs his cock with one of her feet still in the stocking

Rarity: (so let’s continue with our fun)

Panel 2:

Spike moans through the ballgag as Rarity continues the footjob

Rarity: (so glad you like this Spike darling, but don’t you dare cum ‘til I say so)

Panel 3:

Spike cums as Rarity wickedly smiles and continues the footjob

Rarity: (now what did I just tell you)

Panel 4:

Rarity wickedly smiles and uses her magic to levitate Spike and a small ring clamp

Rarity: (I guess another punishment is in order)

Page 30:

Panel 1:

Rarity uses her magic to remove Spike’s ballgag and shackles and hovers him above a bed

Panel 2:

Spike lays on the bed handcuffs magical appear on the four corners of the bed

Spike: (what are you going to do to me)

Panel 3:

Spike sweats as he gets chained to the bed spread eagle style and Rarity steps up and clamps the ring clamp on his cock

Rarity: (punishing you by not letting you cum again until I say so)

Panel 4:

Rarity swings a legs around Spike, straddling him in a 69 position his cock between her breasts

Rarity: (so you might want to start making me happy)

Page 31:

Panel 1:

Spike moans as Rarity titty fucks him in a 69 position

Rarity: (cause I ain’t going to stop anytime soon)

Panel 2:

Spike moans as Rarity titty fucks him and blows on his cock in a 69 position wiggling her butt in his face

Spike: (oh dear Celestia)

Panel 3:

Spike licks Rarity’s pussy as she titty fucks him in a 69 position

Rarity: (now you’re getting it Spikey-Wikey)

Panel 4:

Spike buries his face into Rarity’s pussy as she gives him a titty fuck and blow job in a 69 position

Page 32:

Panel 1:

Spike buries his face into Rarity’s pussy as she gives him a titty fuck in a 69 position

Rarity: (ooh Spike I think I’m close)

Panel 2:

Rarity cums in Spike’s face

Rarity: (aaaahhh)

Panel 3:

Spike still chained to the bed exhausted as Rarity turns around to face him still straddling his waist

Spike: (oh thank goodness)

Rarity: (oh don’t think your punishment is over yet darling)

Panel 4:

Rarity straddles Spike by the waist her pussy hovering over his cock, Spike looking shocked

Rarity: (I won’t be happy, until you claim my virginity)

Spike: (vir-virginity)

Page 33:

Panel 1:

Rarity starts fucking Spike

Rarity: (and we can cum together)

Panel 2:

Rarity fucks Spike and fondles her breasts

Panel 3:

Rarity fucks Spike, fondles her breasts, and licks her nipples

Spike: (Ooohhh gawd)

Panel 4:

Rarity fucks Spike and fondles her breasts

Rarity: (Spike I’m close)

Page 34:

Panel 1:

Rarity fucks Spike

Spike: (Rarity, I-I need to cum)

Rarity: (beg me)

Panel 2:

Spike begs as Rarity fucks him

Spike: (P-Please Rarity...)

Rarity: (Call me Mistress)

Spike: (P-p-please Mistress. Let me cum)

Panel 3:

Rarity fucks Spike as her horn and the clamp glows

Rarity: (since you asked so nicely)

Panel 4:

Rarity fucks Spike with the ring clamp now gone

Rarity: (y-you may cum now, I’m close too)

Spike: (th-thank you Mistress)

Page 35:

Panel 1:

Rarity and Spike fucking each other as they cum together

Both of them: (AAAAHHH)

Page 36:

Panel 1:

Rarity and Spike next to each other on the bed exhausted and panting, Spike still chained to the bed

Rarity: (you were ...incredible... Spike)

Panel 2:

Rarity lays next to Spike rubbing his chest

Rarity: (I'm sorry Spike-Wikey. But I always wanted to try that)

Panel 3:

Rarity kisses Spike’s cheek as he blushes

Spike: (No, it was kinda fun)

Panel 4:

Rarity snuggles close to Spike’s chest as she smiles wickedly and Spike blushes

Spike: (But could you unhook me now)

Rarity: (no, I don’t think so)

Page 37:

Panel 1:

Rarity straddling Spike by the waist smiling wickedly as Spike still chained to the bed sweats and blushes, their faces are extremely close to each other

Rarity: (why should I, when we still have plenty of toys to use and ALL night to use them)

Spike: (‘gulp’)

[this dragon is tamed]

Back cover 1:

Celestia naked, ball gagged with her butt in the air with her wrists tied to her ankles getting her ass paddled by luna wearing a dark blue dominatrix outfit (open cup bra, crotchless panties, elbow length gloves, and garter belts that clip on to rubber stockings) and dominatrix mask

Luna: (take your spankings properly dear sister. We could be fucking that big, long cock of your student’s assistant if it wasn’t for your royal screw up)

Back cover 2:

Rainbow Dash on a cloud hover over Ponyville naked, fondling her breasts and masturbating

[to be continued in the next chapter Rainbow Dash’s game of extreme PDA]
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Added: 10 years, 4 months ago
 
zyfer
10 years, 4 months ago
Haven't read the original Fanfic but will likely read in the next few days.

Comic sounds amazing and would love to read. Seems you captured a lot of the personality. Love Back Cover 1's Idea very much.

*proceeds to look for chap 1 and 2*
RainbowSnake
10 years, 3 months ago
Hey Cheftrim29 big fan of your work. I wont to write comics for Palcomix like you but i don't know how to get there attention. Can you help?  
cheftrim29
10 years, 3 months ago
email bbmbbf@gamil.com and he will give you the details you want
RainbowSnake
10 years, 3 months ago
i tried that yesterday but so far nothing  
cheftrim29
10 years, 3 months ago
calm down it is alright he gets swamped sometimes with emails specifically one of current or future comics on the main site like mine try putting an all bold + capital letters in the subject line he attends to look at those first if you don't hear anything within say two weeks. just and private message him or give him a shout on his ink bunny page and he contact you as soon as he can
RainbowSnake
10 years, 3 months ago
hes a member of ink bunny too, that perfect thank you.
btw I'm going to post chapter one for my erotic fan fiction base on adventure time soon. I like you to read it when it gets posted.
RainbowSnake
10 years, 2 months ago
i just read i read this and i got to say this is your best work yet. you sure know how to paint a picture with words. i love the build you did and not just rush to the main event. i love how you put Spike on a guilt trip for having sex with twilight and feeling like he be trade Rarity to the point were he would do anything for her and i mean anything. i cant wait to see this as a comic    
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