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VertFonsay

Proof of Life

*ahem*

"Jimmy Langston lay on his bed, staring at the game system in his hands but not really seeing it. His mind had wandered far away, to the events of the previous weekend. It almost seemed like a dream, especially since no one had spoken of them afterwards, even when his little sister Nicole had had her squirrel friend Krista over. They’d both ignored Jimmy, as if they hadn’t ganged up with their other friends, Andi and Alicia, and tied him to his bed in order to play with the thirteen-year-old rabbit’s body. Jimmy shivered as he remembered how Alicia had played with his cock and brought him to orgasm, despite his best efforts at resisting, how he had shot his load in full view of his sister and her friends – and how Alicia had taken the rest of his climax into her mouth like an old pro. But that wasn’t even the part he couldn’t take his mind off. No, that had come later, when an unexpected turn of events had lead to his own sister climbing atop him and taking both their virginities, riding her brother until they’d shuddered through climax together. He’d expected things to be different, but you’d never guess that anything had happened from the way Nikki was acting. He was almost starting to wonder if it really was a dream."

I just wanted to prove I really am working on stories and that I haven't just vanished. That there is the first paragraph from a story I'm writing that is currently called "Practice", though I'm not sure I like that name so much. I'm sorry it's taking so long, I've just got other stuff going on that's taking up my time. :(

I'll try to have it ready for you guys to see as soon as I can.
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Added: 6 years, 9 months ago
 
BoltCinderflame
6 years, 9 months ago
no worries, im sure youll be back soon enugh with another awesome story for us :)
fishface
6 years, 9 months ago
Echo what he said :)
Life takes time, it's hard to fit things like writing in. Thanks for all that you have done/are doing/will do!
Arious
6 years, 9 months ago
hmmm, good names you say?  that all depends on what you wish to name it.  You could choose to name it something like say...  Bunny love.  If that doesn't work something else could work as easily or better.
VertFonsay
6 years, 9 months ago
Ultimately I think the content of the story is much more important than the label, I mean look at Just Visiting, before he vanished from the site, he named all his submissions with random letters, and he was still really popular. :3
Arious
6 years, 9 months ago
True enough, I usually go with a name relevant with the story though.  Makes it a lot easier to remember what the story is a bout and helps me get into the mood as I write it.
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